Applejack shares an evening at a bar with a strange blue pegasus.
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I have a soft spot of Applejack/Sorin' so that is what got into this. This oneshot is cliche, but then again so is everything else. This is good, and I do wish to see more. And about your second note:
1) Equesrtia had agriculture, and like us they will have to find a way to store their crops in winter and transport them. And converting say apples in brandy is a good way at doing it.
2-4) I ain't even going to touch those.
Still good job.
I Love Soarin'XApplejack
I thought this was well done.
One thing to add to those: Ditzy working at a bar? What is that?
4/5. I'm glad to see you trying new characters you don't normally write with, this was decent for a one-shot. Appreciate the SoarinJack with your twist on it though!
SoarinJack is one of my favorite pairings. Please keep it up.
Great story!
"What the heck did you just read?" That's actually not far off from what I was thinking myself... Oh well. Can't win 'em all.
P.S. Shit, I'm the only neighsayer here? Crap, now I feel bad.
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Don't feel bad, this story is actually quite awfully written. Like you said, can't win 'em all. :)
Now I want to know what happened at the birthday party...
Well that was an unexpected pairing.
But I liked it
I'm with Demonshadow, WHAT birthday?
Got sent here by Present Perfect, and I was not disappointed! Short, sweet, and featuring one of my favorite ships. Well done!
...er, a year after the fact...
My fave ships are soarin'jack rainbow mac and flutterburn
3553464 Mine too! But I also like probably the most unknown and underrated ship, AppleCord- AJ x Discord
3597487 I can see that. I geuss
I like it,that is all
"Soarins a Badass not afraid to show it, he's a pimp but just don't know it"
From Spit n Winds new album "Bits over fillies"
Oh oh oh! If Aj joined the band, they could be Earth, Wind, and Fire! Damn I'm clever today!
Heartwarming. Fun and funny. I like the portrayal of AJ here...