Huh, wasn't expecting a sequel after all this time. Interesting. I liked the original, so let's see how this goes.

Hmm, I don't remember anything about Cheerilee being Scootaloo's sister in the first story, though.

there wasn't but like you say I'm going to wait and watch and see what happens

>>11580121158012 You see, It was one of those points that was suppose to be in the original, but it felt out of place so I didn't mention it.

Which story is this a sequel to? I should probably read that first

>>11606941160694 This here~ Moving On Please enjoy!

>>11607111160711

Thanks

I chuckled at the Phineas and Ferb reference. I also think I know what your hinting at with Mac's order.

Last thing, when are you gonna continue Scootaloo's Story? If you plan to continue it, that is.

>>11651361165136 I will get around to it eventually.

Twitht'th accent ith a bit hard to read but that makth it tho much more fun to read.

"Lean on her, girls."

"Headache with pictures!"

Well, this was a lot more entertaining than I thought it was going to be. I approve of this.

Sadly, I lack the time to read this at the moment. But I'm going to break one of my rules and fav before reading because I'm certain I'll love this.

Will read as soon as I have finished a few others. Enjoyed the first, I am sure I will enjoy this one as well!

Yep, loving this. The way you write these foals is just perfect, especially Silvy and Scoots. Keep it up!

Loved the first story, loving this. Really like the noir parts. Only thing is that I find some of Twist's dialogue incomprehensible. Any chance of dialing the lisp back a little?

Ooo, a sequel!

I loved the original story and I'm liking this so far.

>>11596981159698 I Love you that is all

>>11769601176960 Awe. I'm flattered.

Yeah, I got totally confused about Scootaloos sisters too. I'm so used to her being homeless and unloved, lol!!!

Wait, that was way too straight forward. Everything points to marriage. So... I am going say its not marriage and there's a twist coming!!

Gonna go with Seether on this, way too straightforward to actually be marriage. What're you up too?

Or it really is marriage and that's the twist!

BigMac better steps up his game before those CMC "accidentally" spill the beans.

And "Mudkip" is so an insult!

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I have no shame.

As far as the marriage thing goes, I'm thinking they'll be given a very convincing alternate explanation, but then they'll (Big Mac and Cheerilee) throw the ol' switcheroo on 'em.

sweet read though i'm not sure about a few things as the fillies will be finding out more

Hmm.

Everypony looked to Twist who shrugged. “I don’t know,” she shook her head. “A sewing machine, cloth, buttons and needles from the market—who knows?”

Either that line was supposed to be said by someone else, or you forgot Twist's lisp all of a sudden. (Or you're trying to tell us that her lisp isn't as bad as she'd have us believe. )

... Oh my... I might have to re-read Moving On to remember what happened! xD I can't remember if Silver and Sweetie are just really good friends, or if they're PRACTICALLY dating. (I know there's not romance tag, so there's no shipping, but more like... friend-shipping? IDK. I'm sick, so I can't verbalize my thoughts as well, sorry.)

Yeah! They hath thome extphlinationth to give!

Or is the twist that mac knocked her up, and is now proposing to deal with the issue.  That might well explain Cheerilee's short temper earlier.

Cheerilee is preggers.

Possibly?

  -Delta-

>>12054911205491 ... Coincidence...

Hmm, going with either 1. Cheerilee is pregnate and Big Mac is marrying her just to make everything all nobel and honorable and stuff or 2. There's a completely different reason behind all of this and Hollyfern just chucked us a huge curveball. I can't wait either way!

Awwwwww, Sweetie Belle is adorable in this chapter!!

Loved that Futurama reference.

I must say I'm a bit curious about this sequel.

So please do keep up the good work upon such a great start of a wonderful storyline.

>>12064921206492 I will and thank you for reading~

Wow you've got me hooked right off the bat my friend!

Wow quite an intresting plot you have going, I think I know what Big Macintosh and Cheerilee are planning.

>>11983351198335 Cheerilee PREGNANT? Now that's a site for sore eyes!

>>12069351206935 Out of curiosity, how?

>>12069411206941 Well think about it, she's not exactly the type of mare you think would get into such a situation, you think she would know better being a teacher and all.

>>12069631206963 I can see that. Though, teachers do sometimes have children.

