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Lessons for a Benevolent Tyrant - Hustlin Tom



Princess Celestia is taught the virtues of the Elements of Harmony by Starswirl the Bearded after having become the tyrannical Empress of the Solar Empire

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Chapter 14

Princess Celestia flew across the early morning sky in regal majesty, gliding on the subtle warm currents of the wind. A veritable sea of trees and other foliage passed beneath her as she flapped her wings to gain altitude, passing over a cluster of rocks jutting out above the Everfee Forest. She wondered if the little outcropping of rocks had been a part of Everfree Castle many years ago, or if her memories of the area had started to grow fuzzy as time took its toll on both her mind and the land around her. She hefted the satchel bag that was on her side up a little higher with her magic, as she tried to find a more comfortable position for it around her midsection. She saw a great ruin just below her; it was standing on a small cliff face, with a river passing underneath the edge. Erosion had taken its toll on the land near Everfree Castle, and the only part of the structure that remained standing was the chapel like room which had contained the Elements before they had been moved to Canterlot. The Princess slowly descended by flying in large circular arcs, until her golden horse shoes clanked against the rough stone floor of the small chapel.

She began to think to herself as she slowly approached the pedestal which had held the Elements. It had been nearly three hundred and seven years since she had imprisoned her sister’s essence on the moon, and it had been a little over five years since Starswirl had passed on. He had never really bothered to write a last will and testament for himself, so he had conveyed all of his last wishes to her personally.

“I don’t have any money, and I never really owned any land,” he had said, “So that makes that portion of things rather easy to manage. I do, however, have two gifts for you.” The old unicorn had offered her an egg that was colored bronze and red.

“What is it?” she had asked.

“That is a phoenix egg. In about a week’s time, it will hatch. They are frightfully intelligent creatures, and since they are immortal in their own right, the hatchling will keep you good company over many millennia.”

He had also produced a crystal sliver from his cloak, “This shard is a unique physical manifestation of the place where I am going to go after I leave you. Just hold on to it, and think of me occasionally.”

The Princess had smiled, “I promise.”

“I do also have two last requests.”

“Name them, and they’re yours, old friend.”

“I have family in Baltimare. I’d like you to provide for and look after my last descendant, my great-grandniece Clover.”

“I’ll take her under my wing, as if she were my own child.”

“It will be good for the both of you,” he had smiled peacefully.

“What is your last request?”

“I’d like you to mail my journal through regular postage to Clover.”

The Princess was mildly confused, “Why not just have me send it by Royal Courier? It would be much safer and quicker in the end.”

“Because history demands that my journal disappears for a time. It will be lost, stolen, and lost again for many centuries, until it ends up in the right set of hooves.”

“Whose hooves?” she had asked.

“I’m unsure, but I can tell you this; you will see my journal again when the pink and purple mare, who is three in one, appears.”

She still had no idea what he had meant by any of that strange request or prophecy, but she had fulfilled his instructions to the letter; she had mailed the journal to Clover, but just as Starswirl stated, she had never received it. Princess Celestia had taken Clover back to Canterlot with her for a time, and the young unicorn mare had become her first student. After her studies under her had finished, Clover had left to travel just like her uncle Starswirl had, and she did many great things for all the races of the world. She had even picked up her own title; Clover the Clever. Before she had left Canterlot, she had gotten married and drug her husband along behind her to follow in her wake. Though the family name was now Sparkle for Clover, she was definitely the mare of the house, figuratively speaking. The egg that Starswirl had given to the Princess had hatched as he said it would, and she greeted into the world a newborn phoenix chick that she had later named Philomena. It was wonderful to have a pet that she could talk to, and who would never truly leave her side.

The world is beginning to be put in order, the Princess had declared to herself. She would continue training up students to go out and be her hooves in the world. Her subjects, rather than greeting her with fake smiles, were beginning to look at her with genuine joy, and she knew that the majority of them were happy at last. There was only one last thing to take care of.

