Why do you keep switching between Cup Cake and Mrs.Cake? Pick one or the other.

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because either way works,

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But constantly switching between the two names is disorienting. Especially when you're switching between two names in two sentences right next to each other.

Either use "Mrs.Cake" or "Cup Cake", don't use both.

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its same way how if im talking about like.. shining armor, for instance. i can say "shining armor" or i can say "the white colt" or something along those lines.

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Referring to a character by name, and then referring to them by a physical description is acceptable. Constantly referring to a character using two different names is not.

It's like if you kept switching back and forth between "Pinkie" and "Pinkamena Diane Pie" all the time...it's just disorienting and confuses the reader.

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well... i suppose if i add anymore chapters to this story, ill just call her mrs. cake

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Alright im replying to EVERYON who ever left a comment on this story....
im asking you all whether or not you want this story continued, i came to this page to change the status of this story "completed" but i ended up reading the comments again and I'm wondering if you would like to see more.

id be continuing with the idea of mr and mrs.' cakes porn thing but with different background ponies. i dont think id add in any of the main 6 minus maybe pinkie because... you know, she lives with them.

Sheheld the vial in her mouth and stood beside the bed; watching, filming, and waiting for her husband to get his fill of this mare’s juices.

no space

Mrs. Cake leaned back in, only thing time lower, planting her lips on Milky’s neck, and moving lower. She slowly kissed down the yellow mare’s body. She pushing Milky onto her back as she went down,
Thing typo, pushing typo

Mr. Cake alternated between short, quick thrusts and long, slow strokes with his cock between the big crotch tits. Mr. Cake kept the camera focused on the penetration on the whole time, giving it a point of view perspective.

on typo