Blue-Blood is a horrible boyfriend. No-pony disputes that fact. But when his love life hits rock bottom AKA he went out with ALL the single girls in Canterlot he needs a second chance to treat a mare right. If Rarity can forgive him maybe she will find the pony she was dreaming of.
Great story so far. First time I've seen someone try a reformed Blueblood story.
One critique, noticed a couple times you had letters swapped around, such as 'becuase'. Otherwise, good work, and I'll be keeping my eye out for more from you
Its 20% more awesome then some blue-rarity love stories ive read...
sorry my grammar and spelling isn't the best
and i kinda figured eventually he would have to change rarity likes the new him
Loved this chapter,I need more.
MOAR!!!1
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