The Princess slipped the satchel around her midsection off of herself. From out of the large bag she pulled the six Elements of Creation, and she placed each of them on their appropriate pedestals with due reverence. The vibrant, perfectly spherical gems pulsated in the growing morning light.

“I know your power,” she spoke to them, “and while I never used you apart from sealing away Luna, your power is too great for any one pony, even an alicorn like me, to wield.”

Light twinkled off the surface of the gems.

“I cannot allow it to be possible for somepony like Nightmare Moon or any one pony to be able to harness you.”

She almost thought she saw one of the gems shift in response to this statement.

She continued, “Perhaps this is what Starswirl would have me do. Perhaps it isn’t. I have faith, though, that all things happen for a purpose, and that this decision will turn out for the best.”

She pointed her horn at the nearest Element, it was Topaz colored. “I bind you to only be usable to those who are Honest at heart.” The sphere lost its colorful and crystal-like nature, and in only a few moments it became as common looking and gray as any other stone surrounding the chapel.

She next pointed at the Element colored Ruby, “I bind you to only be usable to those Loyal to their friends.” This Element also became lusterless and dull grey.

One by one the Princess locked away the powers of the holy, life giving relics, until there was only the very lonely Amethyst left. Here the Princess wasn’t sure how to proceed; Starswirl had only ever taught her five excellent attributes. As she thought more and more, the answer slowly seeped into mind, and she smiled softly. The lessons she had learned, all she had become with Starswirl’s help, would have never been possible had he not been her friend. Friendship, she thought to herself, is what can truly define and change the world forever. Through those we share our love with, through those who laugh and cry with us, through those who stick by our sides in the thick of life, but who will also tell us honestly when we are in the wrong.

She looked down at Amethyst, and she said, “I bind your power to unify all the other Elements together. Only through you, you who represent the magic of friendship, can the others be summoned. Without you, the other Elements have no power at all.” The sixth Element of Harmony then dissolved into an uncountable multitude of particles which floated into the air and settled onto the other five Elements. As the dust of the sixth touched the five, the grey orbs glowed purple for an instant, and then became still.

Satisfied in her work, Princess Celestia turned and walked away from Elements. As she walked past a destroyed stained glass window and large section of broken wall, she heard a sharp cracking sound underhoof. She momentarily stopped as she looked down at the shards of glass her golden horse shoe had stepped on. It was an image of the sun. The Princess looked down at the golden orange dust that surrounded the broken glass, and then she looked up to the window from which it had come from. The frame of the window still held the half broken image of her and her sister, as it showed that they had ruled over the land, and made things right through a balance of authority.

What will it be like in seven hundred years? She wondered to herself. When Luna comes back, will we be able to reconcile? I’ll be somepony else by then, but she will be just like she was; still angry. Still vengeful.

She sighed deeply as she wrapped her now empty satchel around her midsection, and took off into the awaiting skies above.

I miss you so deeply, sister. I hope that I can make things right by you some day.


It was the dawn of a new beginning for Princess Celestia and her influence in the world. With each new student she taught, she learned even more about what Starswirl had been trying to teach her. Her students varied in many ways over the years. She taught unicorns, pegasi, and earth ponies. In several instances, she had even had opportunities to teach those of other races; zebharans, minotaurs, even the occasional griffon. Each pupil brought something new to her, whether it was their personality, their perspective, or simply their past experience. Years passed like days, and it wasn’t all that long until it would be time for Nightmare Moon’s release from her stellar prison. Plans had been created many years before; contingencies were accounted for in as many ways as there were conceivable.

