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Since they first met, Applejack has always been attracted to Twilight Sparkle. However, when she finally confesses her feelings to her, Twilight is less than happy to accept them. But soon, a heroing incident will change her mind and both of their lives forever.
(there's comedy too!)
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I know this might seem a bit unoriginal, but I just wanted to try my hand at a mare/mare ship fiction. Let me know what you think. Hope it goes well!
Nothing special, but I love it anyway. AppleSparkle for the win!
So Twilight didn't want to be in a relationship, but then she wants to be in one in a matter of hours? That's pretty rushed, don't you think?
I do like the addition of the Diamond Dogs. That was pretty original, even if it made me scratch my head.
Alright, you've got me curious. I'd like to see where this goes.
there's not nearly enough twijack out there, congrats on adding to it. I would, however recommend a proofreader, as there were some errors, as well as perhaps pacing the story, as it seems to be happening fairly quickly. other than that, great story!
Yeah, sorry if it seems kind of rushed at first. To be honest I was kind of finishing it in the middle of the night, as I seem to do pretty often with stories.
Don't worry, I'll make this work somehow.
yes ... yes this is good! a bit fast for now but good! i love twijack and its almost nowhere to be found
i will watch this to see where this goes from here 
Incomplete: WHAT THE FU-
Well, the standard, break the news to everypony chapter...why do I get the feeling Rainbow Dash is going to get a little too jealous?
2079117 Who wouldn't be jealous? Applejack's strong, dependable, trustworthy...
just a great story. Really good writing. Love it
You need to type more please. This is a great story and i would like to read more of it
2102314 Thank you very much. I'll be sure to update it as often as I can.
Perfect for Valentines Day!
i want more bro cant wait how this will evolve up to!
im adcted to dis!
An okay chapter, though I think Twilight and Applejack's dealing with the waiter was just a bit over the top.
Really good chapter. Keep coming out with more
I hope the part with Big Mac goes somewhere.
I'll admit, at first I didn't want to make a clop scene. But I think we all knew it was going to happen eventually.
Also, sorry I've been out for a while. I've been pretty busy lately.
Well theres something you don't see everyday. Rainbow Dash And Big Mac.........
with that supprise the story was great. Well done 
HA! lol the ending with big mac & RBD was totaly unexpected and theback wards lines was a great touch as well
amazing story but you might want to change your tag from teen to something little more appropriate...
hope to see more of this story! and 
is new to me, id like to see where it goes, but dont stray to far from twijack 
Ha ha! Yes! Posted just before over a month since the last chapter! Nailed it!
What's next? Twlight's parents are gonna run through the same thing.
Hey this is getting good
Really like where you went with this chapter 
2366425 Thank you, thank you! *bows*
you should update faster man cuz really, your story is just amayzing.
so yeah...
Faster updates, my good sir.
2366589
Hey, they could like AJ enough that they demand Twilight moves back home, to help reduce the expenses of being a new couple!
And here it is! By the way, sorry it's been taking so long to update my stories recently. NOTE TO SELF: do not work on multiple fictions at once.
Flam's a bit of an idiot.
CAN NOT DAW ENOUGH!!!!!!!
Great chapter
Woo! Great wedding!
I'm surprised Shining Armor didn't just leak 'Liquid Pride.' I was waiting for it both mentions and....nothing.
Also, I can totally see Applejack forgetting the vows. That last part of her's was really corny and I pictured a bar and somepony using that as a pick-up line.
Granny Smith's reconciliation is a great touch. Seems you have pretty much wrapped up. I wonder what's next with the incomplete tag still up.
2640012 Better than that!
Cute chapter! Keep up the great work
And then they made babies.
2641003 Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!
Ok, first the most powerful Unicorn get easy captured by Diamond dog so that Applejack can save her, and now Twilight have trouble to keep her home ( what practically is public library ), come on, why this story must make Applejack so great and Twilight so useless.
2653222 Well, the title is called 'Hold Me, AJ'. It's really about Twilight's dependancy on Applejack. Also, someone seems to have stolen your grammar.
I love this story too!!!!! ur an amazing writer!
I want MOR
GIVE ME MOR
I mean if thats alright with you kind author
2695811 Aw shucks!
2732862>>2704209 It's perfectly alright with me, Fluttershy!
*pats head*
2732867 when is next chapter??
2733719 Hard to say. I have only a couple left to write. This is actually my last week of school and I still have to deal with finals and graduation. I'll most likely have it ready by the end of the month. But right now, I have to live out my last days as a high schooler!
Hello everyone! If you're reading this then I apologize for not updating in a month...again.
I guess I was too distracted enjoying my first week of summer. Don't worry, that new chapter will be ready soon enough! 
AHAHAHAHAHAHA! HOW THE HELL DID I NOT SEE THAT COMING?! THAT'S FUCKING BRILLIANT!