I felt it was time for a new bio, but don't know what to write. Maybe something philosophical? Umm...? Hmm.... Whoops! Look at that!! I seem to have run out of characters!! Remember to Stay Beautiful!
This was a requested challengeish story to get Brony19 to finish his story Good Vibrations. Hopefully he thinks it is good enough to finish his story.
WARNING THE FOLLOWING CONTAINS: Kissing, 2 mares, funny moments, subtle references, D'awww moments, and no sex
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Very cute. Keep up the writing.
3524206 Thank you so much
, if enough people like this story, I might expand on it some more.
So romantic.
This is a great piece of work. I can't wait for more of your work.
3524512 Thanks so much
, I don't think I did that well though because I am not the best with detail, but I am glad you enjoyed it. I have a few stories in mind, so look forward to those :D
It seems I have been called out.
Anyway, here's what I thought of it, if you were interested:
The wall of text theme you got kinda killed it for me. Other than that... I actually don't know what to say. I am a sucker for romance and OctaScratch, as well as a self-proclaimed hopeless romantic, and this... I guess you could say that this gives me hope. Hope that one day I'll be able to be in love that much. I loved it.
Also, this gave me ideas... ones I'll have to use.
3526180 Yeah, it has walls of text, but I didn't know where to separate them unless it was another character talking, sorry.
I just wanted to try and add as much detail as I possibly could. I will try and work on that. Thanks for the positive criticism 
, hopefully it will help me in the future. I might even use some ideas I had in here for some other stories I had in mind too. Thanks for reading and for this amazing deal to inspire me to write. Also, I was a little confused with your comment, just a tad. You said the walls of text killed it for you but said you loved it. Is it just a neutral feeling, again, sorry for the walls of text.
The warning is a real turn off for most readers. You really only need it if you're writing fetish clop fics. It's kinda obvious by the tags and the picture what this is going to be.
Are you going to keep writing TaviScratch after this?
3526336 The warning is just supposed to be a joke, I didn't imagine it would be a turn off. Yes, I will write more OctaScratches (that is what I call them) in the future. So look forward to those
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Good to hear.
My only complaint was the wall of text, and how to break it up is to find a period at the end of a thought and break it there, not just when a character starts talking.
also indent, it helps.
other than that a nice read and I hope to seem more from you.
3534304 Yeah, I get this a lot. I think instead of making an entirely new paragraph because I want those to be transitions to new scenes or character talking, I will just indent them in my upcoming stories. Thanks you and I hope to see more from me too
3557990 Thank you, It makes my day to read such wonderful comments like this. And yes, how coincidental indeed
. Look forward to an amazing crossover story in the future, you know if it isn't rejected again, which it shouldn't.
Is it really your first story? I would have never known. It was such a sweet and heartwarming tale, and so well written. I will expect amazing things from you in the future.
3748372 Thank you very much. I can't believe I was able to write something like this, I guess English class really did help me
. But I do owe some credit to Brony19 for helping me start my writing hobby on here.
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A very much thank you is in order. I didn't think I was that good with detailing anything in a story. I just let my imagination run free with this one. Half the reason this was wrote was so a friend of mine would continue their own OctaScratch and the other reason was because it seemed like a good start to get my writing career on here going, so here I am. :D Thanks Again 
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(Psst! I also have another in the works for a series I am doing. Keep an eye out for it if you are interested!)