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The Blackcuno


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After a Few weeks of trying to figure out why her sister disappears each Saturday evening, Apple Bloom is adamant to figure this out on her own.

But when she finds out about the true relationship between her family and the Timber Wolves, her life wont ever be the same ever again.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

Interesting, that's for sure. Have an upvote :moustache:
BTW, is it done? It says 'FIN' at the end but it's marked as incomplete

2605547 my derp :derpytongue2: - was late last night when i uploaded it finally.

Nice Story, i would like to se a sequel showing how Applebloom adjusts.

Yeeeeeeeeeeesss.... An timberjack story. I have my mind fild with that AJ was a timberwolf.... Thank you:yay:

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Lol.

Edit, sorry about the image, I had to.
The story is pretty solid, but it could use a couple of editors, the part with Discord is where it struggles the most.
All in all I liked it!

Zecora not rhiming kinda bugs me

This needs a sequel, but a bit more editing in the next one (if there is one of course). It has a lot of errors in punctuation and grammar, and a few instances where I felt (and I may or may not be wrong) that characters were out of character. I enjoyed the story, and hope that if you make a sequel, that I'll enjoy it even more so.

“well, I think I know that this is no concern of mine now” Zecora said, “it is nice to see it all work out in the end. Have no fear; your secret will remain with me”

That doesn't really rhyme. Here, let me try.

"Well, I think this is no concern of mine," Zecora said, "It is is fine to see, such a happy family. Do not worry just one bit, your secret will stay safe, with me guarding it."

i like these kinds of stories were the "monster" isn't a monster and she has friends that understand. would love to see a squeal but its your story and you do what ya will with it. :pinkiehappy:

Loved the story. Any chance of expanding this story, or even a world?? :pinkiesad2:

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Love this story, can you do a Sequel of Timber-Jack?.

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In response to these comments, I have not had time to write any additions, though i may later expand the universe of these on but no guarantees.

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All Right we understood.

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