Fluttershy looks back into the past and has to deal with what she finds.
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I have to say, for being so short, it was touching enough. Because I'm picky, tracked.
WHO MADE FLUTTERSHY CRY? He-he, in all seriousness, really great job. For such a small chapter it was very touching. I want moar! MOAR!
The spaces between the sentences made it quite hard to read, please next time decrease the amount of spaces!
Satriark
this short story plucked my heartstrings like a harp please wright more
-cries- You... Make me cry!!! why do u break my ?
no here people!
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I'm sorry I made you cry.
-sqee- yay..
I might read this, because it's short, but only if you got rid of all the midsentence line breaks; otherwise it'd just be painful to try to read.