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Awesome story. Only one problem... Y U MIX DIFFERENT AGES?!
Twilight and robocop around 21th century. Biogenetics Around the year 2900 - 3300. Nanobots Around 3600 - 4200. Quantum technology Around 5300 - 5500.
So please fix this. Otherwise it was awesome
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Honestly, I don't see your logic or how you could arrive at those numbers. It's sci-fi technology and until we actually obtain it, it's meaningless to speculate on what year that would occur. The time period during which Samuel left earth is a not-too-distant future, or possibly even present day. Like the story reads in the first chapter, it's all experimental technology and prototypes, completely dodging the bureaucracy and legal technicalities.
I've seen a TED Talks video where scientists surgically implanted a wire in an infant chimpanse's brain and as the chimp matured, they'd built a fully functional cybernetic arm for said ape to remote pilot with his mind. We can already do a lot of crazy stuff with science.
As for 'fixing' that bit, I don't think I can and if you've played games like Metal Gear Solid 4, you'll notice nanobots is already pretty common in sci-fi writing, even for stories ano 2010-ish.
Finally, the quantum technology is also borrowed from stuff like TED Talks. We have so-called quantom computers today, though we haven't succeeded in getting them to do more than a dozen computations at a time. We also have quantom teleportation for sending top-secret messages. It's pretty wild, actually.
Anyway, thank you for the comment. I always appreciate critique, but I don't feel like I've exceeded the levels of technology we see in games like MGS. If players can invest faith in an alternate timeline where we're going to see Cyborg Ninja Raiden in a few years, then my story isn't too over the top, either. :P
Awesome work!
Massive feels when the ponies saw her injuries...
But Rarity will still be able to make her beautiful; I know it. With Euphoria as a model, the fashionista will bring back the old-time glitz, glamour, and razzle-dazzle; Rarity will make Euphoria even more beautiful than she already is, and it'll drive poor Samuel nuts / to sheer distraction!
Unicorn healers should at least be able to remove or smooth away her terrible scarring and broken horn, though. No miracle cure for her disabilities as they make her unique, but just smoothing off what's already there, healing her physical scars so she looks like an Earth Pony.
That might give poor Euphoria some closure; another 'chapter' in her life finally put to rest.
2299691 Well, I'm talking about rational numbers. The numbers i used is for the peaks of that age. Then there is something inbetween each age. After Quantum bots, Super advanced technology, Earth will probably lay in ruins. Because there is no limit for mankinds stupidity
2300278 Hai! XD We sure seem to find eachother frequently.
There's a very fine line that's often distorted between pity and care.
Never pity or show remorse, because those who want it are pathetic. and those who need it don't want it
Just be .... nice
put a comedy tag i am laughing in the fist chapter lol