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Maya woke up one day, but instead of waking up to her dog barking or her moms voice, she was lying in a field with Fluttershy! She was surrounded by TALKING PONIES! Then, she found out SHE was a pony! A filly at that. And it takes time to adjust to Equestria, especially if you are human!
Oh and the romance tag is for something that will happen in the future :)
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It would be Odd if she was from Sylvarant
3526681 What's that?
A progressing story, so far. The dialog seemed a tad rushed, but other than that I approve of this.
Please continue.
3529088 Sylvarant is one of Two worlds in Tales Of Symphonia the first town in the game I must admit reminds me of Ponyville
Progressing story. I seems good. Please, continue.
hm. not bad, a bit short but it'll get batter as you write I'm sure. good job.
Good job. This is really interesting and I can't wait to see more
. Also this the first human child in equestria fic i read in which the child doesn't start off with a sad back story so.................anyways good luck
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can't wait for the next chapter
Somewhat rushed, but you hardly ever see little girls in HIE stories so I'll read it.
Have.
And at the end, you can take out everything after "stated." It makes it a better chapter ending.
Overall, great job! FiEs are lacking on this site, and this is a great addition to the HiE stories.
Hah! I told you I'd read it! (A month ago...
) At any rate, not a bad start, I'm interested in seeing where you take this. Although, I do have to admit, the interactions seem to come and go at a jarring speed. I'd recommend spending just a little bit more time allowing conversations and situations to transition. Other than that, though, I like what I've seen so far. 