• Member Since 24th Jan, 2012
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anhero23


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I have to say, for being so short, it was touching enough. Because I'm picky, tracked.

:fluttercry: WHO MADE FLUTTERSHY CRY? He-he, in all seriousness, really great job. For such a small chapter it was very touching. I want moar! MOAR! :yay:

The spaces between the sentences made it quite hard to read, please next time decrease the amount of spaces!

Satriark:heart::heart:

:fluttershysad: this short story plucked my heartstrings like a harp please wright more:pinkiehappy:

-cries- :fluttercry: You... Make me cry!!! :fluttershbad: why do u break my :heart:? :fluttercry:

no :yay: here people! :fluttercry::fluttershbad::fluttershyouch:

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I'm sorry I made you cry.

-sqee-:yay: yay..

I might read this, because it's short, but only if you got rid of all the midsentence line breaks; otherwise it'd just be painful to try to read.

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