• Member Since 30th Dec, 2012
  • offline last seen Mar 7th, 2018

Ianpiersonjdavis


E

Rainbow Dash has the day off and is bored out of her mind, so she helps her friend Twilight out at the library.

Caution: Extreme stupidity may follow, read at your own risk.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 20 )

cupcakes and the--
:rainbowderp:
that was...unexpected...
:derpyderp1:

I thought i had an over active imagination, damn rainbow dash make me almost look sane....almost.

This story? It is a good story. Sort of re-minds me of the twist ending on American psycho, generally a lot of twist endings that just mess up your mind are good things to have, as long as they're done well.

I laughed!

You did good! :moustache:

Comment posted by deleted Jan 24th, 2013

You seem to be writing a lot of TwiDash recently. I'll comment again once I've read some.

i only have one question da fuk?:rainbowhuh:

Funny.
I loved the references to other fanfics :pinkiehappy:

I liked all your references, but you kinda stretched the Cupcakes one a little long.

I couldn't even read this with a strait face after the cupcake and rainbow factory part
Wonderber, es est ien Reganbogan

HANG ON A SECOND!

She said that Rainbow Factory and Cupcakes aren't good horrors!? She's gone mental!

2847848

While I enjoyed Rainbow Factory.

As a hardcore horror fan, I found 'Cupcakes' severely lacking as Sgt. Sprinkles obviously knew very little about anatomy and the effects of blood loss (realistically, she would've died pretty early on)-so yeah gaps in logic aside, for me the scariest part of Cupcakes was the spelling and grammar errors.

:facehoof:

This was more or less just meant to be a gag on Rainbows part though, a joke about her being completely oblivious to the story's Grim Dark content. :rainbowwild:

By what Rainbow was saying about Cupcakes and the Rainbow Factory, it sounds like she never read them. Anyways, this was not bad. I thought it was a good shot at comedy and you did your best. Thumbs up for Rainbow Dash trying to be a librarian.:rainbowlaugh:

This wasn't sad or pathetic, I thought it was pretty funny....

why is there a romance tag for this

Lol Rainbow Dash sure has some pretty weird dreams! :rainbowlaugh:

Somepony, I'm begging. Please go ahead and get Rainbow dash x Doctor whooves love. I really would like more romantic fics with the both of them. It would be awesome! Please?:fluttershysad:

3878848

The tag has been removed.

The reason I put it there in the first place was because I was into the TwiDash shipping, but I wasn't really sure how to write romance very well-let alone romantic comedy.

I don't even remember who put this in most of the groups that it's in, but I'm working on getting it removed from them.

4381985

I would, but I suck at writing romance-sorry. :unsuresweetie:

Login or register to comment