"You have been called upon to serve, you will be trained... and you will become the best we can make of you. You will be the protectors of Earth and all her colonies..." Dr. Halsey
She fought. She killed. She risked everything to protect what she thought was important. She fought alongside the Master Chief from her spartan training days to the Battle at Requiem. But after the nuke explosion a portal takes her back to Equestria, with no memory of living there once before.
A/N I would like if some one out there could get me a good cover art for this. Something like Twilight as a human Spartan.
Chapters (2)
some grammar errors, but that's all
I hope the next chapter is a tad bit better
So she got turned into a human?
Well, its definitely an interesting concept. I cant say i've seen something quite like this in an MLP/Halo crossover. I will fave this for now and see where it goes, good luck.
Holy crap! I really didn't see that coming! Twilight as a spartan! You are a genius. Release the next chapter ASAP! Favorited and LIKED!
This premise looks awfully familiar.
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Ok, carry on. This intrigues me.
Got a few spelling and grammar issues, though. Might wanna go over any future chapters with a fine-toothed comb or get an editor.
Other than that, this is solid.
Gyvon approves, so mote it be. I warn you now, though. Halo fanfics are a dime a dozen. You have some big shoes to fill and a very expensive quill in your hands to pull this off. We'll see how this goes.
ah yes yes this is good very good......I SHALL READ THIS FOR DAYS
like what journey said you have big shoes to fill and this better work because its the first halo i have read thats like this *cupa pokes dawn*.......and cupa's wanting to see the whole thing complete
I will like but will need to see one more chapter before I decide to fav.or not. also is spartan twilights voice like pony twilights voice? or is it different.
I'm watching this one.
The grammar was pretty tough to overcome. But I did it anyway. Good story.
4/5 Moustaches
I volunteer for editing duty.
2175532 Imagine her regular voice except darker.
2179559 oh ok but shoudnt one of the ponies make this observation? or is it going to be made next chapter?
2179670 next chapter
First, copy and paste the text into a Word Document, and everything underlined with red squiggles, fix it. Now.
Awfully reminiscent of Gyvon's ODST series, but I won't hold that against you.
2184730 Done and done.
This is kind of like his but with a difference.
This is a very interesting concept and I like that. I am definitely following this.
What kind of armor does twilight spartan have? because I would really like to know and how come the armor isnt purple it would help to make it look more like twilight.
Wait in the first chapter you said her armor was green why is it purple and black now? Also faving because I believe its worthy of liking.
2199094 I changed it because the purple suited her better than green
2199103 Suited... haha...
Hey author, I think i may have a good pic for you. PM me for more details.
In other news, good chapter. I wonder where this will go from here. Keep up the good work.
2199457 CMC plus Spartan equals trouble
you say in the first chapter her armor is purple and grey why does rarity say its purple and black?
Hey man, great chapter. I like how this is developing. There is just one thing I would like to point out:
Now, it's not a big deal and it's was probably was just a mental lapse considering you used the correct term in the sentence afterword, but I do believe the Human Sniper Rifle is magazine fed.
2206023 She's a two. So she has no idea who the ponies are
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this fic is brilliant such a nice take on the hole 'twilight gets teleported away' story since she completely changes here.
i don't think the memory spell has to wipe her memory applejack remembered what had happened to her
2207077 didn't she get here by manually detonating a nuke? only two Spartan IIs (sam & john)have done that and only one has mk VI armour (compatible with AA)
update!!!
9 feet tall...
Master Chief was only 7 feet and 2 inches tall in his armor. Even Jorge-052 was 8 feet tall(In armor of course)! Twilight just can't be taller than that.
I'd say for her: about 6 ft 8 in to 7 ft 0 in.
Other than that, it's pretty interesting. I'd like to see where this goes.
This is new, you got my attention!
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this is kinda weird though as she had only been gone a year yet she went through training with the chief meaning she was there when he was a child, went through the augmentation, was on reach when It fell, and helped blow up the halo ring killing the flood, then floated through space for 4 years before coming out of cryo. yeh something just doesn't add up and is annoying me.
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fair enough
When is the next part coming out because I just read both parts and I want to see more of this
need new chapter. just read them both for the fifth time since it came out and i need more
Need more chapters please.
Almost forgot to favorite XD
Would it be insulting if you gave Twi Unicorn armor? You know, FOTUS.
Hello are you still alive!
Wait is twilight a Spartan 2 or 3 she sure as hell ain't a Spartan 4? (p.s. the reason why twi ain't a Spartan 4 is because a Spartan 4 is supposed to have a full name not a word and numbers.)
Update, please. I want to see where this goes
I see a major flaw in their plan to erase Twilight's post portal memories to regain her pre portal memories. Even if they did bring her memories back, not only woulfpd she still be human, but she would still have her SPARTAN augmentations and unable to control her strength, so returning her memories would do more harm than good.
Don't know how I misspelled would.
Please keep going
Moar?