The sequel to Your Little Adventure
[2nd Person]
After you left ponyville 3 weeks ago you return back to your home in Fillydelphia. After another normal you get an unexpected visitor. Now you're faced with the decision whether or not to go back
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I'm glad you released it early!But now comes the part where I point out a mistake
Who's Ash?
*GASP* Who ever did that is DEAD!!! Wait...what? It's HER?! Oh crap.....
SHIMATA!
This Caught Me Surprised As TARTARUS!
Dream Sequence.........Bucking Extravagant As Buck
Altair......I Sense Assassins Creed......
New chapters NAOW!!!!!!!!!! ROOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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More
GOod
MORE
Awesome
yaaaa I can't wait for the next chapter
Dun dun dun!
WHAT.....THE......BUCK?!?!?!?!
2303231 bruce campbell of course
Great chapter!
..........Well That Was An Excrusiatingly Interesting And Short-Ish Chapter.....Good To See You Back
what do mean i can't go back.... you sir are plotting something big already, i can feel it.
Moar comrade Spetsnaz pinkie pie demands of or no vodka.
The moment was there. The moment where he would forget everything and come back to Ponyville to be with Rainbow, but then he just says.....no. NO!? Are you kidding me guy. I wanna punch that stallion so bad.
CANT COME BACK?!?! FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
2329149 Since this is 2nd person..... Stop hitting yourself!
Star Gazer, the pegasus that is us, is telling Rainbow Dash, the mare who has been having nightmares about his well-being, that he can't come back to Ponyville. This won't go over well...
Wait! What if they brought Big Mac to talk to Star Gazer? Knowing the relationship those two have, he could convince him (or us) somehow!
Better yet, maybe Scootaloo could called upon so she can use a puppy-face expression to sway Star Gazer's opinion by utilizing one of the most powerful forces in the universe: The Magic of Guilt!
P.S. Bonus points for whoever can guess what "The Magic of Guilt" is a reference to.
BUT I WANT TO GO
Dun dun duuunnnnnn, he can't go back!? I LOVE IT!! Awesome chapter.
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Well that sucks
That Was Undoubtedly Un-Joyful.
My Best Wishes For Stargazer And Rainbow Dash.
I can just feel the amount of heartbreak the two had to go through. Kudos.
will they ever get back together
I sense a epic plot twist will happen
WHY!!!
Can't wait for the next, just watch out for those spelling mistakes I saw in this one.
Jumbler Was Beautiful!
He's Just What I Raised Him To Be.
A Jumbler
Good Chapter.Very.....Very Good Chapter
Very good chapter
Let me guess, since Jumbler cant have StarGazer he'll take Rainbow Dash.
YAY!!!!!!!!
AWESOME! I'M GOING BACK!
Lol
with Big Mac on my side, no pony will mess with me.
Yay! Going back and gets a bodyguard!
Sweetness. I have finally manned up and an going to be with Rainbow.
"I don't need that stuff" you say and then look at you parents "Because right now"
You pause for effect
"My marefriend needs me"
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... Well I was not exspecting this, by the way will Cloudchaser return?
AWESOME
He's Going Back!HALLELUJAH!
Just got drunk that is funny
Bad berry bad you should write faster
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He writes fast enough sometimes more sometimes less
DAMN YOU BERRY! DAMN YOU!!!
I wonder what he will do
LOL! Damn you Berry Punch
*Suddenly Captain Jack Sparrow Appears On The Screen*
Jack:WHERE THE BLOODY HELL IS THE RUM!
Yes meet the parents I wonder if possible meet the fockers joke
This should be fun