2088691 Indeed I have. I was hoping to make that more of a major event, since they've never experienced it before. Guess it's been taking me longer to get around to that point than I thought!
2089555 Sweet! I do like the emotional connection that all the characters making love at the moment seem to share. Is it going to be random stallions they need to "teach" or do they know/care about them them beforehand?
2094937 Ohhh, someone didn't like my comment about adding Stallions to the mix (not you). To whoever down-voted the comment, I'll say that I'd probably do the same thing were the situations reversed.
While this was originally intended as just the mane six discovering sex and how it made them closer than ever before, it eventually evolved into some form of adventure story in my head, but I hope to keep the discovery theme going. Maybe it will be like Romance Reports, where there's only one straight sex chapter.
Honestly, I'm winging most of this story. Hopefully I'll plan the next one better.
2095647 Sorry if that scene wasn't clear for you. I was trying to keep some tension throughout the chapter (hence the title) and wanted to express that all of them felt it. They had been watching the kiss before, and they all really did want to experience it for themselves, it's just that Fluttershy's desire to become closer to her friends won out over her apprehension before the others.
2095542 Oh maaaaaaan, I wish I could downvote a downvote but I don't think the fabric of space time could handle that.
Rarity's internal monologue definitely implied that she was still attracted to stallions. Maybe set her up with Thunderlane or Fancy Pants with some frequency...?
Okay, so far I just skimmed the first two chapters so i could clop at Party Time, which I also mostly skimmed through but picked out details. However, it was amazingly well written and as I re-skim the earlier chapters I realize how foolish I was to overlook such a rich narrative. You can bet dollars-to-donuts that I'm going to read this entire thing word for word and enjoy more than just the amazing sex.
2114011 A fair warning, first 3 chapters are the best. Anything past that up to reflections is mostly mindless clop. I'm trying to find my muse again, and it seems to be working alright, but I just recently lost a lot of work, too, so it might be slow going. Still, glad you like it!
2095542 Regarding the inclusion of stallions;What do think of these possible pairings (sexual partnering) in the story's future?(Some of these are based on the straight shippings that I've seen in the fandom)[Excluding Cheerilee and the incest shipping with AJ,I've also seen Big Mac most commonly shipped with Fluttershy,RD,Twilight,and occasionally the rest of the 6;therefore,I'll list out Big Mac repeatedly with most of the 6(some other stallions may also be repeated)]
Applejack=Caramel(that one stallion seen in Winter Wrap Up and I've seen some shipping with those 2),Roid Rage(?),Braeburn (based on what I've seen in history,apparently incest between cousins is the least disgusting form compared to all the other forms)
Twilight Sparkle=Big Mac, or Doctor Whooves(if he isn't possibly with Derpy in your story by any chance and since he's oftentimes depicted as a fellow intellect to Twilight,I just thought it might work)
RD=Big Mac,Thunderlane,Soarin,or Roid Rage(?)
Rarity=Fancy Pants,Big Mac,or Thunderlane
Fluttershy=Big Mac,or Thunderlane
Pinkie Pie=Big Mac,or Carrot Cake(?)
PS:To be honest,I'm not really one for clop,but clop fics that center around humanized or anthro ponies are somewhat okay to me.I just thought I should clear that up here.
2148894 Actually, I'm rethinking the stallion thing. I want the story to primarily be about the mane six and their relationships with each other, and there might be some incidental pairings along the way, but probably not any other full ships.
2149140 I didn't mean to imply full ships.I meant to imply incidental pairings,but I guess I used the wrong diction.By the way,which of the pairings did I list seem more legit for any encounter to you(I know that a few were pretty random)?Just wondering.
2149207 If you want to know what to expect, I would stay safe and not expect anything. However, know that I do want them to branch out a little more in the future, and I want them to be okay with 'sleeping around,' as it were.
As for good pairings, I like the idea of Fancy Pants, he seems to be pretty progressive, and would likely be open to the idea. I'd love to work the Wonderbolts in somehow, so there may be a Soarin' in this story's future. I'm not huge on Big Mac, but I could see Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy all giving him a shot.
These might actually end up as ideas for a sequel of sorts. I think I'll finish the story I want to tell here first.
Respect earned.
Honestly, it's a good thing this has plot, so we can experience a climax with tons of climaxes in between.
2086208
Well said.
epic chapter nice wordplay and it is good to see more plot in the story
Commence read.
Well is seems progress has been made. Though how well prepared will they be the next time the Elements act up.
Have you thought about including stallions?
2086404more plot?