It was two years before the appointed thousand year sentence was complete, and Princess Celestia had been taking an idle stroll around the castle, when she had had her first experience with her next student. The youngest of the Sparkle family, a little filly named Twilight, had been taking a test to join her School for gifted Unicorns, when her body’s magical reservoir had nearly overloaded. Had the Princess not been there, she was sure that that entire tower of the castle would have magically detonated. The little filly did hold great promise though, so she had taken her as her student. As she had taught her student new kinds of magic, Twilight Sparkle had eagerly devoured the knowledge she gave. She had tried to subtly coax her student into taking up opportunities to make friends with other students, and some of the residents of Canterlot. The little filly, however, had missed the forest for the trees, and she was so focused on her magical studies that she only interacted with others out of necessity.

As one last desperate act, on the eve of Nightmare Moon’s release, Princess Celestia had commanded Twilight Sparkle to oversee the preparations for the Summer Sun Festival. She could only hope that the kindly spirit of the town of Ponyville would be able to affect her student in the best possible way. If the situation became as dire as she believed it could turn, she would intervene. She truly hoped that she did not have to resort to her last plan, but she would if it became necessary to protect the world. All her hopes were now bound up in the brilliant little filly who was now leaving for Ponyville.

Mother, she prayed, help guide my student’s and my destiny. Help us to find the best possible solution to this conundrum. Elements, if you are out there still, give me strength.

Finished with her plea, the Princess cast a spell of invisibility and intangibility on herself, and she began the flight to Ponyville directly behind the flying chariot that was carrying her student.

Equestria would never be the same after that fateful day.

That tale, however, is for another time and place.

Comments ( 48 )

Well, here it ends. This story is done, but a new story begins tomorrow! I will begin posting chapters to my next story, which is the sequel to the story this one is an appendix to. A Journey Unthought Of: Revival of Chaos is going to be big!

I was just going to read one chapter of this, but then I got hooked. It was thoroughly enjoyable!

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Thanks! I basically figured that "Hey, my mental picture of Starswirl is basically Gandalf, Dumbledore, The Doctor, and Obi-Wan Kenobi mashed into one, lets throw in a Jedi mind trick for the lulz!", and then it was so.

Philosophy has probably been my favorite subject to study in the past few years of my life, and I have both benefited and enjoyed its pursuit!

Starswirl's mentioning of the Doctor in his roundabout way is my way of reintegrating my favorite alien back into my stories when he comes back around. I'm thinking of writing a story about Starswirl and the Doctor for my Anthology project very soon, so keep your eyes peeled!

Well, that was a neat way to end it, neatly explaining why there were only five lessons, not six.

All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed this. You did a great job of crafting an interesting character in Starswirl, you did a fantastic job in developing Celestia, and you added in a lot of cool world-building. Great stuff.

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Ooh Lawdy, look at all the comments!:raritystarry:

I have to say, of all the stories I've written so far, Lessons has probably become my most favorite to have written. Here's a little background info on the story if you are interested:

Starswirl was basically an amalgamation of the First Doctor, Gandalf, and a little bit of snark added in for good measure. The Solar Empire was my deconstruction of how big government sometimes has good intentions, but ultimately the consequences for everyone don't always end up for the best. The Griffons are indeed based on a combination of Norse society and Arthurian mythology. The Minotaurs are based on Ancient Greece, and the Buffalo are based on the Native American culture. The headcanon chapter was fleshed out most in this story, but it has its beginnings in two of my other stories, The Sorrow and the Temptation for Luna's fall, and Apocalypse Unbound for the battle between Celestia and Nightmare Moon. If you'd think you'd like those, you should check them!

Several people have pointed out that the way the Solar Cult was handled wasn't satisfying in the end. I can understand why many think that, but its not the important focus of the story, as Celestia's story takes precedence. Master Basil is one of Applejack's many ancestors. I figure everypony who's an Earth Pony is somehow distantly related to the ancient family of Apple. I'd like to think that Starswirl had planned for Celestia to name the sixth Element 'Magic' all along. Why he didn't do it before he chose to die of old age was that he was offering her a final lesson and a test. If she had been truly paying attention and absorbing what he had been trying to teach, she would make the conclusion like she did. Eventually, once I get some breathing room for my other big project, I'm planning on writing a one shot prequel to show how the Doctor came and taught Starswirl a little about time travel.

