A normal day on the job, (or so he thought) sends Etrius through a portal to Equestria. However something in the air changes the mares, and stallions, when he's around them...
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Artyom the Brony
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Well this seems like a good story
If you readers so choose, and I get enough comments about it, this may change to clop. It will not unless a lot of you want it to though.
The only problem I have?
Have you SEEN the Hearth's Warming Eve episode? Chancellor Puddinghead? "I shall call this place... uuuuhhh... Dirtville!" "Uh, how about Earth?" "EARTH!"
you have a point, I shall edit some things
nice story, wanna see what happens next :P
to be honest, i don't think Rainbow Dash would say something like that to a mysterious newcomer. great story though. MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
His religion is Norse???
the pegasi have the hots for him! lol
I appreciate the feedback, and in due time you will understand why she did that as I too agree, Rainbow Dash wouldn't normally do something like that.
Interesting can't wait to see more :)
Honestly I like it. He should get into a smartass match with Tia
smartass? I am not a smartass.
Celestia. You always have a remark for everything. Your a smartass.
we agree
ha! See? Your a smartass
but.....I'm not....i don't....*starts crying*
Whoa whoa where'd that come from?
*still crying*
*frowns* ok ok I'm sorry your not a smartass
r-really? *sniff*
Yeah really. Your not a smartass. I'm sorry.
*grins tears disappearing* your so easy
What! I- you were- dang.
*laughs*
2754185 That sounds unbelievably fun to write. Thank you for the suggestion!!
This guy sure loves to be in Valhalla...but then again who wouldn't?
Damn. Celestia really wants the D.
runing really so .... Almost whole ponyvilly and more want to fuck one man really
and this the part when you come in and have choice get laid forever or get what is it called raip rapid ? well i hope no gays come along in the fuck crowd
hmmm well metal gear solid
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?
I is confuzzled. Wha-what happens now?
Heh... It was good.
Do a sequel or I will do very unpleasant things to this baby seal.
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HUHHHH!?
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Seriously, WHAT THE FUCK?!!
IT WAS ALL A LIE! So yeah, I got lazy and came up with this plot twist ending, and then on the walk back from school today I came up with a good idea for a sequel that will be much longer and more meaningful. As for your reactions... Mission accomplished.
This was my reaction to this ending
I know this is probably a little late, but I like it so far!
3225995 better late than never! I always appreciate a comment!
and uhh... keep reading to find out exactly who 'drugged,' Rainbow Dash.
Well..... that happened.
That escalated quickly.
Maybe people just liked the way you did everything and didn't want to help.
I would jump out a window too yelling FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU you get the point
fast-paced orgasmopoo wish-drooling poop
dislike.
U amazing bastard
It's nice to see the mixed comments everybody. Gives me support, that I don't entirely suck, but that there's definitely room to improve.
cheese
Well... Someone took the easy way out. Should've let him get raped at this point. Oh well, better than a giant T-Rex popping up and saying "Rawr" then poofing to an end. Seen that before.
3707186 There's still hope for you. I'm still deciding on how the sequel should end. The dark tag might pop up sometime. Also seriously? I kinda want to read that story now just to see how bad it is.
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Ah, wasn't aware there was a sequel. My bad.
And the story was a school setup involving some guy in a college with ponies. The general plot was talk to girl, get her number, she's most likely in love with you. But the main love interest was Rainbow Dash If I recall right.
Ha i just got done beating metro 2033 and thats your guys name artyom but being about russians maybe spelled differently
2685330 ahh it hurts a marine cring cause hes alive what bullshit it buuuurns
I just found out how to get many bits there
Breath into a bag and sell the bag to ponys