Nopony likes injections. Certainly, nobunny likes them either.
Unfortunately for Angel, a certain pegasus is determined that he recieves his shot...and nothing is going to stop her.
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Sweet Tale
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Sweet Tale
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I might have seen an error or two in there. Nothing too major, though. I very much enjoyed reading it (and the name for the title was simply genius). I can tell that this will take a spot in the feature spot. I just know it.
Cheers to you, Greatodyer.
A very cute story. Although, I'm pretty sure Ponyville has an official vet (as seen in Secret to My Excess), but I can see the reason for making Fluttershy a vet given her talent with animals. Other than that, it was very well written and very funny. MUSTACHES!
Angel's self-titled debut story!
...I kid, Angel's the best.
Very cute and pretty funny. Everypony sounded in-character and it felt like part of an episode. Not too many flaws to worry about, though I wasn't sure about the bits of narration from Angel's POV. But it all works out great!
What I want to know is whether that unicorn ended up getting her muffins.
I swear, Angel is the single most annoying pet I have seen. I'd tackle him to the ground to give him the shot.
Seriously though: nice work on this very entertaining short tale. It could use a few more mustaches though.
Perfect
Very well written, and very funny to boot.
Enjoyed it all the way through sooo yes good job!
I've been waiting for this, and you delivered. I love it.
Why have I not read your stuff before? This was excellent!
Good sir, you have my attention.
Oh, now I get the joke. You dirty lil' thing, you.
Whew.... now that was a chase I know I could never keep up with.
But at least Fluttershy caught Angel, and he agreed to let her give him the injection.
That title works on two levels. Angel can be quite the prick.
This was an enjoyable read, even if I am rather more pro-Angel than many! No doubt about my favourite aspect of the story: the really good comedy. This fic has great comic timing, especially in the more physical comedy. That made it a whole lot of fun to read. Clever title, too, and I thought the Angel-POV sections worked quite well on the whole.
It could have done with one more proofreading pass, though, as there are several technical blips. Most notably, rabbits are not rodents: they're lagomorphs. The occasional iffy word choice, typo ("vetinarian") and the dreaded "it's" for "its" inevitably drag it down just a little bit.
Still, those are mostly minor problems and this story's good points well outweigh the bad. An amusing story that I don't have a lot of trouble imagining actually happening in-universe.