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I read what you've got.
Not to sound offensive, but it could use a little work. Thankfully, you got most of the grammar right, but overall, you could improve it greatly. If you'd like, I could help you with some editing, though I can't promise that I'd get to it soon.
Your call, though, and I wish you luck in your endeavors
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483908 http://www.fimfiction.net/story/103739/title-under-work-unknown-world
This is the link
483908 sure 1 sec
485263 Could you PM me the link and password so that I may take a look at it?