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What if MLP went in a different direction and added a human in to the cast? and let's say he is apart of our own reality and stumbled in to the wrong universe but found a way to travel in between both... well this is that story.
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nice
Aweosme!!!!!
hello everyone, I'm not sure how often I will be able to update but I just had to get this idea out of my head. I hope it does well and everyone gets as much joy out of as I do but really I wrote this for my own entertainment. Enjoy
hmmmmmm... you have caught my interest. ill follow for now.
Yes.......this is relevant to my interests.
.....>.>...and plot....
Take All My Yes And My Other Fellow Bronies Yes Too And Mold Them Into The 2nd Chapter.
2228725 Alright I'm working on the next chapter now... may take me anywhere from a few hours or a few days to complete, but I have it started
2232072 May Coffee Be With You.
Story made me smile all the way through.
I think it's supposed to be 'sync', not 'sink'.
Not quite sure how to react to Celestias (Molestias?) intensions, but the story is good so far. Keep it up!
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Possibly some Celestia going but ship James with pinkie because well pinkie.
2294423> sorry about that I'll fix it
2294541> yeah I started to fix it half way through but then I forgot, next on the list
2294684> oh I'm just going to make it in to a running gag, watch out for sex hungry Celestia
E-P-I-C S-T-O-R-Y FTW
Now......I Wonder What Will Happen Next
lol you pretty much broke me when celestia randomly asked to mate with him. liking it so far.
love it this is epic!!!!!
Spacing seems to be a slight issue in this chapter. Just remember, usually when a new character speaks, even if it is back and forth, single sentences, you should indent, unless you mean to have the characters talk over each other. That should reduce the wall of text I've been seeing.
Other than that, good job, I look forward to reading this more.
Going to keep reading this AWESOME fan fic, but the part with Celestia worries me. . .
Loved it cant wait for more!!!!!
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2303401>>2303352 thank you for the positive feed back, always nice to know I'm doing something right
Great! I'm loving this story. Hope James can defend himself from Molestia.
Trollestia X2 In One Chapter?
Buck Yeah
lol loving it so far, but the thing you gotta remember is that hes supose to be in a kids cartoon bieng watched on telly. You should refrane from cursing atleast.
2303777 true, but I'm going to explain that later on, basically he is being highly censored, I mean they would have to if it was a real human.
Just give her the spanking she wants it and only he will give it *BAM*
That.....could have been taken the wrong way so damn easily.
Jeez Pinkie
You look like someone shot your hamster and flushed him down the toilet. I swear to God that girl is Bi-polar and a bunch of other neurological disorders.
Apparently the Awkward Dial on this Fic goes up to 11.
2306211 eeyup
Keep going this is a great story!
Legend Of Zelda Reference?
2322378 damn straight
Molestia LIVES!!!!
Why do I have the feeling that Fluttershy's favour will herald doom rather than her usual harmless antics?
I would've retrolled her by reading the entire letter to everyone and enjoy the awkwardness at the gala.
Gordon Bennett! Are you some sort of republican? It'd be more believable if the crime was punishable by experiencing a full-scale Pinkie-type hug (read: crushing); the series strongly implies that Celestia prefers ironic disciplinary measures.
2306212
Mate, if I have any grasp on this story at all 11 doesn't even end that dial. Somewhere around the seventh digit would be easier to say.
2323065>> I have no idea what you are talking about
2324562>> she was just being cautious around the potential threat
2325154>> oh you have no idea, it's going to get a whole lot worse before it gets better
2323065
Because it's always the quiet ones?
The private audience with the Princesses got a little confusing at times. when you get a chance you might want to put in line breaks for each speaker like so;
"Now, now Luna, don't blow a gasket, besides you must know what it is like to be alone for so long without any others to fill the void, so what if I enjoy a few lovers from time to time, it keeps me sane."
Luna looked ashamed but I had a completely different look upon my face, one that just shouted "poker face". I opened and closed my mouth a few times before finally finding my voice "umm... no thank you."
Both princesses looked at me with shock as if this answer would never be uttered in a thousand years, but I guess if you are a god-princess that everyone adored, then maybe she really never had been denied before.
Never abandon this story! Must have more of pinkies wonderful plot!
Crap, sorry about that everyone I hit the wrong button.
my bad
You have met with a terrible fate, haven't you?
hahahahahaha nice Legend of Zelda reference
Having a bit of trouble there mate? Your story said it updated but, there isn't any new chapter. Oh and you should probably tell your Pre-Readers to not comment till the chapter is officially up.
loved all of it
Moar comrade vodka is you're gift for moar
Hmm, can't wait for the gala episode with James.