A young man named Matthew has a great business and great friends. What more could he ask for? Well, Matthew is about to get the surprise of his life when his friend brings to his house a strange girl who was out in the snow. Will Matthew be able to help this girl find her way home, or will he find love?
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Its a good plot but its not carried a good way. You have some grammar errors(I think) and you didn't capitalized the I's in some of the sentences.
. There is some other places but I don't feel like putting it down. Maybe you should get an editor. Three out of five Spikes for effort!
Peace out
Ginger
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Thanks for the help
Great work Im enjoying keep up the work
This is an interesting story. I like it, but I find it strange that Matt just believes Applejack so easily. I know if I found someone who claimed to have been from an alternate universe where they used to be a colorful talking pony then I'd bring them to a mental hospital to get their head examined.
Also, how come Applejack has not learned that her universe is a work of fiction in this universe? I'd think that being there for 3 months would be more than enough time to learn that.
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Well if you go back and read chapter 1, Matt was given a photo of her as a colorful pony, And the reason she hasn't found out that she is from a t.v show is because in this world the show was never made.
When will you be adding to the story
great job im loving it more and more
I have a Bad feeling with the Smiling Father
Keep up the work
Wonderful Chapter and a Beatiful Picture of a Human AppleJack
. What want the Bronie more?
great chapter can't wait for more. this is my favorite fic by far
A curse on that image of applejack! ¬L¬
great now she's back in my head....AND ITS THE SAME DAMN LIP BITE TOOO!!!!! GAHHHHH....
Gahd damnit!
Other than that, NICE WORK!!!!!
FINALLY!!! after five long Chapter's, they come together^^
Great work I love this story
Starting reading fic today loved it I say keep going wooo.
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C'mon dude! Don't lie that picture of AJ is fucking sexy!
great work glad to see a new chapter
new update
good so see a new one for such a well made fic
*YAY* More to read!!
I wonder where this story will end. Will Matt go with AJ to Equestria? Or will AJ stay with Matt? And when he goes with her to equestria, will he turned in a Pony or will he be a Human?
Sam is such a troll.
Ah damnit!!!
well, this fic has effort on it, and despite the quantity of dislikes, I'll give it a try
you have serious problems with the pacing and some grammar errors... And those are the ones that can be fixed inmediately
hey let not go in to the spoky town, said not teen ever
To be continue- FUUUUUUUUUU! freaking wow! by the way
i do believe that you meant something else but i can't tell what so i'll let you figure that out.
2830205. I fixed the typo. Sorry about that
and thanks for the review 
So DAMN Cool!!! AJ Will kicked the ass from this ghosts^^
2829907 dont go into the spooky town matt or you might get hurt or worse aj might get hurt. btw best story of aj ever. favorite of the two eart ponies in the mane 6. mybe favorite next rd.
2832832 oh and one more thing a suggestion maybe. lets hear from aj pov maybe once or twice.
well this could end badly
Told you we should have not gone in.
2839684 What? And missing this Adventure?
NEVER!!
2841302 well if the ghost come after us i triping u
More more more more more more more
2844120 ...that could work.
Because no one who watch the night sky for a living saw that ship taking off
And Docter Who
So no one going to talk about that ship? okay I'm going to bed
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww such love and caring brings joy to my heart.
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Cloaking.
Holy hell this is getting better and BETTER!!!!!!!!
great work cant wait for more
Good choice of song my frined.
Love the stroy keep on doing what your doing
THATS Getting VERY interesting^^
is that applejack's mom?
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You'll have to read Welcome To Sweet Apple Acres. In order to find out.
Oops i read Welcome to Sweet Apple Aces first......
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Lol well your lucky i read this comment before i read the other comment you left on Welcome to Sweet Apple Acres. Enjoy both stories.
Sexual Innuendo's? A plus
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dont go in to the mine girls...........
i agree this is geting better and better but by now im gettin mad at it saying "Ah" instead of "AJ"
