2042845 Thanks. I wanted one of those 'flash forward' things. Usually an action trope, where they show an awesome moment right before the climax, then you're on the edge of your seat wondering what could possibly bring you from the intro to that.
Unfortunately, I hadn't planned this very well (read: not at all), and so we may or may not ever actually get to that point in the story.
2051037 Sorry if it wasn't clear, but you might remember from the beginning of chapter 6 when Celestia talks about the mating ritual, where couples that want a foal set up an appointment wtih her during the spring (estrus season, when ponies are in heat), she casts a spell to make them horny (that she learned from Luna), and they rut then forget about it. Mare is almost always pregnant.
I jumped right in to chapter 6 looking for some good reading and I didn't find it I found fucking GOLD this is fucking sexy as hell I plan on using it in my story's I'm writing out notion here yet
I feel as though just by reading this I could get some pleasure just imagining the scenes, okay I don't get how the emoticons work on this website could someone please send me a message explaining this?
I don't normally do this (mostly out of laziness), but this is a mistake that bothers me because it's clear you are trying to do it right, but you were taught the wrong rule.
At some point when you were a kid, you said, "Me and my friend-" then you were cut off by a teacher or parent saying, "'My friend and I.'"
Now, in that case, they were completely correct, but you took the wrong lesson from it. You thought that's what you had to do every time you talked about yourself and another person, and your teacher/parent never actually explained the rule.
You ended up going around saying things like, "They gave ice cream to my friend and I," but the trick is to take the other person out of the equation:
Say, "They gave ice cream to I," and you can see that it's wrong. "They gave ice cream to me." Then add your friend, "They gave ice cream to me and my friend."
Now, you wrote, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during Luna and I's joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Take Luna out of it, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during I's joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Fix it, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during my joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Add Luna, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during Luna and my joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Reading the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. What an amazing intro
2042845 Thanks. I wanted one of those 'flash forward' things. Usually an action trope, where they show an awesome moment right before the climax, then you're on the edge of your seat wondering what could possibly bring you from the intro to that.
Unfortunately, I hadn't planned this very well (read: not at all), and so we may or may not ever actually get to that point in the story.
You continue to impress me
This is time for...Moluna!!!!!!!!!!!!(and the making of Molestia)
2051037 Sorry if it wasn't clear, but you might remember from the beginning of chapter 6 when Celestia talks about the mating ritual, where couples that want a foal set up an appointment wtih her during the spring (estrus season, when ponies are in heat), she casts a spell to make them horny (that she learned from Luna), and they rut then forget about it. Mare is almost always pregnant.
Hope that clears up any confusion!
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Don't you mean Lunaughty?
tossed her bag with her big crown thingy inside to the floor
her bag with her big crown thingy
big crown thingy
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Twilight (or was it one of the others) has called it "the big crown thingy" in show.
The more you know!
use the thumb I just clicked for your self. K?
2215606 That is correct. Twilight herself calls it the "big crown thingy" in Return Of Harmony Pt. 2.
I jumped right in to chapter 6 looking for some good reading and I didn't find it I found fucking GOLD this is fucking sexy as hell I plan on using it in my story's I'm writing out notion here yet
I feel as though just by reading this I could get some pleasure just imagining the scenes, okay I don't get how the emoticons work on this website could someone please send me a message explaining this?
Wow this story is great.. one of the best ever ..
I don't normally do this (mostly out of laziness), but this is a mistake that bothers me because it's clear you are trying to do it right, but you were taught the wrong rule.
At some point when you were a kid, you said, "Me and my friend-" then you were cut off by a teacher or parent saying, "'My friend and I.'"
Now, in that case, they were completely correct, but you took the wrong lesson from it. You thought that's what you had to do every time you talked about yourself and another person, and your teacher/parent never actually explained the rule.
You ended up going around saying things like, "They gave ice cream to my friend and I," but the trick is to take the other person out of the equation:
Say, "They gave ice cream to I," and you can see that it's wrong. "They gave ice cream to me." Then add your friend, "They gave ice cream to me and my friend."
Now, you wrote, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during Luna and I's joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Take Luna out of it, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during I's joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Fix it, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during my joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."
Add Luna, "Ponies engaged in sex much more frequently during Luna and my joint-rulership over a millenia ago, and, if I recall correctly, enjoyed it immensely."