Very nice work. Love the detials.

I see you put some "easter eggs" out there such as My Little Dashie and maybe evenPatty Cakes? Did you do that on purpose or coincidence?

195546 A little bit of column A and a little bit of Column B

195280 Thank you! I'm doing my best to make this great!

This is really good! Im looking forward to reading the outcome!

197779 I warned ya in the beginning of the chapter!

I am not responsible for any projectile vomiting that may occur upon reading about Rainbow Dash picking her snout OR barfing all over Rarity.

198109 lol I was saying that I did all that WITHOUT throwing up

I was wondering if you could give me advice on how to write a good fan fic. Thanks!

I'm really intrigued in how you're writing this story. No matter what other people say, keep it the great writing!

I think I'm disliking Joshua more and more. It's official now that he's not the same person as in the first story. That ship sailed long ago. Now he spends all his time being completely right, feeling everything, helping everyone who can't go on without him, and going back to what happened in the first story. Just because its a sequel doesn't mean to use the first one as a sympathy crutch. Worse still its like no matter what happens everything has to be compared to his attack so that means that nobody ever has a right to feeling anything unless he deems it fitting. This chapter was hard to get through, but I'm keeping faith still.

I do what I do, I just try to write a story that both fans enjoy... and that I can say I'm proud of.