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I'm sure Euphoria's going to get her own Frame; SAM just needs the resources to build it! Or something like this...
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LOL I'd thought about it, but I like her better just wearing the eye piece. Like a MGS4 Solid Eye.
2309912 Ah, cool. It's just, she seems like such a tech / gear-head pony, what with doing all this amazing stuff for Samuel and being interested in SAM. You will modify the Visor she's wearing into her own set of custom Blast/Welding Goggles, though (as Samuel thinks she looks cute wearing them)!
If you can make complex repairs to an advanced exo-suit, shouldn't you be capable of making bullets?
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He can, but mostly he's busy keeping the Pegasus Frame in good repair, and also as noted, he prefers nonlethal weapons. The only thing he's actually killed in Equestria is a psychotic dragon. He's even turned vegetarian because the cows talk. Making bullets would just give the ponies dangerous ideas if they caught him doing it. Twilight's the only other pony who even suspects the lethal nature of the rifle.
Basically, he's being careful about exposing the ponies to the recipe for gunpowder. Although AJ would probably look awesome with a Winchester rifle.
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It would be more trouble than it's worth to combine the visor with a set of blast goggles just for Euphoria. He doesn't possess the machinery to make that kind of hardware. So for now he can just detach a piece of it and let Euphoria carry it. That leaves his eye exposed and the helmet doesn't make an airtight seal in that condition.
2310691 Well, he still has a baddass halberd. By the way, is this a like a plus 12 Halberd or something? Still got nothing on Unsycthe.
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LOL it probably varies. If he's avenging something for great justice, the Halberd is like +5, but if he's just using it as an ordinary weapon against creatures that haven't done anything to be avenged, then it might not even release any mojo at all. Twilight could lecture him on it for hours, but then he would be,
A - Not out avenging/discovering stuff, and
B - Talking about Unicorn magic might make Euphoria sad if she's in the room. Anyway, he's happy knowing the Halberd is what it is.
2310788 Ah, true. If it was +12 he'd be able to kill things just by making them look at it. I was also kinda hoping you'd picked up on my MTG reference since you assumingly play D&D. (Not saying that one has to play both, just hoping you'd happen to.)
Thanks for this chapter. It made me re-think about technology.
God i need to use more advanced terms language more akdfgshdhgieicnensocne..... Just more high tech stuff in MY story.
ur story.
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Wow, thanks. I'm glad people like it. I want to keep writing more of it.
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>+12
>Not just going full retard with pun pun
2315104 I don't even. Am I being insulted or complimented. I am unable to english at the moment.
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It means implying something. or used as a statement. In response to your query. I am implying +12 is alright, but Pun pun is better. For info on Pun pun follow this link: http://www.dandwiki.com/wiki/Pun-Pun_(3.5e_Optimized_Character_Build)
2315798 OOOOh, no see I thought you meant Pun as in the english word pun. I got confused.
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I know, but I felt like showing proper English. Pun pun is the best!
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Well not really, I have a few min max builds much much stronger.
2315859 Tis all well and good my fine fellow. (You spoke of proper English, this is immediately where my mind journeyed to.)
I almost don't want to give this a thumbs up, only because it is at the perfect number right now. 69 Oh well, it's for a good cause.
I knew there was a reason I sift through unknown stories. This story diserves more attention than it has. But you need an editor. Bad.
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Thank you for the critique. I just write these chapters directly on the site, no spell-check and no proofreader. If you know anyone who'd be interested in proof reading and editing, let me know.
Also, I notice my story always attracts more views when I update with a new chapter. I guess I just need to write more, but I've been busy this easter. Going back to writing very soon.
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Ain't that the truth. Keep plugging away at it. And edit for spelling ASAP. The issue is that you are using the wrong word that is pronounced the same but the wrong word. Homonyms are a bitch. Also: it is of my personal opinion that the clop you have is out of place. I thought the kissing to communicate cuz you couldn't do anything else was cute and endearing, but the sex was too much
2362709 I'll do it...I have 'uploaded' Oxford's Dictionary to my head....Grammar Nazi powers are awesome for proofreading.
Loving the story so far
Can't wait to c what you make of the next chapter
Btw when might you be posting it?
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The massive dwellings is my way of having fun with the interpretation of the MLP universe. Check the show, see how big the rooms are inside to allow for shots of six friends, two of which have wings and one who teleports. You need a lot of ceiling space to have pegasi visit.
I read all of this story yesterday and today. Just wanted to comment and say how much I've enjoyed this story! Well-written science fiction is very hard to find on this site and I really love the detail and explanations that go into the technology and future capabilities of humanity. Some of the stuff doesn't make sense to me (e.g., SAM being able to figure out the Equestrian language with no real basis or comparison to draw upon, maybe if he could see an Equestrian picture dictionary or something I could believe it; or the Pegasus Frame being able to power itself from just solar panels and converting his motion into energy seems kind of questionable due to limits on efficiency) but I still enjoy it! Furthermore, one thing that really annoys me in many human-in-Equestria fics is that the human protagonist is often presented as inferior to ponies and unambitious/lazy, performing menial jobs, etc. I like how in this story, the human is impressive and ambitious. Also I really like the emotion in this story. I get hit in the feels when I read this and I can feel the pain, sorrow, and love from the characters. Regarding the clop, I actually don't mind it even if it's explicit, although I don't think its strictly necessary either. Readers who don't like it can just skip over it. Also I feel sorry for Euphoria; I was wondering if her vocal cords might be able to be repaired with human nanotech or pony magic/healing? Anyways, definitely looking forward to reading future chapters of this story!
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Thank you so much for your comment. I'm really glad you liked it. SAM's ability to flawlessly decipher Equestrian was my way of neatly sidestepping the language barrier rather than having to write several chapters of non-verbal communication with the ponies. At this point in the story, only about a month has passed and that isn't enough time to allow for anyone to pick up a language, gifted machine intelligence or not. I just wasn't going to write that many pages of what would only amount to a total breakdown in communication.
As for powering the suit, I did mention he had powercells (3 in total of which Euphoria used one) and that instantly recharged his powerlevels. I like to think the solar panels recharge that battery, which has enough juice to otherwise sustain lengthy operations. Like an electric car.
As for fixing Euphoria's vocal cords, it would be tricky and require Earth technology. A laboratory, custom nanomachines, a surgeon, none of which Samuel has. The only ones who have nanomachines are Samuel and the Pegasus Frame and they are custom-tailored to restore either body to match the original blueprint, cell by cell. Assuming you can get all of that, Euphoria's voice might be restored but it won't necessarily be a singer's voice. Pretty much, that whole part of her life is lost to her forever and she's learning to embrace the human lifestyle, which as you said is ambitious. As for accepting Pony style miraculous healing, well, they'd probably want to restore her Cutie Mark, too in a misguided attempt to make her into who she was before getting captured. I'm not sure that, given a choice, Euphoria would even want that.
I love this story it's perfect in my eyes
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Thank you. :)
More.
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I am still writing the next chapter, but my life has been demanding my attention of late and whenever I got a few days to myself, I've been either sick or in need of company. Yeah, cheesy as it sounds, I've been enjoying the magic of friendship. But hey, it can make just about any experience bearable.
Thank you for the comments; they never fail to brighten my day. I'll get back to writing more soon.
2510987 Well try to have some fun while you're on break. It tends to help with later problems.
keep the tecnobabble going I actually like it and it enhances the story for me at least