(CANCELED UNTIL FURTHER NOTICE)
A sequel to my first story, 'A Hero's Story'. Taking a few years after, Brandon, with his adopted daughter Scootaloo, and his actual daughter, Night Runner, fight apocalypse omens, old enemies, and of course, because we all forgot about him, DISCORD.
Show me some love. And constructive criticism.
Interesting. Haven't read the first but I guess I should.
well sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyt
Whoa. Dashie? WHY!
420744 Sorry dawg, shit happens...
good work, as always.
427237 Thanks!
427850 no problem
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
494637 Sorry man, I've been mapping out another story in my head though. It'll be better (hopefully) and it'll actually have character development.
494700 that makes me fell a lot better, can't wait.
I see you put in my characters. It actually went surprisingly well, and you're right: it didn't affect the story much. You managed to change around who and how was there and what happened, which is good, because Fluttershy's alive here and, well... you know. Good job. I'm actually a bit sad to see this cancelled. Oh well. If the story was going nowhere, then it was going nowhere. C'est la vie.