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Scorpan


I like ponies

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From what little clop you did write you're vary good.

2020120 Thanks, it's nice to know at least someone likes it. I know I didn't get to very much of it, even though it was originally intended as mindless clop, but the story just kept getting bigger in my head as I wrote it, and now I'm almost contemplating adding an Adventure tag... maybe later, eh? :raritywink:

I like it. Cant really understand anthro but other stuff I kan understand

2020971 You mean you can't understand why I did it, or you can't understand what it is?

Anthro is short for anthropomorphic, which means they are a sort of human-animal hybrid. Anthro ponies are (usually) bipedal with hands at the ends of their arms but hooves at the ends of their feet. They still have the same manes/tails. They have human-like body features, but pony-like heads. Hope that clears it up!

I was confused when it said that Cadence was Twilight's niece. Cadence is married to Twilight's brother, making her Twilight's sister in law. If Cadence were to have a daughter, then Twilight would have a niece.

2023223 Sorry, not even sure how I made that mistake. Thanks!

2021274 I think he might be confused by exactly how human or how pony the characters are in this. Without a picture for reference, it can be hard to properly assess an individual author's interpretation of anthro. Insofar as I can tell, you write them as being fully humanoid but with more equine facial features along with fur and the typical major anatomical traits of unicorns and pegasi.

One word....Awesome.

Honestly I'd say the one thing I dislike is that everyone seems to have massive breasts. I mean, unless you're using a system that differs from the one I know, FF is just absurd. Like, totally ridiculous, especially on someone who'd be concerned about their weight like Rarity. Not to mention a D-cup for RD-- that's just not aerodynamic lol. The focus on cup sizes and the somewhat absurd values thereof kinda make it feel like a little kid's fantasy, to be honest.

That's just my opinion though, and I do like the rest of it thus far.

2024026 I was partly inspired by a fic named Scent of Mares, that had the first decent Anthro interpretation I've ever seen, and they had huge tits in that fic, too. I had it on the mind (and Twilightclopple's sleepover series, in case you couldn't tell) so there are several similarities. For reference, I used el-loko's (nsfw) art when thinking of anthro characters.

Btw, FF's aren't that much bigger than DD's, and I like to think that the mane 6 are exceptionally beautiful in comparison with the rest of Equestria. Most people get a massive size in their head when they think of the bigger sizes, but porn n' such often exaggerates. A real FF cup isn't incredibly massive, it's just uncommon in our society. I like to think that, in Equestrian society, they are a little bigger on average (not just with tits, but all around)

This is a comparison between a FF cup model (left) and a LL cup model (right). The FF cups are large and sensual, but by no means grossly massive, especially not on a good frame.

EDIT: I will admit, I should've simply said that some were bigger than others, and left it up to the reader's imagination instead of rail-roading the mane six into specific cup-sizes. I'll leave the story as it stands for now, but I'll keep this in mind in the future.

2024738 Alright, makes sense. Just seemed a little extreme to me haha. As for actually giving the size, that's mostly just personal opinion. I wouldn't be surprised if knowing their cup sizes would be a huge turn on for someone really focused on breasts, it's just not for me. It's not like it's hugely excessive, and doesn't ruin the story, it's just a minor detail that isn't to my preference. Always write for you, so long as you always improve :P

I personally wouldn't mind a few chapters without clop if it would add depth to the story.

2026630 you... you like plot with your clop, too? :raritystarry:

I love plot and clop :yay::raritywink:

ooo a plot twist :pinkiegasp:
uh Twilight wheres your clothes :applejackconfused:

Am I the only one who didn't get a notification that this updated?

2024738 You must remember that in Scent of Mares, the ponies are BIGGER, as in taller, than humans. The human in that story is looked down on as a teen, more or less, and not even young adult, like, few years older than the Crusaders. It doesn't help that ponies in that 'verse also live at least 200 years on AVERAGE(human lifespan today is 75 year average) So even his age, which would make him an adult in our world, leaves him at teen years in Equestria.