From the middle point of the first story and onwards I've picked a lil' bit of romantic affections from Silver Spoon towards Sweetie Belle. Might be an unconscious one though...

This or either this fandom has me completely corrupted.

I'm excited to see a sequel to Moving On!

"Headache with pictures"--okay, THAT was ingenious.

Quite nice, here! Hmm, investigations? No, this can't possibly go wrong!

Now excuse me while I go find a Liarjack macro...

>>12074141207414

It's not like they're five year olds. I'd put them at about pre-teens to be honest, if the mane six are about 18 to 20-ish. Which is generally about the time these things start developing.

I'm also thinking there might be some Scootabloom there, otherwise I'm missing the point of Applebloom's sort of pained and wistful reluctance towards the thought of Cheerimac.

>>12080011208001 It's not like I've stated that they are five year olds.

>>12080221208022

I didn't say you did. I was backing your thoughts on the matter, so chill out.

>>12080281208028 It's not like I'm angry.

>>12070081207008 Yes but typically not without planning to. But who knows I could be wrong and Big Mac and Cheerilee are just getting married, nothing more.

Woah! I miss two days and a whole conversation!

Do you have editors? I saw some errors in there that really bugged me, like

“My daddy is through one of his Midnight Dinner parties,”

should be "throwing"

>>12201901220190 I'm so sorry about that. Kind of, I don't like to bother him, he has his own thing to do too. So I kinda don't mind taking the back seat... again, I'm terribly sorry about that.

Party!!!!! I hope I'm invited! Better not be a candle light supper.

I feel a little bad for Sunset, not being able to connect with her daughter when she clearly wants to try.

Yer totally an Archer fan aren't you? Lol, another enjoyable chapter.

PARTY!

If you want word to spread fast....there's only one pony for job.....

Summon her and your party will be a successful blast.

Nice update overall as it seems that Silver spoons must have sometype of negative history with her mom or is it her step-mom ?

Still nice update overall. Please do keep up the good work.

I'll admit, I was really worried about this chapter. Apparently my worry was for nothing. Save for that one faux pas.

Great chapter as always Holly, nice to see that Silvy's family isn't as bad as I first thought, though I hope her (step?)mother will reunite with her daughter. There seems to be some wording issues Holly, like Rarity walking about Sweetie Belle, it should be Rarity's worried about Sweetie Belle... or talking? Bit of a headscratcher right there

I wonder why Silver Spoon hates Sunset so much.  There's being distant, and then there's complete dislike of them.  Can't wait to see why they'd remained distant for 11 years even when Sunset has wanted to get closer to her during that time.

>>12207541220754 Again?! Man... I really slipped up this time around... Anyway, Nice to hear from you, Cella-P!

>>12207581220758I guess I worded it wrong, but Sunset hasn't been around Silver Spoon for eleven years. Whereas her father has attempted to visit yearly.

>>12207781220778

Happens to the best of us and since the spelling and grammar are correct, Word won't catch it. Sorry that I haven't been reviewing much, hadn't found the need to and... well I forgot to click the alert box for this story. Ok then recap... Silvy's family are home now, she has issues with her mother. Scoots is Cheerilee and Berry Punch's sister which isn't common, I think I've only seen Berry being related to Cheerilee once and Scoots never (besides in my own head with an OC sister). Is Sapphire Shore's still Cheerilee's daughter?, and Cheerilee is dating Big Mac... I think. Anything I missed?

>>12208101220810 Everything but the Sapphire Shores bit. Spot on for not being in.

>>12208171220817

Aww... I was waiting for the Sapphire and Cheerilee reunion. *smack* Ouch! Sorry Holly one of my OCs has gone postal, again... something about there is no way in Tirek's Nine Hells that she is related to a drunkard.

Skydancer this isn't my universe, you don't exist there, Cheeri and Scoots aren't your sisters.

>>12208441220844 She seems charming, as usual.

>>12208551220855

Yeah... charming.

>>12208711220871 It takes a lot to dissuade me. No matter how... feisty.

>>12208901220890

Skydancer has anger issues and being in the Royal Guard doesn't help either, neither does her Elric Complex... oh sh...

Skydancer: WHO ARE YOU CALLING SMALL!

>>12209081220908 Hahaha! I think we better move this to PM's. Pegasi do tend to have a higher than normal anger rate.

