I was confused when it said that Cadence was Twilight's niece. Cadence is married to Twilight's brother, making her Twilight's sister in law. If Cadence were to have a daughter, then Twilight would have a niece.
Honestly I'd say the one thing I dislike is that everyone seems to have massive breasts. I mean, unless you're using a system that differs from the one I know, FF is just absurd. Like, totally ridiculous, especially on someone who'd be concerned about their weight like Rarity. Not to mention a D-cup for RD-- that's just not aerodynamic lol. The focus on cup sizes and the somewhat absurd values thereof kinda make it feel like a little kid's fantasy, to be honest.
That's just my opinion though, and I do like the rest of it thus far.
2024026 I was partly inspired by a fic named Scent of Mares, that had the first decent Anthro interpretation I've ever seen, and they had huge tits in that fic, too. I had it on the mind (and Twilightclopple's sleepover series, in case you couldn't tell) so there are several similarities. For reference, I used el-loko's (nsfw) art when thinking of anthro characters.
Btw, FF's aren't that much bigger than DD's, and I like to think that the mane 6 are exceptionally beautiful in comparison with the rest of Equestria. Most people get a massive size in their head when they think of the bigger sizes, but porn n' such often exaggerates. A real FF cup isn't incredibly massive, it's just uncommon in our society. I like to think that, in Equestrian society, they are a little bigger on average (not just with tits, but all around)
This is a comparison between a FF cup model (left) and a LL cup model (right). The FF cups are large and sensual, but by no means grossly massive, especially not on a good frame.
EDIT: I will admit, I should've simply said that some were bigger than others, and left it up to the reader's imagination instead of rail-roading the mane six into specific cup-sizes. I'll leave the story as it stands for now, but I'll keep this in mind in the future.
2024738 Alright, makes sense. Just seemed a little extreme to me haha. As for actually giving the size, that's mostly just personal opinion. I wouldn't be surprised if knowing their cup sizes would be a huge turn on for someone really focused on breasts, it's just not for me. It's not like it's hugely excessive, and doesn't ruin the story, it's just a minor detail that isn't to my preference. Always write for you, so long as you always improve :P
I was laughing the whole thing. I like clop, and I like comedy. As long as it's none of that stupid funny clop that makes no sense, I enjoy it. Onto the next chapter!
Comment posted by the-pieman deleted Feb 9th, 2013
At first I was like: "Wait, what the heck?" *Confused* But the I was like: "Awwww that's adorable!"
True story.
Also, AJ must hate playing truth or dare, because being forced to tell the truth is kinda dumb considering her being such a horrible liar, so of course she has to choose dare, or it wouldn't be anything special.
I was confused when it said that Cadence was Twilight's niece. Cadence is married to Twilight's brother, making her Twilight's sister in law. If Cadence were to have a daughter, then Twilight would have a niece.
2023223 Sorry, not even sure how I made that mistake. Thanks!
One word....Awesome.
Honestly I'd say the one thing I dislike is that everyone seems to have massive breasts. I mean, unless you're using a system that differs from the one I know, FF is just absurd. Like, totally ridiculous, especially on someone who'd be concerned about their weight like Rarity. Not to mention a D-cup for RD-- that's just not aerodynamic lol. The focus on cup sizes and the somewhat absurd values thereof kinda make it feel like a little kid's fantasy, to be honest.
That's just my opinion though, and I do like the rest of it thus far.
2024026 I was partly inspired by a fic named Scent of Mares, that had the first decent Anthro interpretation I've ever seen, and they had huge tits in that fic, too. I had it on the mind (and Twilightclopple's sleepover series, in case you couldn't tell) so there are several similarities. For reference, I used el-loko's (nsfw) art when thinking of anthro characters.
Btw, FF's aren't that much bigger than DD's, and I like to think that the mane 6 are exceptionally beautiful in comparison with the rest of Equestria. Most people get a massive size in their head when they think of the bigger sizes, but porn n' such often exaggerates. A real FF cup isn't incredibly massive, it's just uncommon in our society. I like to think that, in Equestrian society, they are a little bigger on average (not just with tits, but all around)
This is a comparison between a FF cup model (left) and a LL cup model (right). The FF cups are large and sensual, but by no means grossly massive, especially not on a good frame.
EDIT: I will admit, I should've simply said that some were bigger than others, and left it up to the reader's imagination instead of rail-roading the mane six into specific cup-sizes. I'll leave the story as it stands for now, but I'll keep this in mind in the future.
2024738 Alright, makes sense. Just seemed a little extreme to me haha. As for actually giving the size, that's mostly just personal opinion. I wouldn't be surprised if knowing their cup sizes would be a huge turn on for someone really focused on breasts, it's just not for me. It's not like it's hugely excessive, and doesn't ruin the story, it's just a minor detail that isn't to my preference. Always write for you, so long as you always improve :P
I was laughing the whole thing. I like clop, and I like comedy. As long as it's none of that stupid funny clop that makes no sense, I enjoy it. Onto the next chapter!
At first I was like: "Wait, what the heck?" *Confused*
But the I was like: "Awwww that's adorable!"
True story.
Also, AJ must hate playing truth or dare, because being forced to tell the truth is kinda dumb considering her being such a horrible liar, so of course she has to choose dare, or it wouldn't be anything special.
Fluttershy is not shy to sex then....
DAYUM FLUTTERSHY!
GET IN DERE!
I read this, and was like "WTB things escalated quickly!"