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    So, Fiesta Equestria...

    I'm going and hopefully the missus too. I'll try to pull off an outfit a la gender bent Rarity.

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    To my watchers

    Of my few works that folks like to read, I want to narrow my focus to one  in particular since I've been gone for awhile. I'll still update the others, say once a month, while the main one updates twice a month. So, which to do?

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    So, the pitter patter of little hooves...

    Pretty much my reason for poofing. *coughonceagaincough* Little colt running about.

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    ZZzzZZzz...

    Well THIS was embarrassing. I hadn't expected to be away from you all for so long, but I am back! So all the worries can be put away before I tell Pinkie and she fixes that frown PERMANENTLY. I hear she was talking to Twilight Sparkle about some odd gas that puts a smile on everyone's face. I wonder how's that coming along. Oh, and another thing, despite being terribly late, happy Christmakwanzakah, merry hearth's warming, and happy new year! On a side note, I'm LOVING the Silver Spoon banner!

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  • 99w, 2d
    This should go without saying..

    But, the new filly? I like her! I love her accent. And I won't be home until tomorrow, so no update yet. But, I might do something on my new filly of interest!

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Sequel of Moving On: Silver Spoon's Story

Edited by- Lewie!

Many thanks to Steel Resolve & Comma-Kazie

Having faced and surpassed the challenge of making new friends, Silver Spoon's tranquil and simplistic world comes to an abrupt halt once family obligations begin to lurk in her shadow. With the help of the crusaders, Silver Spoon and co. uncover a Silver family secret that could possibly shift the fate of all of Ponyville.

First Published
25th Aug 2012
Last Modified
7th Apr 2013
#1 · 112w, 3d ago · 1 · · Investigation Squad! ·

Huh, wasn't expecting a sequel after all this time. Interesting. I liked the original, so let's see how this goes. :duck:

Hmm, I don't remember anything about Cheerilee being Scootaloo's sister in the first story, though.

#2 · 112w, 3d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

there wasn't but like you say I'm going to wait and watch and see what happens

#3 · 112w, 3d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

>>1158012 You see, It was one of those points that was suppose to be in the original, but it felt out of place so I didn't mention it. :duck:

#4 · 112w, 3d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

Which story is this a sequel to? I should probably read that first :twilightsheepish:

#5 · 112w, 3d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

>>1160694 This here~ Moving On Please enjoy! :raritywink:

#7 · 112w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

I chuckled at the Phineas and Ferb reference. I also think I know what your hinting at with Mac's order.

Last thing, when are you gonna continue Scootaloo's Story? If you plan to continue it, that is. :twilightsheepish:

#8 · 112w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

>>1165136 I will get around to it eventually. :duck:

#9 · 112w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Twitht'th accent ith a bit hard to read but that makth it tho much more fun to read.

"Lean on her, girls."

"Headache with pictures!"

Well, this was a lot more entertaining than I thought it was going to be. I approve of this.

#10 · 112w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Sadly, I lack the time to read this at the moment. But I'm going to break one of my rules and fav before reading because I'm certain I'll love this.

#11 · 112w, 1d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Will read as soon as I have finished a few others. Enjoyed the first, I am sure I will enjoy this one as well! :twilightsmile:

#12 · 112w, 1d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Yep, loving this. The way you write these foals is just perfect, especially Silvy and Scoots. Keep it up!

#13 · 112w, 19h ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Loved the first story, loving this. Really like the noir parts. Only thing is that I find some of Twist's dialogue incomprehensible. Any chance of dialing the lisp back a little?

#14 · 112w, 19h ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Ooo, a sequel!

I loved the original story and I'm liking this so far. :scootangel:

#15 · 112w, 15h ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

>>1159698 I Love you that is all

#16 · 112w, 15h ago · · · The Games We Play ·

>>1176960 Awe. I'm flattered. :raritywink:

#17 · 112w, 14h ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

Yeah, I got totally confused about Scootaloos sisters too. I'm so used to her being homeless and unloved, lol!!!

#18 · 111w, 6d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Wait, that was way too straight forward. Everything points to marriage. So... I am going say its not marriage and there's a twist coming!! :twistnerd:

#19 · 111w, 6d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Gonna go with Seether on this, way too straightforward to actually be marriage. What're you up too?

#20 · 111w, 6d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Or it really is marriage and that's the twist!

