Oh dear Celestia... IT TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, now that that's out of my system, I'll say this. before now, you weren't using enough. But when a character is thinking, you don't need the quotation marks. Also, there were some words i don't even know (and I am almost a dictionary with all the words I know). So other than that, you did pretty good
I'm guessing words like rendezvous and such. Not exactly difficult words, but if you just skim over one of my chapters you're sure to find a slightly above-average word complexity. When I get really into it, like doing a clop scene, sometimes I just pump out word after word, often in different contexts than you would usually see them. While making a reply comment like this, where I'm thinking very carefully about each sentence and how I want it to be interpreted, I like sticking to words that are harder to take the wrong way.
I've known plenty of people that just can't work their way around words. With a mildly popular fanfic like mine, you're sure to get people from all walks of life, and some of them will have a more difficult time understanding words than others.
You should have seen my face light up with joy when I saw that you commented on my story.
I'm a huge fan of yours, particularly In Her Blood. I know we've traded words before, but it's still great to see one of my heroes enjoying my own work.
Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about him. He's kind of the catalyst for the story in the first place, if you think about it, though I'm sure they would've found a way to get together anyways.
Still, the rest of the cast ends up in Canterlot in my story anyway, so they're bound to run into him.
Also, would you really want him to be around when the ponies have sexytimes? Even if it's contrived, I would think it a boon to the reader not to have to worry about Spike, unless they're itching for some drama. Besides, I don't think the mane six would have the orgy in the first place if he was around.
Surprise Twincest for the Wincest! And just so you know, this is definitely one of the best More-Than-Clop stories I've come across. It's the kind of story that gives me a warm, happy feeling above and beyond the base pleasures. (which, now that I think of it, is kind of the point)
I'm glad that it comes across as "More-Than-Clop" to you, because that's what I kind of wanted to portray. Even though there's gratuitous amounts of sex, it's supposed to be part of the storytelling, not necessarily a mindless "treat" for the reader. It means a lot to hear that some people are "getting it," as it were.
Sort of ironic considering that I've been trying to maintain a clop scene in nearly every chapter for the sake of the fans, but there you go.
I had planned for the story to take a darker turn later, but at this rate I won't be getting to it until sometime next year.
Hey scorpan when is the next most likely update to this story going to be I'm suspicious as to what happens next does Luna work with Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie in their lesson the next day or something. For the sake of Equestria, getting anxious to find out. Celestia help me, PLEASE HELP ME!!!
Btw. I love the fact that you have the reader guessing at times, even I've wondered at times what would happen next as I read along with this one but knowing it would end a certain way.
I can explain some of the terms such as rendezvous, which means to meet at a certain place, this term is still widely used by the military and amongst people that are more than sophisticated as to look as though they were military
I wanted to point this out. I'm not sure how much Celestia and Luna will appear in this story, but considering how both of them played a role in this (Especially Luna starting like, 2-3 chapters ago I think? What an orgy amirite? ), should they be added as characters tagged in this story? I didn't see either of them when I first started reading this, so I thought I'd bring it up.
Bless you, friend. This was surprisingly beautiful. :3
They actually have an anthro tag.
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Thanks, I just updated it.
Goes to show how long it's been. Wasn't there last time I updated.
Well, all I can say is, it's about time, but it was worth the wait.
And also... I just want you to know that I was overjoyed to see that this was updated.
Thank you, and please keep up the good work.
Holy- wait, this is not considered holy. Oh my-...um, why can't I find one? Sweet Celestia! The story is back!
Super Duper.
Oh dear Celestia... IT TOOK YA LONG ENOUGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Okay, now that that's out of my system, I'll say this. before now, you weren't using enough. But when a character is thinking, you don't need the quotation marks. Also, there were some words i don't even know (and I am almost a dictionary with all the words I know). So other than that, you did pretty good
This is one of the classics and its back
3161732 What words?
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I'm guessing words like rendezvous and such. Not exactly difficult words, but if you just skim over one of my chapters you're sure to find a slightly above-average word complexity. When I get really into it, like doing a clop scene, sometimes I just pump out word after word, often in different contexts than you would usually see them. While making a reply comment like this, where I'm thinking very carefully about each sentence and how I want it to be interpreted, I like sticking to words that are harder to take the wrong way.
I've known plenty of people that just can't work their way around words. With a mildly popular fanfic like mine, you're sure to get people from all walks of life, and some of them will have a more difficult time understanding words than others.
3178450 well I'm not going to look right now. I'm in school!
3178651 an I know those words. I'm not an idiot. I am prett much a dictionary. AND I don't use the internet
At this rate, they'll end up with a country full of lesbians.
Luna's Stars. That was… I have no words for this. It's just too much. Good job doesn't cover it. Just… Luna's Stars.
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Thanks everyone, glad you like it! Hope it was worth waiting over three months.
Maybe I'll get the next one out sooner, if enough people want more.
I must applaud you friend, this is really damn good. I certainly hope to see more of this story.
Eeeeee, this is back. I'm happy.
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You should have seen my face light up with joy when I saw that you commented on my story.
I'm a huge fan of yours, particularly In Her Blood. I know we've traded words before, but it's still great to see one of my heroes enjoying my own work.
It's great to see a new chapter, friend
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Don't worry, I haven't forgotten about him. He's kind of the catalyst for the story in the first place, if you think about it, though I'm sure they would've found a way to get together anyways.
Still, the rest of the cast ends up in Canterlot in my story anyway, so they're bound to run into him.
Also, would you really want him to be around when the ponies have sexytimes? Even if it's contrived, I would think it a boon to the reader not to have to worry about Spike, unless they're itching for some drama. Besides, I don't think the mane six would have the orgy in the first place if he was around.
Surprise Twincest for the Wincest!
And just so you know, this is definitely one of the best More-Than-Clop stories I've come across. It's the kind of story that gives me a warm, happy feeling above and beyond the base pleasures. (which, now that I think of it, is kind of the point)
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I'm glad that it comes across as "More-Than-Clop" to you, because that's what I kind of wanted to portray. Even though there's gratuitous amounts of sex, it's supposed to be part of the storytelling, not necessarily a mindless "treat" for the reader. It means a lot to hear that some people are "getting it," as it were.
Sort of ironic considering that I've been trying to maintain a clop scene in nearly every chapter for the sake of the fans, but there you go.
I had planned for the story to take a darker turn later, but at this rate I won't be getting to it until sometime next year.
Hey scorpan when is the next most likely update to this story going to be I'm suspicious as to what happens next does Luna work with Dash, Fluttershy, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie in their lesson the next day or something. For the sake of Equestria, getting anxious to find out.
Celestia help me, PLEASE HELP ME!!!
Btw. I love the fact that you have the reader guessing at times, even I've wondered at times what would happen next as I read along with this one but knowing it would end a certain way.
>> duvagr007
I can explain some of the terms such as rendezvous, which means to meet at a certain place, this term is still widely used by the military and amongst people that are more than sophisticated as to look as though they were military
hey man when you gonna get another chapter out, I'm practically dying here.
I wanted to point this out. I'm not sure how much Celestia and Luna will appear in this story, but considering how both of them played a role in this (Especially Luna starting like, 2-3 chapters ago I think? What an orgy amirite? ), should they be added as characters tagged in this story? I didn't see either of them when I first started reading this, so I thought I'd bring it up.
No video games.. Must write CLOP