A man who loses his sight in an accident moves to Equestria for work and makes a new friend that Is a sarcastic female Griffin.
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Good spelling and grammar, but there's a problem. It's going too fast! Slow down and describe some stuff. I know visual details won't work, but what does he notice with other senses that a regular person wouldn't?
Also, I think you may be pushing the blindness a bit much. We've heard the story about the eagles several times now. We get it. Let's go on with the story.
Overall, a unique idea. Not bad, but could use some polish.
Good story I like I can never find a good humanxgilda fic or they never last past 3 or 4 chapters.
2290422 That's what I thought and I decided to make one because I like the Idea.
This is an interesting story. Could be a bit more descritptive, but it is still good. Plus it is a human/Gilda romance.
Hope to see more of this.
Yes awesome new chapter now give me Moar
Please:)
Yay we get to meet another person who hates Gilda. Huzzah
I know you updated it today but i really hope you do update this more frequently.
2839949 So what did you think of this chapter?
Alright I'm out.
2844680 What did I do?
A Flutterdash? Meh...
2850006 I probably won't do much more than mention them after the next chapter.
Liking it so far!
I like it but more please