You're with Seattle's Angels? I love your guy's group! Every time you all review story I invariably end up immediately reading it or saving it for later. If one of my stories somehow makes it to your guys' attention, I'd die of happiness.

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Ooh Lawdy, look at all the comments!

It's a thing I do :scootangel:

If you'd think you'd like those, you should check them!

I think I would! I just need to read things on a more regular basis :twilightsheepish:

Several people have pointed out that the way the Solar Cult was handled wasn't satisfying in the end. I can understand why many think that, but its not the important focus of the story, as Celestia's story takes precedence.

Oh, no, don't get me wrong here. For me, yeah, it wasn't satisfying. But fitting it in the story? I agree with you; I'm not sure it would have fit in all that well. Gotta put the story first.

I figure everypony who's an Earth Pony is somehow distantly related to the ancient family of Apple.

Ya know, I'm okay with this.

I'd like to think that Starswirl had planned for Celestia to name the sixth Element 'Magic' all along. Why he didn't do it before he chose to die of old age was that he was offering her a final lesson and a test. If she had been truly paying attention and absorbing what he had been trying to teach, she would make the conclusion like she did.

I said he was up to something! I felt it in my veins!

You're with Seattle's Angels?

You crazy stalker you. :pinkiecrazy:

I love your guy's group!

:twilightblush:

Every time you all review story I invariably end up immediately reading it or saving it for later.

Huzzah! Glad we could give you stuff to read and enjoy! :twilightsmile:

Well in that case I will eagerly await any other remarks you might make whilst you read my story!

This is a good story, although it violates canon.

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Ooh, so many comments!

I'll it admit it, I have not read The Prince, and I'm sure that that goes for a lot of people who try to quote the work. I might just have to change that though!

The way I see it, Celestia's brain is much like everyone elses: we remember the really big, important events of our lives fairly well, and apart from the odd sensory connected memory like something recalled by a smell, sight, or sound, we typically forget the rest.

Thanks for the complement! Sadly, canon has taken its course and moved on, but I like both stories equally. :twilightsmile:

Oh, and thanks for pointing out my dodecagon oopsy. I meant to make it a dodecahedron, which is certainly a very different shape indeed!

Comment posted by Hustlin Tom deleted Mar 28th, 2014

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I like to think that Cloudsdale is a migratory city since it floats on the clouds, and that where it is in the present is farther south than where it was in this story.

I'm going to echo what 3650519 said here. Splendid job.

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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the read!:pinkiehappy:

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Huh, you have a point! Cattle sounds too domesticated, bovine too formal. I'll just say steers. That works!

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Unfortunately, steers are also castrated by definition. In fact, 'steers' refers to male cattle that are castrated before sexual maturity according to the sources I've looked at (Dictionary.com, Merriam-Webster, Wikipedia). Why not say bulls?

Also, I caught a small typo in chapter 3:

“That may be true, but I’m afraid I am not her on a social visit.”

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Man, what did those poor guys do to deserve so many names for having their balls ripped off?
Thanks for suggestions and alert on the typo! I really do appreciate that a lot! Thanks for making me not look like as big of an idiot!

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I don't know. All I can say is that the English language tends to require completely different words to denote minute distinctions in two or more otherwise identical things. Strangely, it is every bit as practical as it is confusing. For example, oxen are raised as work animals, steers are raised as livestock, and I think there are two other names for them depending on age.

(Fun fact: a castrated male equine is called a gelding.)

Now, you won’t find a Diamond Dog up here for this reason; these are the Emporer’s Gem Grounds, from which he can pluck any precious stone he so desires to add to his considerable pile in the Palace Vault.

Now I have no idea what Siegfried Vielknochen is a reference to (not sure yet whether I should feel like an idiot over it), and Google searching only leads me to the first chapter of another story of yours. But that bit in Chapter 5 has Emperor misspelled.

