Spike the Knight

by vadram

The Rest

Spike the Knight
Part of the Black Sun Universe

by Vadram

Goggle Docs Link

Author's Note:

Personal Problems and real life took me away from my proofreaders and editors, so to them i apologize, while the fic is finished, i did not manage to go any further than a first draft. So errors are plentiful, and the writing is, in lack of better word raw. If any of my followers, or any new person that is curious how this ends, here it is, in all its naked glory. Click the Google Docs Link

Comments

[Wellwater]

Are you planning to get this proofread/edited eventually, or should I just read what you've got now? I can be patient.

[vadram]

5116176 sadly i am not, after almost a year of hiatus i just decided to post what i got if anyone is really interested in finding out how it ends

[Ignaltus]

[RadicalDishonesty]

I-it lives?! Or lived? It died while it was on vacation, but lived a good life?

Well, even if you aren't editing it, I appreciate having an end to the story.

[Acceleron]

Thanks for posting the rest of it at least, now I can continue where I left it. You could always post all of the unedited chapters and just mark them with a disclaimer if you wanted.

[vadram]

5119408 i could do that but it will only artificially inflate my view count.
The reason i went with chapters was to get feedback and correct mistakes that the readers pointed out, since, as of now i have given up on doing a second draft, or an update of the story that would be pointless, and a bit time consuming. I would rather focus on the story i am working on now, and on life in general. I might get around to do that later, but no promises

[spearblade]

Question so is it basicaly canncell or is like on haitus untill it ur other story's and lufe gets better/done and if so about the cancell/haitus is it ok if someone to take it off ur hands and finnish if its ok than i. Know of a group that its specific job is to finish stories that are dead/haitus/cancel
This is merely a question

[spearblade]

5119416 Question so is it basicaly canncell or is like on haitus untill it ur other story's and lufe gets better/done and if so about the cancell/haitus is it ok if someone to take it off ur hands and finnish if its ok than i. Know of a group that its specific job is to finish stories that are dead/haitus/cancel
This is merely a question

[vadram]

5127803 the thing is that the story is done. has a beginning, a middle, and an end, like any other completed fic. the problem is that this is a rough draft, filled with bad writing, bad grammar, mistakes galore, and plotholes greater than the ones in eastern Europe in the spring (bad pun was bad i know) so i don't really care if someone chose to rewrite (since like i said it is finished) it, but i would appreciate being mentioned/credited for my work.
If i am going to ever do the final draft in the future, i cannot say.

If i could see the future i would probably be [insert extravagant action] in [luxurious place], surrounded by [descriptor of beauty and person or others depending on preferences]
But in all honesty, if someone wants to do a rewrite, by all means. And as i said a reference, link, or something similar would be appreciated.

[spearblade]

5128292 ok
But ill say that this story is very regardless if its done though i wish i could see what would happen to them well i hope some. One will finish I hate to see it died at the end

[spearblade]

5128697
*is very good regardless

[vadram]

5128697 the whole story is posted, check the link in the last chapter

[vadram]

5388188 it was supposed to be the first of about 11 stories that i know the plot of, but... time and effort
also THANK YOU for actually reading through it all

[captainmidwing]

I liked it gonna read the google docs now tho

[Undeadnut]

This reminds me of dbz

[SkyDragonMC]

7399186 At some point you should try to redo this story. It's too good of a story to leave semi-abandoned.