• Published 20th Mar 2013
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Special Delivery for a Special Somepony. - Onyxfire408



A 2nd person story fic, you yell at an innocent mailmare for just one mistake. After some time you apologize to the mailmare and realize that you have special feelings for her, will she have the same feeling for you?

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Epilogue

Epilogue

You sat down on a bench on your porch as a small tan brown pegasus colt with a black mane was sleeping on your lap. The front door opened as Derpy walked out with a batch of muffins and lemonade. "Hi honey." You greet with a warm smile as she gives a small giggle at the sleeping colt and set's down the treats on the coffee table, she sits down next to you as she rests her head on your shoulder, you didn't mind one bit.

"I can't believe we are like this." Derpy said in a soft tone.

"I know, two kids, a better house, and best of all, this was all thanks to The Doctor." You remembered as you could hear a distinct 'whirring' sound coming from the back yard. You give a sharp grin as you take your hand and slowly shake the colt as his eyes fluttered open to reveal his misshaped green eyes.

"Yes dad?"

"He's here Woozy, The Doctor's here to play." You announce as the young colt leaps up from your lap. The front door busts open to reveal Ditzy wearing a bow tie.

"C'mon Woozy, The Doctor's here!" Ditzy announced as he ran back inside with Woozy following her from behind.

You give a satisfying sigh as Derpy cuddles up to you closer. "Y'know, all of this wouldn't of never happened if I delivered the wrong mail." Said Derpy as she gives a soft giggle.

"And If I haven't come to apologize, I wouldn't be with the best mare in the world." You say as Derpy leans in her head as she presses her lips against your. She locks her lips with a bliss like chocolate as your kiss lasts for seconds. The two of you break your blissful kiss as she lies her head on your lap.

"I love you." Derpy said in a soft tone as she dozed off into a comfortable sleep.

"I love you too."

Author's Note:

Aaaand that's a wrap my little bronies (and pegasisters). I must admit, I had a really good time writing this story. I apologize if this seems kinda rushed but right now, a lot of stress is running down me. And it's the finals, next week, I fight my life's final boss.

Comments ( 16 )

Thanks for the story man really good but I have to ask. What are finals exactly?

2627725 final exams, it's something they do in America.

2627725 they are like tests that we take to see what we remember from the school year. America call's it that. It may be called something else were you are from.

2808748 thanks I have seen the episode just not in a long time weeping angels I have seen more of sorry for the mix up

ive just finished chapter zix and iz very interesting :twilightsmile: and i have been likeing it since the beginning, i am 16 and so i live with my parents and u finnaly got me to stop playing games and sit on the couch with my ipad and read something and got ym mom to smile so Thank You for makeing such a great story, also, thank you for the typing errors...yes that sounds weird but it makes it longer to read the story because i have to figure out what those lets are suppost to be makeing it take longer and happyer -strangely- so happily thank you but if u dont like the typing errors, then let me tell you, ever sentence, paragraph or a stoping point, re-read what u typed and fix what u ruined and say SCREW YOU to spell check, that thing is hardly ever usefull so THANK YOU for such a great story and Your Welcome for the Tip and now i need to read Ch 7...stuffz getting interesting

Thank You :pinkiehappy:

2933502Doo Itashimashite :twilightsmile: (Your Welcome in Japanese)

2934050 Ok, BESIDES another purple, they match. :flutterrage: Better? :scootangel:

2933502 let me re-state that...I (VERY) Happily finished the story and 100% absoulutility loved it :twilightsmile: and your finals should have ended by now, im sure u would have done veeery succesfullly or its still in process which if thats still happening, then keep up and dont let yourself down ^v^ and i hope to read from you once more and may u all have a wonzerfully muffin dazley day

2937809Thank you very much. I have other stories that you could read and I'm currently rewriting one of my stories. I would also like to thank you for following me.

:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

3111519Please comment at the end of the story so that I don't get a spam of comments from the same guy.:facehoof:

4710471 when I went to go get scoot's scooter back

Great story I loved reading it. You're a great author.

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I appreciate the comment lad, but I'm more of a decent author to be honest. :twilightsheepish:

Ah, I love when people forget there's a second person tag.

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