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Interesting start, and I'm digging the crazy sci-fi suit. Would comment on the narrative and character interaction, but of course, by necessity, that hasn't happened yet. I'll say this much, you have my interest.
A minor quibble; unless bullpup configuration rifles are extremely odd in the future, I doubt very much that they utilize a clip. What they probably use is a detachable magazine, which is NOT the same thing.
These are examples of clips:
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/97/Clip_M1-SKS.JPG
The term clip is often erroneously used interchangably with the term magazine, but it is not the same thing at all. The primary difference between the two is that a clip lacks a spring loaded mechanism to feed bullets into the weapon, which a magazine has.
Just a bit of gun trivia, and something that irked me in an otherwise extremely interesting intro chapter.
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Thank you for the comment and the gun trivia. I'm not familiar with firearms beyond reading stories about people who use them sometimes. Next time I'm browsing through my old chapters, I'll edit the parts where it says clip. I realise magazines are probably what I had in mind from the start as well.
I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.
I can think of three things that SAM means. Your acronym for it, the computer, and the thrice damned Surface to Air Missile. There everywhere I tell you!