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MeowthRocket


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This is an interesting new concept for the story. I can't wait to see how see how this turns out.:pinkiesmile:

179031 True, so can we expect more stories after this one in the future?:twilightsmile:

179082 lemme put it dis way....

It's all up to how well my current ones do....

I DO have ideas for future ones... but I want to make sure my quality is good enough...

180218 Ok, for the record...

Kirby is not in this fic. I see the coincidence in the title, but Kirby is not in this story.

I AM keeping the title as is though, since I think it's pretty cool.

I've only read the first two chapters and I'm not seeing anything that would even warrant a teen rating, much less a mature one. How long until we actually see what it is that made you give it a mature rating?

182524 Just look at chapter 3 and you'll get an answer. TRUST ME!

182268 Thank you, I'm damn sure gonna do my best!

Only one glaring error:

All those words came undone and now I'm not the only one]/i]

Also, as a fun exercise, the second time round (or the first, if you're a fast reader), try to keep up.
Poorly written sex scene. However, it's not a sex scene; it's a love-making scene, distinct difference. It is, however, a decently-written love-making scene.:yay:

183659 I can't believe I missed one of the lyrics! Thanks for letting me know.

Admittedly, I don't know the difference between sex and love-making.... I guess you COULD classify it as the latter. But thanks for at least complimenting it on being a decent love-making scene.

Like I said, it's the first time I've EVER written a scene like that!

is Josh supposed to be James from Pokemon? I didn't read the other chapters...

184296 You know, I knew it was a matter of time before that question got asked.

No, Josh is NOT James from Pokemon. I can see how one would think that, but I wanna clear up the confusion.

"I need you all to get under the tables and keep an eye on how big their stomaches get as they gorge."
Also meowth. wat. WAT
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This is a great story! Hope to see more in the future!

186265 You know what?

It's my story. I planned Meowth's role FAR, FAR ahead of time.

If you do not want, you do not have to read!

Sorry if that's a little rude, I just don't appreciate the picture of the dog with the message DO NOT WANT.

Not funny.

187293 Thanks man. That actually means a lot to me.

:twilightoops:Whoa! Note to self:NEVER piss off Josh. Also, Rarity, for shame. Making both Fluttershy AND Pinkie cry:pinkiesad2::fluttercry:. Your drama's gone too far this time.:twilightangry2:

Oh my!!! Sounds like Josh REALLY lost it!

:pinkiehappy: this is getting interesting

Very nice work. Love the detials.

I see you put some "easter eggs" out there such as My Little Dashie and maybe evenPatty Cakes? Did you do that on purpose or coincidence?

195546 :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright::raritywink: A little bit of column A and a little bit of Column B

195280 Thank you! I'm doing my best to make this great!

This is really good!:twilightsmile: Im looking forward to reading the outcome!:yay:

I was eating Mac 'n Cheese and drinking Hawaiian Punch while reading this....WHAT NOW:flutterrage:?

197779 I warned ya in the beginning of the chapter! :pinkiehappy:

I am not responsible for any projectile vomiting that may occur upon reading about Rainbow Dash picking her snout OR barfing all over Rarity.

198109 lol I was saying that I did all that WITHOUT throwing up :ajsmug:

I was wondering if you could give me advice on how to write a good fan fic. Thanks! :twilightsmile:

:pinkiesad2: seeing Dashie cry really makes me feel so sad

Awwwwwww! That's so sweet:twilightsmile:

Poor Rainbow Dash. Guess that nightmare caused her to loose her lunch.

The last part was so touching! :fluttercry:

I'm really intrigued in how you're writing this story.:pinkiesmile: No matter what other people say, keep it the great writing!:twilightsmile:

:pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry: Why does everything happen to him!?!?

I so want that HEARTLESS FAT NO GOOD WORTHLESS PUNK TO PAY!!:twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

Why does all the crap happen to Josh?! :fluttercry: Its gonna be nice when Shampagne gets what he deserves! :twilightangry2:

Champaign reminds me of that one assclown from Dead Island, the one who annoyingly said"OOO champagne!" and just like her, I want him to die as well

:fluttercry: Oh, thank Celestia, Josh is OK! I hope he can recover soon! I'm usually level headed, BUT...THAT COLD HEARTED, SON OF A BITCH CHAMPAGNE GONNA PAY!!! :flutterrage:

I loved Pinkie's joke about that heartless fat wad from hell. And Gilda was a nice touch.

:fluttercry: You sir, are a freakin' genius of a writer! I just hope Josh can be completely healed after all he went through and that he doesn't become closed off either. Please update again soon! :twilightsmile:

Wow. Poor Josh. And I'm glad they are kind of giving Gilda a chance.

Wow. Josh must have a strong stomach if he let Dash do that. And Gilda's training was pretty mean, but MAN! If it helps them win, I bet it was worth it.

:fluttercry: A bit gross, but very beautiful nonetheless. :twilightsmile:

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