Fancy Paints, and pink unicorn mare, is having a bit of an Artist block, and thinks back to what her dad once told her in her youth.
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((Nugget pirates are like the best. They need to exist. I'd be one. Oh hey, Red!)) WHY AM I HERE?
2319119 Tee-he
That was pretty cool
no it wasnt
You again
miss me
No. You are just plain annoying
go die in a hole
I like it. There's a good story line, but you could work on grammar and formatting. For instance, once you call her father "ink pen" and another time "ink well". Also, instead of explaining in parenthesis, you could say "nugget pirates-the kind that steal your nuggets, naturally-" or something along the lines of that. Sometimes I go over my stories and proofread to make them better, which I suggest you doing here, but I like it. A good, clean one-shot.
2319406Damn i thought i corrected all of those. His name is meant to be Inkwell. Where did i miss it?
2319735
Right after "fancy was a young filly"
I suggest just taking a couple minutes to slowly go through and correct errors. Whenever I do that with my stories, it's like I just brushed my hair-everything becomes smooth and pretty. :P :)