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Even native English speakers can always learn a little bit more about the language every day it seems!:pinkiesmile:

Don't feel bad about the Emperor's name. Siegfried just sounded like a cool name, and his last title 'Vielknochen' in German literally translates to 'many bones'. I took it to mean that he was considered a Diamond Dog of great standing and wealth, so he could afford all those bones to chew on!

To me, Cloudsdale was always a migratory city, going where the water was to both sustain itself and turn a profit. It's more often nearer to the north of Canterlot to pick off large amounts of moisture from the mountains there, but it's location can differ give or take 50 miles East or West.

I figure that if Celestia had known about Cloudsdale before this that she would have just gone in and annihilated the griffons holding it hostage, and then moved up her conquest of their nation on her timetable in an act of vengeance. She may have been terrifying to a good portion of her subjects, but she wouldn't seek their harm intentionally. I just think Ailsa's blockade was so effective and her methods of dealing with runners so brutal that the pegasi were unable to take it. Gawaine and his birds of prey were probably too preoccupied with her forces to call out for assistance, especially when they started to get overwhelmed.

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Okay, I just read Chapter 7 and I think I'm starting to understand here. Chapter 6 mentions that the Old Bloods have been conducting raids on Cloudsdale, but Chapter 7 says that they've invaded and are currently occupying the city.

Anyway, a few very small typos in Chapter 7:

The area where Gawain had been slashed by Ailsa Vi was beginning to glow deep purple and sickly green.

Lowercase i in Roman numeral VI

“The only thing that could truly work at this point is to can give him a pure transfusion of life energy to counteract the magic that’s draining it out of him.”

That 'can' shouldn't be there

Taking the magically constructed knife out of the freshly made wound, Starswirl continued, “Now we must apply the..blood-“

I think there's supposed to be an ellipsis, but it's one period short.

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I knew there had to be another place where I'd not corrected those oxen!:twilightangry2: I was inspired by Tolkien pretty much exclusively, the other source being Doctor Who. I had started watching Game of Thrones back a few years ago, but I never got past the second season. Any similarities at this point are coincidental.

So wait, you're telling me that during Celestia's Peyote trip there were no spelling errors? Yes!:yay:

What did you think of chapters 8 through 11 by the way?

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Hmm, what happened in those chapters again? Let's see, Starswirl's examination, the trip to buffalo lands, Celestia's visions, and the dragon attack.

I know I'm bringing this up very late, but I've always thought that perceptions of Celestia's power were exaggerated, even before the Season Four opener. Chrysalis seemed to have very little problem incapacitating and restraining her in A Canterlot Wedding, and that was supposedly after feeding on just Shining Armor's love. Though to be fair, she seemed pretty surprised herself to have defeated her.

As for the dragons, their scorn for the stories of an almighty sun goddess actually reminded me of Dragon Quest, specifically the scene where the dragons tease Spike for being friends with a pony princess, right before burning a letter from her. That's not an episode I think back to all that often. Also, I'm finding it amusingly ironic that the magical artifacts dubbed The Elements of Creation completely and utterly destroyed a dragon that tried to eat them.

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My thoughts on the battle between Celestia and Chrysalis actually spawned another entire story. Because Celestia's body is basically magic, the only way to weaken her, as Starswirl stated, was to magically manipulate her. My thought was that Chrysalis had slowly been poisoning her with a magical compound that her body couldn't alter or destroy, and it was like pouring water into a automobile engine. This, with the help of the extreme power of Shining Armor's love, easily felled our dear pearly alicorn.

Dragons, in my mind, have next to zero interaction with the other races of the world because of their own assured sense of superiority. While not immortal, they are definitely capable of living over a thousand years if no other dragon or army of minotaurs kills them. Canterlot, being on a mountain, would still be prime real estate for a dragon if they wanted to try. Obviously the tales of Celestia slaying a dragon have passed into myth and folklore by the show's time, so who knows if they might want to try again.

