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Spell Bound


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Spell Bound has gone through most of his life thinking he's just a normal pony with a few odd things about him. So what he can sense and taste the emotions of others, that doesn't mean he;s not a pony, right? Well , that's what he thinks until the Changelings invade Canterlot. After that, he starts hearing something, a song that he can't quite remember. What did the Joker say to the Thief?

A re-imagining of Spell Bound, inspired by Battlestar Galactica's reveal of the Final 5

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

Loved it! Everything went by a little too fast in the prologue, but I enjoyed it! Like and favorite! :D

2957080 the prologue was just going through minor major events during his younger life. Wanted to speed through it so I could get to present time during the next chapter. Don't worry, I'll be going back and filling the holes in other stories.

"There must be some kind of way out of here,"
Said the joker to the thief,
"There's too much confusion,
I can't get no relief.
Businessman they drink my wine,
Plowman dig my earth
None will level on the line, nobody offered his word, hey"

You know. When you write it out this just doesn't make any sense, but in the hands of Jimi, it's just a thing of psychedelic beauty.

2957836 Ah good, you know what I'm going for ^^

2957836 None of them along the line
Know what any of it is worth *

going with the Bear McCreary version

Ok, I'll bite. This is looking really cool so far.

Cotton Needle was a seamstress pony, who was studying sewing and necromancy magic at the school, and was quite gifted at both.

Cotton Needle sounds awesome!

You sir have aquired a favorite, keep it up and Ill be watching this

I'll be glad when I move out of the canon episode, so I don't have to rewatch the same clip over and over so I make sure I get all the dialgue right and got the key movements and emotions. -_-;; it's tiring.

What did the Joker say to the Thief?

'There must be some kind of way out of here'

Now get your damn references under control, also, not a bad start.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5016175 But I must make all the refrences D:

5017306 But there's too much confusion, and I can't get any relief.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Nice, although a few spelling areas, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going!

Well, that was long awaited... A tad bit short, but still good. I just hope that your next chapter will come sooner rather than later.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5606510 i realised yesterday how long it was since i had written and got into the writing mood. The reason why this was so short was because i kept getting distracted, and thought might as well post as is. As soon as i get out of the details of the episode i can be more creative with the world

5606628 Well, hurry up and get it done then.:pinkiehappy:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5606662 might work on the next chapter tonight. hopefully i'll have another up by Thursday

When you say that this story is a re-imagining of Spell Bound, what do you mean by that?

5615192 I've written other stories about my OC, but he was a bit overpowered and really meh. So when In say re-imagining I mean i've revamped his whole story line

5606665 You lied to me...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5871939 >.> I never said which Thursday...

but still, i did mean the next thursday. I'm so sorry but I got swamped with coursework and exams are coming up soon. I will try to find time to continue this.

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