Opening her eyes, the purple filly gazed around the room. It took her a few seconds to realise she was hungry, and another moment to come to the conclusion she had no idea how to rid herself of the feeling. The bright world burned her eyes, and she closed them and something sounded, and something on her head flicked. Flicking them a few times, she realised they were ears, and the sound had been caught by them. Her mouth opened and the sound from before came out, and she realised she could make noise. If she could make noise, would that bate the hunger? The filly opened her mouth, and broke into cries.
“Babuu….”she giggled happily, as someone entered the room. She was still hungry, and she didn’t understand what they were something doing that hit her ears. As they talked she tried to work out what it was she was hearing, and her face broke into a frown, frustrated she had failed. Suddenly the white one, wow she knew what white was, it was beautiful. It was so pure and clean and, and white!
“Mrh” she spoke, trying to get their attention as the blue one left, something burning and her eyes closing as something came on her face. She didn’t like this this-wet feeling! Her mouth opened, the white one said something, and she broke into the sound from earlier, she was hungry!
“buhburn” turning her gaze to the colour thingy attached to the white pony, her eyes widened and her stomach growled as the white one leaned in, was it food? Opening her mouth, she began eating it, her ears perking and her horn tingling for some reason. Suddenly everything began flying by, colours everywhere! Eating quicker, things began to slow down and she appeared in some sort of nice smelling room.
“bhee” her eyes widened, she had a new sense, she could smell things. Suddenly a smell distracted her, a yellow brown thing smelled very good, she spat the icky rainbow gunk from her mouth and went to try the brown stuff, and was suddenly immensely happy. Whatever hunger was, this was the thing that would stop it from oww-ing.
“brrr” she gazed down at the white coat, and at her brown thing covered hoof, and then slapped some of the brown thing onto the coat, wondering what would happen. A smile broke out on her face, white was now brown! She began making more brown, her hunger forgotten. Suddenly a feeling passed her and suddenly a liquid came from under, but she ignored it in favour of making more brown.
Suddenly they entered another room, and she paused and turned her eyes to meet the thingies on the white thingies face that looked like they were looking at her. Breaking out into an overjoyed smile, she realised they were eyes, like hers! The ponies head was white too, so she decided to make it brown too!
“Twilight gag a rar rar” spoke the white one, coming close and gazing serious at her. Was she Twilight? Was that her thingy? What was a thingy? She began smearing the brown over the face better, somewhat of a perfectionist. As the white one began making some kinda whoooshbabababa sounds in a round thingy, she realised what thingy a Twilight was, it was her name!
Turning as a stray breeze trailed through the room, and suddenly she wanted to follow that wind. Something began to move on her back, wings she realised later, and suddenly she didn’t need the white one to move, she could do it on her own. Flying out of the room she began heading toward the window slowly but quickly gaining speed. With a few seconds to spare something flew in front of the opening, and Twilight forced herself to stop, and the burning sensation hit her again.
“eee*snif*” she began to cry, that’s what that was called. Her mouth opened, and a different cry rung out of her mouth, louder than earlier. Suddenly she opened her eyes, and she was being put into a very nice motion. Twilight stopped crying as she was cradled, enjoying the back and forth motion.
Opening her eyes, she realised what the white one was, her career, someone who would look after her. As they went back into the room, there was a strange substance in the round thing. As she was lowered toward it, something touched her hoof and she immediately didn’t like it.
“eebeee!”Twilight didn’t want, her horn sparked with magic, away she must get away from the clear thingy that was wet. No, she didn’t want in she didn’t want in she di-
“aaabeh…”Twilight realised this wetness was different from earlier, much more pleasant and she stopped struggling. Gazing at the substance, she tried to scoop it up, however it didn’t work and suddenly everything was black and something was scraping her face. Before she could object it was over, and they hopped out of the strange wetness.
“wee,” she slurred, something coming over her and her vision fading. What was going on? She was feeling something. Tired…She was Tired… Rocking, tired, darkness….