BigMac better steps up his game before those CMC "accidentally" spill the beans. :scootangel:

And "Mudkip" is so an insult!

#21 · 111w, 5d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

I have no shame.

As far as the marriage thing goes, I'm thinking they'll be given a very convincing alternate explanation, but then they'll (Big Mac and Cheerilee) throw the ol' switcheroo on 'em.

#22 · 111w, 5d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

sweet read though i'm not sure about a few things as the fillies will be finding out more

#23 · 111w, 4d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Hmm.

Everypony looked to Twist who shrugged. “I don’t know,” she shook her head. “A sewing machine, cloth, buttons and needles from the market—who knows?”

Either that line was supposed to be said by someone else, or you forgot Twist's lisp all of a sudden. (Or you're trying to tell us that her lisp isn't as bad as she'd have us believe. :twistnerd:)

#24 · 111w, 4d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

... Oh my... I might have to re-read Moving On to remember what happened! xD I can't remember if Silver and Sweetie are just really good friends, or if they're PRACTICALLY dating. (I know there's not romance tag, so there's no shipping, but more like... friend-shipping? IDK. I'm sick, so I can't verbalize my thoughts as well, sorry.)

#25 · 111w, 4d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Yeah! They hath thome extphlinationth to give!

#26 · 111w, 4d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Or is the twist that mac knocked her up, and is now proposing to deal with the issue.  That might well explain Cheerilee's short temper earlier.:eeyup:

#27 · 111w, 4d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Cheerilee is preggers.

Possibly?

  -Delta-

#29 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1205491 ... Coincidence... :pinkiecrazy:

#30 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Hmm, going with either 1. Cheerilee is pregnate and Big Mac is marrying her just to make everything all nobel and honorable and stuff or 2. There's a completely different reason behind all of this and Hollyfern just chucked us a huge curveball. :pinkiehappy: I can't wait either way!

#31 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Awwwwww, Sweetie Belle is adorable in this chapter!! :unsuresweetie:

#32 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Loved that Futurama reference.

#33 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

I must say I'm a bit curious about this sequel. :unsuresweetie:

So please do keep up the good work upon such a great start of a wonderful storyline.:scootangel:

#34 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1206492 I will and thank you for reading~

#35 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

Wow you've got me hooked right off the bat my friend! :pinkiehappy:

#36 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

Wow quite an intresting plot you have going, I think I know what Big Macintosh and Cheerilee are planning. :eeyup:

#37 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1198335 Cheerilee PREGNANT? Now that's a site for sore eyes! :fluttershyouch:

#38 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1206935 Out of curiosity, how? :duck:

#39 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1206941 Well think about it, she's not exactly the type of mare you think would get into such a situation, you think she would know better being a teacher and all. :pinkiesick:

#40 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1206963 I can see that. Though, teachers do sometimes have children. :raritywink:

#41 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

From the middle point of the first story and onwards I've picked a lil' bit of romantic affections from Silver Spoon towards Sweetie Belle. Might be an unconscious one though...

This or either this fandom has me completely corrupted.

#42 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

I'm excited to see a sequel to Moving On!

#43 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Games We Play ·

"Headache with pictures"--okay, THAT was ingenious.

#44 · 111w, 2d ago · · · Investigation Squad! ·

Quite nice, here! Hmm, investigations? No, this can't possibly go wrong!

Now excuse me while I go find a Liarjack macro... :applejackconfused:

#45 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1207414

It's not like they're five year olds. I'd put them at about pre-teens to be honest, if the mane six are about 18 to 20-ish. Which is generally about the time these things start developing.

I'm also thinking there might be some Scootabloom there, otherwise I'm missing the point of Applebloom's sort of pained and wistful reluctance towards the thought of Cheerimac.

#46 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1208001 It's not like I've stated that they are five year olds.

#47 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1208022

I didn't say you did. I was backing your thoughts on the matter, so chill out.

#48 · 111w, 2d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1208028 It's not like I'm angry.

#49 · 111w, 1d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

>>1207008 Yes but typically not without planning to. But who knows I could be wrong and Big Mac and Cheerilee are just getting married, nothing more. :twilightoops:

#50 · 111w, 1d ago · · · The Fillies Are Thinking ·

Woah! I miss two days and a whole conversation! :duck:

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