>>12207781220778  Oh, I figured there was something between them with Silver apparently holding a grudge against her.  Now I'm wondering why Sunset has stayed away from her for 11 whole years and just now trying to patch things up.

>>12209441220944 In good time~

>>12209481220948 But...I want it now!

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>>12209611220961 That wouldn't be fair to everyone else. You have to wait.

>>12209691220969  Fine...if I must.

And, I just realized we need more Sweetie Belle emotes.

>>12209861220986 If it isn't to your liking, as my reader, feel free to chew me out vigorously!

>>12209921220992 And with that permission, I shall start my list.

*Ahem*  "Item one, ..."

Well I wonder just what it is that Sweetie Belle did to frighten her mother and have Rarity a little concerned, did she try to do something dangerous?

>>12211081221108 Dangerous? I guess it depends. Not physically anyway. I thought I implied enough to where it was obvious.

>>12211231221123 I don't think you did, and since you didn't point out a cutie mark I know for a fact that isn't what's got Rarity and Mrs. Belle so worked up.  

>>12211681221168 If Sunset didn't make it obvious, they are around 11-13. Meaning that age where 'the talk' comes in.

>>12209861220986  

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Anyway, awesome chapter here. I hope to see this update more often.

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I positively squeeeeed when I saw that you updated. I wonder what will happen next. And why do I get the feeling that Seabastion and August Hoof might somehow be related to Solver Spoon? Cause I remeber you mentioning that the ones who don't become head of the family became one of the servants. This requires investigation!!!! Cutie Mark Crusaders Investigators go!!!!!

>>12202631220263

Rife with little errors. Please bother your editor, it's why he accepted the position.

That said, I'm glad to see hints that Sweetie and Silver might become a couple. I've honestly never seen a Silver ship outside of DiamondSpoon.

>>12214001221400 R... R-Rife..?

>>12214211221421

Oh quit blubbering Rarity.

I'm not one to go pick them out, but there's a number that end up particularly jarring in comparison to your earlier chapters and previous story's near lack of them. Most the sort that wouldn't be picked up by a spell-checking function, such as a word being properly spelled but not the right one to use in the sentence/wrong tense/etc. If your editor can't be reached right now, just go back over it with a fine-tooth. I know it's kind of hard, considering you stared at it the whole time while writing it, so your brain is likely to just sort of skip along, but when you have to edit your own work you have to make yourself go word-by-word.

All that aside, looking forward to the party! And wondering what Sunset did to damage Spoony's view of her so badly.

Your update on EQD startled the hell out of me, heh.

>>12211791221179 Oh I see, Rarity caught Sweetie Belle doing something.

>>12246121224612 Haha, no, just asked a question is all I will say.

i was just wondering, will Silver and Sweetie end up becoming a couple themselves?

>>12246541224654 Maybe, maybe not.

>>12246791224679 i guess i will wait and see

>>12074141207414

This fandom has messed up my shipping meter so much. Earlier today, I was reading William Wilson, and I actually considered the idea of Willaim1 x William2 until it almost literally said "but not in a romantic fashion."

Yes, I'm so messed up that I really though that was a possibility, have mercy on my soul.

nice refrences! xP so lets see cherilee is together with big mac and is sisters with scoots and berry punch whom is together with colgate and also has a daughter named berry pinch (sp?) this family tree seems legit! :D once you said scoots is sisters with cherilee i was worried you'd forget about berry punch no worries now 8D

i admit "headache with pictures" i laughed at that xDD and i expected berry to be in the middle of drinking or abit tippsy xP lol

so i heard you like mudkipz.... i like mudkipz xDDD marriage?! mmm.... (narrows eyes) seems to straight foward to be true....

UPDATE! :D finally caught up! took all day to read the first story woot and caught up to this fave/track and thumb for me! :D party time fun time woot :3

'Kay, so wait a minute. Berry Punch, Cherilee, and Big Mac have all been acting weird. Scoots is supposed to be grounded, but Big Mac showed up and she was tossed out of the house. DAE pretty much KNOW what's going on here?

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>>12214001221400 Then you might wanna follow me, I might be cooking something up

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Ah, a CSI: Miami reference. Rather cool, there. And ah, girls. So young sometimes...

The clues fit... so it's probably something else. Or not.