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“SNORE” Twilight woke up and screamed in sadness, the black was gone, and she was tired. She wanted blackness. White one began rocking her, and she stopped crying, feeling tiredness start to bring her back to darkness.
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“SNORE” Twilight woke up and screamed in sadness, the black was gone, and she was tired. She wanted blackness. White one began rocking her, and she stopped crying, feeling tiredness start to bring her back to darkness.
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“SNORE” Twilight woke up and screamed in sadness, the black was gone, and she was tired. She wanted blackness. White one began rocking her, and she stopped crying, feeling tiredness start to bring her back to darkness.
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Twilight yawned waking up and gazing around her immediate area. The white one was sleeping soundly, a light snore escaping her lips. Sitting up, she realised she was hungry. Glancing to her wings, she began to take off from the bed, and flew toward the window and frowned. Closing her eyes she began to concentrate. Open, open ope-poof-the chain turned to dust and the window flew open, and Twilight smiled in delight.
"mrrrnrr" she spoke, heading out the window and toward the nice smelling room. Landing on a table, she sat there and looked at the many eyes on her, and suddenly food was everywhere! There were these flat thingies with some wet but not wet thing on it, and they were her best bests. There were others, which she ate in the gaps the flat thingies weren't on the plate. Suddenly she turned, the white one was here. Twilight beamed, happy to show the white one her treasures.
"Twilight no outside" the white one scolded, and Twilight’s ears fell down, realising she had done bad. The white one said something else, and Twilight realised she was forgiven and beamed at the white one, tying to copy that smile she did just a moment ago. Being hovered into the air by the white ones horn, the food was hovered to rest nearby, and they left.
Suddenly she was surrounded by food, and she felt her mouth get wet. The white one kept the food out of her reach, and Twilight tried to reach it with her horn thingy too. Breaking out into a successful smile, she began eating all the flat thingies, saving one for later, the white one ate the rest. Suddenly a feeling sprung to her, and she tapped the white one to get her attention and tried to explain the feeling.
The wetness spread over the white one, turning her yellow and making Twilight feel much better. Suddenly they entered this HUGE room, and there was the blue one from ages ago. She was levitated to greet the blue one, after the white one suffocated Twilight slightly. The blue one spoke, and Twilight decided she should give the blue one her treasure. Giggling she brought the flat thingy out from behind her back and showed it to the blue one. The blue one was overjoyed at her treasure and Twilight began making biting motions in case the blue one didn't know how to eat. Seeing the blue one enjoy her treasure flat thingy made Twilight break out into a smile, and she began tugging on the magic holding in her in place, wanting to explore the room.
"No leaving room" spoke the white one, and Twilight was placed on the ground, and she began flying around the room, she accidentally crashed into the white one once, and narrowly avoided a second time but otherwise she enjoyed her moment of just flying around the room until the white one decided it was time to go. Twilight was sad to be gone, but her wings buzzed in happiness at being able to fly around like that, she enjoyed every moment!
“mrr-waaa...”suddenly Twilight was brought to a new location, full of a brand new colour. The white one set a similar rule to before, but gave Twilight a clear outline of where to not go, so Twilight was happy to follow her wishes. Flying over to a bunch of stick thingies that had a circle top, she saw something slowly flapping wings on one of them. It was thing and long, but it had beautiful wings.
Twilight didn’t know what to call it, so she decided Fluttershy was a good name. She followed Fluttershy around the clearing, until it left the circle and she waved it goodbye. Twilight explored every bush, tasted every flower, even the brown and icky grass! Suddenly something brought the area into darkness, and she gazed up in wonder, seeing her very first cloud.
“w…”oh was all she could think at the amazing thing above her, so peaceful and yet so big.
Author is Baby twilight.There.Authors note solved.
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I'm a wolf
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She ADORABLELBELBELBLEBEL *dead*
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Brillient workthe Sweetness almost killed me!
I think my heart stopped *checks pulse* yup, no pulse
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wow really? Thanks! Can I haz your organs?
Vegeta what does the scouter about the dawness level?
IT'S OVER 9000!
