Hi. I'm Ficta. I enjoy writing silly comedies and soul-shattering tragedies. There is no in between. :)
It's been several years, and the once adorable Gummy has grown into an enormous beast with an equally enormous appetite...
When Pinkie has to leave Ponyville for a few days the task of babysitting this behemoth falls to a trio of playful fillies. What could possibly go wrong?
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I like it.
Also ^5, fellow Fluttershy-slayer!
Almost had me there with Fluttershy's tragic move.
Pinkie's perfectly in-character. The dialogue and actions are also well-done. About my only complaints would be:
1) make your chapters longer. This chapter felt a tad short. 2K words or more is a good, strong start for a story.
2) expand on character action with dynamic writing. For example, Gummy eating the cat could have presented from the cat's POV.
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1. Fair point.
2. i deliberately wanted it to be seen from Mr and Mrs Cake's point of view. Otherwise, there's be no proof that they know what Gummy is really like. (And make it clear that Pinkie is oblivious)
I especially like that you conveyed the fact that Gummy just doesn't even give a fuck.
Ok, you've got my attention. I see potential for a lot of funny situations here
Did...did Diamond Tiara just get eaten by Gummy?
That's...a bit harsh to do to a school filly, even if they're a bully.
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Hey, she's not dead! Not like poor Fluttershy... who's dead... serious about you following this fic!
2076748 Must...obey...fluttershy...
Gummy is so lucky... I want an hour-long cuddle from Pinkie Pie too!
Would still really like to see more of this!
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Really sorry, but it's not likely that you will.
I pretty much gave up on this fic because I thought it sucked, and I decided to concentrate more on some of my other stories. I do apologize... 
Aww.
Pity, I was loving it. There are so few Gummy fanfics with proper characterization.
Ah, now I can say that I've read one of your works! Now I don't feel awkward about following you.
In any case, I don't have much to say about this so far... it doesn't really seem very memorable, something I'd read, get amused by, then forget about the second I leave.
It's full of references, though there doesn't seem to be much... dunno, punch to them. Like they are just there, over being funny. Will need to wait for the full thing before I try to criticize though.
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It's funny you should make these comments, because I gave up on this fic ages ago because I was so unhappy with it.
I was honestly going to cancel it completely, but I decided to just put it on hiatus for now.
Thanks for at least reading one of my fics, even if it is one of my least proud works. For comedy I'd definitely recommend either Brass Pony: Cloppers or P.A.T.A. Ponies Against Twilight The Alicorn instead of this. Quite how this got 100% upvotes is beyond me.
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Oh, well, that's good. I was really straining to say something positive about it.
In any case, I'm not necessarily much of a fan of comedies...
... Actually, how the hell did I even find this? It's not in my read-later list or anything.
Ah well, I'll go look for your other works, like you suggested.