With Discord defeated young Jennifer Allen can now find her way in Equestria free of chaotic monsters trying to press her into their service. Now following Princess Luna's advice (certainly not orders) she has to experience and learn how to live as each of the three pony tribes before choosing the one she ultimately wishes to belong to. Add to that normal school work, a burgeoning business, and weekend lessons with a certain Princess of the Night and Jen may just wish she was back on the road fighting monsters all over again.
This' a direct sequel to my first story The Best Babysitter. I do alot of recap in chapter 1 so you don't have to read the first, though it'd probly be best if you did! ^^;
Now with sequel of its own! Galaxia's Equestria
uh oh it's lyra
i cant wait for the next chapter.
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Of course the resident human fan has to run into the resident human!
Oooh, I see problems in the near future, courtesy of our human-obsessionate pony
By the way, nice chapter and promising story
As always. a very nice chapter
, yet I thought that Pinkie would see Jen as her not-so-little sister, but I guess that mother sounds more likely...
I believe you meant make-shift, right?
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Isn't make-shirt a saying where YOU'RE from? >_> (thanks haha)
As for Pinkie, that's kinda the decision I wrestled with a bit. I waffled for awhile but ultimately I decided that after her episode with the twins it'd be more interesting to push her into a more mature role.
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I see... In any case, it was a good choice
I love the ending there and i cant wait for the next chapter, i just know shes gonna get caught
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Pshaw! What are the odds that whipping around Discord's chaos magic would get noticed by anypony?!
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I see a bunch of troubles for poor Derek
First of all, I really loved this chapter
Second, I fully support your point of view on her making other friends: I mean, who could keep a low number of friends in a place full of friendly pony like Ponyville?
Last, but not least, the name problem: while I'm not sure I would be so favorable on givin up my name, I must agree that a more ponyesque name would greatly help settling in.
I'm terrible at naming characters, but if you wish I can try suggesting some names
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Yeah that's the toughest part is I wanted it to be like a J-name, or something close to Jennifer but there's not alot out there haha.
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I know it doesn't start with J, but what about Diane? It still retains a human trace and is Pinkie's middle name...
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I thought about that one myself lol, I dunno I might do nothing with it. Most of the time when I write I just have vague ideas in my head and flesh them out as I go. XD
And here I was sure that Diamond Tiara had complaint with her dad and he was going to oppose Jen's plans for the daycare... You got me again!
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From what I've seen of him in the show it seems like Filthy Rich doesn't put up with Diamond acting like a brat in public, and he strikes me as more likely to want to judge someone based on what he sees for himself rather than a second hand account. Also Tiara would probly think twice about squealing on the meat eating monster in class. :x
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Thinking about it, you're right on all the line
Anyway good chapter
Talking about something else, I thought a little more about the name (tell me if this bugs you, please) and came up with Jade Trail.
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Doesn't bug me at all haha! I just came up with a temp name for the newest chapter myself. :x While not fitting any of Jen's particular talents it fits for its purpose.
I didn't laugh this hard in a while
And Jubilant Surprise is a neat name
...
And surely better than Jade Trail
Nice, very nice chapter
I'm figuring Alex returning home: "Hi mom, I'm back!"
"How did it go to school/work?"
"Just fine. I met a girl today"
"Oh, and how is she?"
"Great: she fought a magical talking pony!"
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Haha, yeah that'd be an interesting girl to bring home to meet the folks.
Pulverizing an unknown godess statue is never a good idea Jen
Anyway, a very nice chapter
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But it gives everypony creepy feelings!
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Let's just hope that alicorn is nopony as Luna says then
Well, last few chapters have been interesting, that is for sure.
This latest development though, using that gem has finally put her in a bind. Was only a matter of time I suppose that something would go wrong, and this is kind of a biggie.
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Yeah haha. Tearing up a street in a magical battle with an alicorn is a good way to make youtube.
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The real problem will be when she wakes up: if she gets her hands on Discord's gem nothing in this world (or any other for what matters) will save those guys...
If Luna/ Pinkie doesn't come first...
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Haha yeah that would be bad for all parties involved if she went all Discord on em. XD
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Anyway, Echo uh? I didn't see that coming
If this guy succeeds in recreating Discord's gem, I totally want to know him, even if he's completely nuts
Anyway, awsome chapter once again
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Haha, well thanks. XD
Another lovely chapter
love the story so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thanks gladja dig it. :o
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Thanks! :o
love the chapter/ and this story
can't wait for the next
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Well thanks! :o It's ALMOST over (I think). I have the ending planned but there's a couple things I wanna do still. I planned for the party to be reached this chapter but by the time I hit 9k words I called it quits haha
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Almost over uh? Then our 'lovely' mad scientist trying to reproduce Discord's powers will be for the next story?
Anyway, great chapter
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Story after next! I've been building up the next stories villain throughout this one haha.
I thought she was a unicorn at this point.
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Haha oops! I'd gotten so used to writing her as a pegasus, thanks. XD
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And I'd say you've done it nicely
Lovely chapter, as always
I was wondering: since the bracelet reacted to Echo adding the night pony, would it react to anyone else, like Spike, or Tak? Or it only reacts to ponies?
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It just so happens I'll be addressing that very thing in the next chapter.
Loving the story so far but i have to ask a question: A few chapters ago it was discovered she could combine the pegasus, earth pony and unicorn attributes and im curious if this will have a significant meaning later in the story (the more i think of it the more i get the feeling it was a foreshadowing but that just might be the insanity talking
).
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It's gonna come up in the final chapter of this one :o
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Oooh, then I'll be patient
My question is answered, I see the infinite possibilities
And also, Lulamoon uh?
Anyway, a very nice chapter
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Yeah haha. Trixie/Starswhirl's relationship will come up in Umbra's story.
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I guessed so