Pablo Picasso once said that "Every act of creation is first an act of destruction."

And if you ever watched Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood, Major Alex Louis Armstrong said, "Destruction and creation are two sides of the same coin. You have to destroy in order to create. That is the law of the universe!"

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Interesting headcanon. And I couldn't help but notice that most (if not all) of your stories on Fimfic tie in with one another. Hmm.

And going off of your headcanon, dragons may even be less intimidated from an attack on Equestria, now that Celestia doesn't use the Sol Invicta persona anymore. Hell, even the teenage dragons of Dragon Quest don't seem to fear her in the slightest.

You have to destroy in order to create. That is the law of the universe!

*Rushes back to chapters 11 and 12.
Are you implying something here?

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I tried to make it so that all of my stories could be read separately and enjoyed for their own merits, but at the same time I offered something for people who are interested in those uncool things like 'continuity' and 'cluster narrative'. While the nerd in me is pleased by the latter, I feel like it has actually limited my readership because people are intimidated by the connectivity of my stories. If I had a chance to start over, I don't think I would have made my stories as connected as they are.

Equestria, despite having functional magic at its disposal, is not militarily capable of defending itself against an assault by another nation with its mostly outdated war tech and tactics. Because of this, Celestia will in future years have to become a master negotiator and diplomat to create accords and alliances that will bring the other races closer to her side. If she and the other pretty pony princesses were to say 'disappear' or 'die' (see AJOU: Revival of Chaos), Equestria would be virtually low hanging fruit ready for the conquest by opportunistic nations.

>implying
Nothing at all, really. If you're interested in Pre-Equestrian history, though, I'd suggest a look at 'The Maiden and the Serpent'. It's a short read, but I think it's decently interesting.

And with that, I've finished this story and given it a like.

Comment posted by Hustlin Tom deleted Mar 28th, 2014
Comment posted by Phazon deleted Mar 28th, 2014

Oh right, one last edit! At one point in Chapter 6, you added an extra 'e' at the end of Gawain's name, which I completely glossed over (and forgot about) until just now.

Other than that, I do remember being a little dismayed that Celestia seemingly left the Diamond Dog slave camps alone. Though I suppose it makes for a dark continuity nod/expansion of A Dog and Pony Show.

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I remember that when I was writing Gawaine that chose to keep the 'e' on the end for a specific reason, but I can't remember what it was. Might have been the Old English spelling of it. Well, for whatever reason, he'll remain Sir Gawaine, the Griffon knight shod in green!

The continuity nod was actually where a lot of my ideas of Diamond Dog culture started from. I imagine as time went on that Celestia found ways to condemn and hinder the practice without going in and conquering them instead. Still, with a populace so greedy, desperate, and generally unintelligent, the practice is still bound to continue until someone can find a way to change their minds.

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Yeah, I can see that with the Diamond Dogs. And I suppose there might be a good reason to go with or without 'e' either way. But still, every other mention of Gawain in chapters 6 and 7 (and that one in 11) spell his name without the 'e', and that one 'Gawaine' sticks out because of it. Consistency, man!

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Indeed! Consistency should remain supreme!

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Absolutely. And yet I come back several days later to find four Gawains without their requisite 'e': two in Chapter 6, one in Chapter 7, and one in the beginning of Chapter 11. Bro, do you even Ctrl-F?

:rainbowhuh:: Uh, stalker much?

Me: No one asked you.

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You clearly must like the story if you keep helping me to fix it!:twilightsheepish:
I am really appreciative for the enormous amount of help you have given me on this little endeavor. You've made this story a little bit brighter. I can't explain why it's done so well over my other stories, but you've helped in a large way, so thank you very much!

This was a very nice read, very nice indeed. Star and upthumb and all that jazz. The ideas and storyline therein are well-realized and interesting, and Starswirl is excellently characterized. But I can't help thinking it could've been much better that it is.