2088691 Indeed I have. I was hoping to make that more of a major event, since they've never experienced it before. Guess it's been taking me longer to get around to that point than I thought!
My iPad should get story updates. I didn't learn about this until I searched it!
2089555
Sweet! I do like the emotional connection that all the characters making love at the moment seem to share. Is it going to be random stallions they need to "teach" or do they know/care about them them beforehand?
2094937 Ohhh, someone didn't like my comment about adding Stallions to the mix (not you). To whoever down-voted the comment, I'll say that I'd probably do the same thing were the situations reversed.
While this was originally intended as just the mane six discovering sex and how it made them closer than ever before, it eventually evolved into some form of adventure story in my head, but I hope to keep the discovery theme going. Maybe it will be like Romance Reports, where there's only one straight sex chapter.
Honestly, I'm winging most of this story. Hopefully I'll plan the next one better.
2095647 Sorry if that scene wasn't clear for you. I was trying to keep some tension throughout the chapter (hence the title) and wanted to express that all of them felt it. They had been watching the kiss before, and they all really did want to experience it for themselves, it's just that Fluttershy's desire to become closer to her friends won out over her apprehension before the others.
2095542 Oh maaaaaaan, I wish I could downvote a downvote but I don't think the fabric of space time could handle that.
Rarity's internal monologue definitely implied that she was still attracted to stallions. Maybe set her up with Thunderlane or Fancy Pants with some frequency...?
Okay, so far I just skimmed the first two chapters so i could clop at Party Time, which I also mostly skimmed through but picked out details. However, it was amazingly well written and as I re-skim the earlier chapters I realize how foolish I was to overlook such a rich narrative. You can bet dollars-to-donuts that I'm going to read this entire thing word for word and enjoy more than just the amazing sex.
2114011 A fair warning, first 3 chapters are the best. Anything past that up to reflections is mostly mindless clop. I'm trying to find my muse again, and it seems to be working alright, but I just recently lost a lot of work, too, so it might be slow going. Still, glad you like it!
2114714
Pff, who says mindless clop is a bad thing?
2095542 Regarding the inclusion of stallions;What do think of these possible pairings (sexual partnering) in the story's future?(Some of these are based on the straight shippings that I've seen in the fandom)[Excluding Cheerilee and the incest shipping with AJ,I've also seen Big Mac most commonly shipped with Fluttershy,RD,Twilight,and occasionally the rest of the 6;therefore,I'll list out Big Mac repeatedly with most of the 6(some other stallions may also be repeated)]
Applejack=Caramel(that one stallion seen in Winter Wrap Up and I've seen some shipping with those 2),Roid Rage(?),Braeburn (based on what I've seen in history,apparently incest between cousins is the least disgusting form compared to all the other forms)
Twilight Sparkle=Big Mac, or Doctor Whooves(if he isn't possibly with Derpy in your story by any chance and since he's oftentimes depicted as a fellow intellect to Twilight,I just thought it might work)
RD=Big Mac,Thunderlane,Soarin,or Roid Rage(?)
Rarity=Fancy Pants,Big Mac,or Thunderlane
Fluttershy=Big Mac,or Thunderlane
Pinkie Pie=Big Mac,or Carrot Cake(?)
PS:To be honest,I'm not really one for clop,but clop fics that center around humanized or anthro ponies are somewhat okay to me.I just thought I should clear that up here.
2148894 Actually, I'm rethinking the stallion thing. I want the story to primarily be about the mane six and their relationships with each other, and there might be some incidental pairings along the way, but probably not any other full ships.
2149140 I didn't mean to imply full ships.I meant to imply incidental pairings,but I guess I used the wrong diction.By the way,which of the pairings did I list seem more legit for any encounter to you(I know that a few were pretty random)?Just wondering.
2149207 If you want to know what to expect, I would stay safe and not expect anything. However, know that I do want them to branch out a little more in the future, and I want them to be okay with 'sleeping around,' as it were.
As for good pairings, I like the idea of Fancy Pants, he seems to be pretty progressive, and would likely be open to the idea. I'd love to work the Wonderbolts in somehow, so there may be a Soarin' in this story's future. I'm not huge on Big Mac, but I could see Twilight, Rarity, and Fluttershy all giving him a shot.
These might actually end up as ideas for a sequel of sorts. I think I'll finish the story I want to tell here first.
2149295 that's understandable
Oh ho ho. Anthro Clop with Rarity?
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I shall put this in my favorites and read it when I have the times. Any clop with best pony is good clop.
Commence read.
Looks like they are learning at a nice pace.
Well read