Spike receives a letter from Princess Celestia summoning him to Canterlot with most urgency. As he's leaving to go to Canterlot, he's stopped by Rarity. Rarity is sad to see Spike leave, especially since she had a special message to tell him. Rarity made Spike promise to come back, wanting to tell him that special message. Unannounced to her, Spike was sent on a life threatening mission. Will Spike return, and will Rarity have the chance to tell him the secret message?
In this story, Spike is about 18 years in pony years, and Rarity is about 25.
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Chapters (8)
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Damn tragedy. As much as I want to read this I can't handle tragedy stories well. I like happy endings. Anyways what I read was so far very nice good job.
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This is one tragedy I think you may like
(This story will be a "must read" to understand what happens in the possible sequel)
Thank you, I'm glad to hear you like it!
Argh! NO! Spike needs to know
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He might find out in the next few chapters
You'll just have to wait and find out.
Half of chapter 2 is done, the ending is almost done (I'll probably make changes as I go).
2724158 The suspence is killing me xD
Dear Celestia!
This looks pretty interesting. I will be following this story.
Oh, and this sentence
Only have two problems though. One, where's the romance tag? And two, in the letter from Celestia she never said anything about a threat to Equestia so you may won't to fix that.
Spike gave her a kiss on the cheek before, not a hug. It would look probably look better like this
Just trying to help.
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The threat is going to be mentioned in another chapter.
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The romance tag is there...
2728203I'm sure it will, but Spike doesn't know that in this chapter.
2728205Sorry, must have missed it when I was looking at another story.
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No worries.
And to explain why I made the letter the way I did, was because I wanted it to be basically a "we need you now, it's an emergency, I'll explain everything when you get here."
well....spike's gonna die and that's some shit I don't like!
*raises his hand with a question* Twilights statement makes no sense at all. Theres plenty of dragons and ponies? What dragons could she possibly be talking about that could hookup with Spike? All we really know about dragons in the MLP universe is that they're anti-social, loners and basically everything Spike isn't. Unless there's a dragoness that was raised by ponies that everypony wasn't told about, not really seeing him having a relationship with any female dragons. And as for ponies, what the fuck is she talking about? Because it wouldn't work out with Rarity being a pony it would work out with another pony instead? Or was Twilight trying to imply that it would work out the best if Spikme went after her since she's now immortal?
Aww. I love this Chapter it's so sweet. Finally meeting up with Twilight after all that time.
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Will he?
who wants to bet the egg thief is Celstia
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It was just advice of the moment. Not a true meaning behind it.
2914469 Hope so cause that is horrible advice. Spike has lived amond ponies his entire life and therefore would only wanna be with a pony. Plus he now knows enough about dragons that he doesn't wanna be like them. Dragons being what they would probably snub Spike and any dragoness' wouldn't want anything to do with him once they found out he was raised by ponies.
so let me get this straight: The main reason the dragons are going to war is because some of their eggs are getting stolen? and the first question from Spike's mouth isn't finding out where HIS egg came from?
You'd think that'd be an important question, as well as a defining feature of his relation with the dragons, for all they know he's a captured egg that was brainwashed or something...
but then again, that was my thoughts going through my head while reading this
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And don't forget the OBVIOUS TAG THAT'S RIGHT IN YOUR FACE... ALTERNATE UNIVERSE
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Well don't forget, there are more chapters coming up.
2914646 I know, but that'd be my very first question after her speech, if I was in his shoes of course
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Now to wait for the events of Chapter 3...
Maybe not...
2914390 Well actually dragons on the show aren't necessarily antisocial
or evil. It's just that they were either spurned on by the actions of another or hormones.
Dragon Quest: The teenage dragons act like normal teenagers do. Be disrespectful and rebellious.
Owls well that end well : Spike trespassed and ate from the hoard of dragon.
Dragon shy: The dragon was lectured to
, annoyed 
, stolen from 
, 
. and evicted 
.
kick in the face
So Spike is totally for it not even questioning it? Despite the fact that this is most likely how his egg was brought to Celestia.
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This. We know next to nothing about Dragons. And I doubt the Ponies "big, scary" stereotype is totally true.
2914664 if this is canceled I will...
2916192 My point exactly.
Ponies just happened to be narrow and single minded.
Jump to conclusions on a certain zebra.
Make offhand comments about mules. Notice a pattern here.
2916190 That does seem logical.
Have you noticed how ponies having a habit of creating
their own problems. Yet they refuse to believe they are at fault.
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No worries man, I don't plan on cancelling this.
My plans are to finish this story first. Just because all my ideas for this story are flowing.
I worry when Twilight said "Now I would be with you as your war buddy the whole time". And it is because I am of Sparity and this me uncomfortable.
2918729 Woo hoo! This is just fantastic
The ending...? Well, I think someone's gonna die... probably Spike.
Future chapters? I think Rarity may make her to Canterlot, because she's worried about Spike. Maybe she'll be part if the war or, a dragon takes her and Spike tries save her and sadly dies
As for the culprit... I have no clue. An unknown pony or Celestia or... I really don't know.
Anyway, great chapter. Can't wait to read the next one
2931058 That would seem logical, I feel a weird vibe about
,
she has a hoof in it, knows more than she lets on , or she is trying to protect someone.
I highly doubt Celestia just 'found' his egg abandoned in a forest. Spike's 'dream' was probably exactly what Celestia did to his parents.
Celestia as the old saying goes power corrupts
I say Spike should betray them but then betray the dragons and go back to the ponies
Bullshit they just "found" Spike's egg
Could end up with a death or happy ending could Rarity go to Canterlot or something bad could happen in the next chapters.
But it's your story, good luck
2931176 Makes sense.
I can already see their plan of action fall apart when Spike finds out
how his egg really turned up in Equestria.
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Hold on does Spike love Rarity or does he think of her a friend now
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He only thinks of her as a friend.
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Well that just means there's more to look forward to in the next few chapters...
Reads Chapter: I guessed right? OMGosh
Great chapter can't wait for the next one
2942230 That picture is priceless.
2942041 He can see him lose all faith in ponies.
He might go on a rampage.
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