Two things stood out to me in a major way while I was reading this. The largest thing is that most of the story is more of an account of stuff that happened rather than showing the reader what happened, and that's boring. Actually doing so, with the scope of the events you chronicled here, would have necessitated a story on the order of thrice the length it is now, so there's certainly a reason for that, but it's still something to be aware of.

Secondarily, but of no less importance, is that Celestia seems to have very little actual agency in the actions she performs in this story. You say that she's the immortal god-empress of a major country, but she immediately accepts Starswirl and basically does whatever he tells her to do throughout the story, almost without thought. These characters are both at least somewhat interesting in their own right, but you never show the transition between them.

Just some thoughts I had. Everything here is pretty old, so maybe you've already addressed these issues in your newer writing. Anyway, I hope this was helpful to you in some way.

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Hi! I'm certainly glad for the fave and like, but I have to say that I'm more appreciative of your constructive criticism! It really means a lot to me that you would spend time analyzing my work!

The purpose of this tale was to chronicle some head canon I had come up with that led into another full length story. While it has certainly gone above and beyond initial expectations in that regard, I believe that you're right, and that it could have been fleshed out to greater detail.

Which brings us to the second point. While I had hoped them being friends in the past would have been suitable explanation for why she took to him so rapidly, being the case that she was 're-taking' him and picking up where they left off, this has been a point of contention for a few other people as well.

Unfortunately, I have a short attention span, so it's very hard for me to actually keep to a story idea for an extended period of time. It's because of this, I think, that I'd prefer to keep stories interesting but short, rather than to have a large story that goes on and peters out. I have been thinking that I need a writing partner, and maybe your analysis is another sign that I do need one for sure. It's been harder and harder to keep up with everything, and while new ideas are in no shortage, there's no point to them if you can't get them written down in a speedy manner.

Thank you so much for your thoughts! Without people like you, blind authors like me would continue to stumble around in the darkness without any idea if what they were doing was good or bad.

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Oh hey! Welcome back!

When I wrote that statement for Mournful Sparrow, I was writing it from the perspective of one individual talking to another. Since the Buffalo tribe has no form of printed or organized media, he wouldn't have addressed something like that. I think if he had known about people like fact checkers he would be pleased, though. While an article is made up of many words, the sum total of individual truths (those sources that were cited and verified by the paper) could not ultimately produce a lie, no matter how many verified truths there were, as that would be a contradiction of being. A community is made up of many individuals or parts, so as long as each of them is truthful, the community as a whole is also truthful.

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I like that explanation. Actually my point was intended to be more about facts, evidence, and empirical data (proof, to put it simply) rather than politics or printed media (there may have also been a less overtly stated argument that deception plays to the emotions of others, regardless of word length), but your explanation struck me as something that would be true to his character.

Also I hate to bring this up again, but you missed just one Gawain in Chapter 6:

The Old Bloods would attack any and all New Bloods, and they began to prey upon Gawain’s flying wounded like carrion.

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Actually, it's alright. Thanks for helping me to get that last pesky Gawain!

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It's poo humor, true, but did you know that Jesus, Buddha, and every single person you've ever heard of does it to? It's the one thing we all share in common! We all stand united in our need to poo!

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A ball of combustible string large enough to power a small city for an hour! It would be the answer we need most for the looming energy crisis!

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Sorry to disappoint.:derpytongue2: Although, one of those five will be missing.

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Yush. Starswirl's showing Celestia how good of an idea Generosity is by showing it's antithesis (Selfishness) and the negative impact it has on those who live in it.

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You cheeky, dirty minded, lecherous little degenerate. No Viagra was involved in the making of this porno- I mean chapter.

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Not really Viagra specifically, just old people sex.

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Not anymore, at least for a few more centuries. She'll show up again in another story during the modern era and the second Changeling attack on Canterlot.

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Thanks! I have a problem with remembering to promote my stories, but my hope is that they end up buried gems at least. I hope you enjoyed it!

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