WHAT 9000?! *Dies from Adorableness*
2292424 No i need those still...besides family doesnt want me to become a mummy. sorry.
Dawwwww! That is all.
2292168 If you're a wolf should I be feared of prey. I am on fire after all. Loved this chapter btw
Halfway through the chapter a paragraph repeats several times.
Please if you're going to do both Twilights POV and Celestias POV, do Twi's first then celestias
ALSO, she called something Fluttershy? Is she remembering stuff when she was adult, like mental progressian...? If so AWESOME! IF not, then it's still a cool idea, if she isn't remembering when she was a adult, then just have her call other things of her friends please. I think it would be cool, but its you and I dont know you
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Ya that was on purpose
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Why?
I don't think its that weird. I tend to make the faces of characters while I read stories...
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I was trying to show how baby's, in this case fillies, are highly likely to only think a few basic urges and if that urge is interrupted their mind follows the same patern and-
Lets just say I thought it worked well in the context of the chapter.
the sentence structure needs work in places but other then that it was a good chapter.
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Thanks,
thingies everywhere
This chapter earned you another follower That was so cute
Also: how young is Twilight supposed to be? SHould'nt she still be too young for solid foods?
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Their Alicorns?
I completely forgot about the food thing
At one point, you use the word career where caregiver would be appropriate.
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Well, the alternative would mean Celestia would have to use a lactation spell on herself or find a wetnurse for the filly.
It's been done before, in a way. The Foal in the Basket has Twi use the spell for an adopted changl-er, "flutterpony." You might be able to change it up so Twilight can't digest the food properly? Now what do babies do with something they can't digest?//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png
Anyway, that's there if you think you can work it in//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Twilight_Sparkle.png
Oh god, I laughed so much at the beggining.
Why is Twilight not in a diaper yet? She's already peed on Celestia twice, if not messed herself inbetween chapters.
Oh yeah, I do that too! My face just takes on the expression of what I'm reading or drawing.
Flying over to a bunch of stick thingies that had a circle top, she saw something slowly flapping wings on one of them. It was thing and long, but it had beautiful wings. what is this i think it is a butterfly but i could be worng
OMG twilestia relationship bump after this!
And also... Twilight is so ADORABLE!!
Yes. I am a dude. And I am straight. I just like cute things. Problem?
THIS TWI-DORABLE FIC IS OVER (pause for dramatic effect)NINE-THOUSAAAAAAAAAAAAAND!!!!!!!!!!!!
The wight thing was in a room with a big fire thing she hugged it till it birst to flames and cryed she was bleeding.
I feel and
That was perfect. I found this story a few weeks ago and read the first 3 chapters, bookmarked this one, and then didn't get around to reading it again until now. I kept thinking the events in this chapter seemed familiar, but not exactly how I remembered it, so I kept reading. Now I have experienced an un-biased reading of both POVs, and they are both positively adorable
Poor Luna. That was so sweet of her to eat the treasure without any complaint Not to mention sweet of Twilight to think of the idea of saving a good thing for someone else.
To be honest, I've seen foal pov before, but. It had been done a fair bit better.
I can't remember the name of the Fic, but I know I favourited it, so it's somewhere in my favourites. IT was another twilight foal celestia Fic. I swear I can't remember the name but it's in my favourites.
Sadly, foal pov there was done a lot better than here.
I will keep reading though. This is still a good Fic and I know I will enjoy it
2649005 Me too!
No, but srsly, We're BRONIES, remember? While it's true a few ARE gay, and there are a few women, there are still plenty of people like you and me.
Did anyone else realise she rubbed poop all over Celestia?!?! Twilight, please!
TWI TWI
GONNA GET DA THINGIES
I wana thinggie tu!
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Actually, if I remember the Celestia version of that scene properly, it's just some sort of brown food.
I wonder if Twilight will remember all this when Luna gives Celestia the cure?
welp this just got cute.
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You're a Faela.
No; it isn’t wrong to copy the faces of Twilight as you’re writing the story. It happens, and it shows that you enjoy writing this story. It’s not bad.