2029127 Okay! I admit it! I like them big! :raritydespair:

You are totally right. While I did envision the ponies of this story as slightly bigger than humans, I had forgotten exactly how MUCH bigger they were in Scent of Mares. Still, none of them were described as anything resembling flat, so :ponyshrug:.

2028786 This is a curious problem. When I upload the next chapter, let me know if it happens again, and then we'll try to work something out.

You some times put Pinkie PIe. I saw it twice, but it wasn't a problem, I was too busy drooling to care.

2030390 Me too. :rainbowwild:

Real answer: I've actually noticed that. I've been combing over my chapters and making stealth edits where I notice mistakes, but I'm never sure whether or not the changes stick.

WE WILL DEFEAT THEM WITH SEX

Invite Luna and Celestia over!

Yeaa OOO sexy murr :pinkiehappy::yay:

I was laughing the whole thing. I like clop, and I like comedy. As long as it's none of that stupid funny clop that makes no sense, I enjoy it. :rainbowkiss: Onto the next chapter!

Clearly, the secret is to have the plot specifically require lots and lots of clop. Everyone wins!

Reading the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. What an amazing intro:rainbowlaugh:

2042845 Thanks. I wanted one of those 'flash forward' things. Usually an action trope, where they show an awesome moment right before the climax, then you're on the edge of your seat wondering what could possibly bring you from the intro to that.

Unfortunately, I hadn't planned this very well (read: not at all), and so we may or may not ever actually get to that point in the story. :twilightsheepish:

You continue to impress me :twilightblush:

:derpyderp2: Sorry if I tricked anyone. I accidentally hit publish before the next chapter was ready. Derp. :derpyderp1:

This is time for...Moluna!!!!!!!!!!!!(and the making of Molestia)

I really like the way you wrote this, some parts I'm hard as a rock but others I'm like " OH SHIT NOT CHRYSALIS!!!!"
When i read some clopfics i find myself very bored about half-way through but you did a nice job of keeping the whole thing very
'Intriguing' :raritywink:

It was literally an instant follow cause I EXPECT MORE FICS!!!!! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

2050290 Oh shit, now the pressure's on. :raritydespair:

jk, but I really don't know if I'll write more than this fic, at least, probably not anthro clop. I'll probably stick to one theme for each story.

Loo>>2050307
*Looks at how many stories you've written*
It seems like you have done this before... This is a good start to your clop writing career!

2050349 I mean actual stories, not just the chapters, if that's what you're thinking. I meant I would confine all the anthro clop to chapters in this story.

Or did you mean something else, and I missed it entirely?

2051037 Sorry if it wasn't clear, but you might remember from the beginning of chapter 6 when Celestia talks about the mating ritual, where couples that want a foal set up an appointment wtih her during the spring (estrus season, when ponies are in heat), she casts a spell to make them horny (that she learned from Luna), and they rut then forget about it. Mare is almost always pregnant.

Hope that clears up any confusion! :twilightsmile:

2050386
Nvm... 'Twas a compliment, i meant for what little clop STORIES you write this one is fantastic...Prob could have made that a little clearer

2044116
Don't you mean Lunaughty? :trollestia:

Commence read.

That was a lot of... :rainbowwild:

Now for Celestia to walk in on them and ask how the progress is going.

I go with Moluna. It just sounds better.

wow the ponies dont know about sex :applejackconfused:
so sad :fluttershysad:

awesome chapter yes :pinkiehappy:

if the seemingly puritanical Celestia walked in on this scene she would either develop a nervous tick for the rest of her life or join in and I'm honestly not sure which at this point

I have read 723 clopfics (According to my favorites) and this one is the best one I've read so far :yay:

dude, you should have the next chapter be that celestia walk in and ask how the progress is going.

Respect earned.

Honestly, it's a good thing this has plot, so we can experience a climax with tons of climaxes in between.

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