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Your soul shall be mine...

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I ain't explaining anything!
Nah nah nah nah!
*spins around in circles*

....how is it that canmake something completely crazy so good?

2nd paragraph 1st line you have "Shinning" Armor instead of 'Shining" and
2nd to last paragraph last line should be "nod" to herself. Only errors I found
while reading it. Will there be more?

1984103
Yes, once I'm not so tired and I can think straight again (well, straighter. Typing take a minimal amount of sanity, after all)

You bring out the inner pervert in me. I don't know whether that is a good thing or a bad thing. :applejackconfused:

You are crazy for writing this story and you should feel bad about yourself!

...I applaud you, sir. :rainbowkiss:

I'll be keeping an eye on this.

:rainbowhuh::rainbowderp::applejackconfused::rainbowderp:
Well that's only two twos of who's who. What will you do with the other three twos, hm?

...I mean, I didn't expect AJ & Scoots at all:rainbowhuh:
What sort of twisted things will come from the other 6 listed characters:rainbowderp:

1985280
Unfortunately, since we're limited to 5 character tags, the only way to include everyone that's in most stories it to use the 'group' tags, which means you sometimes end up having ponies who aren't even in the story show up in the tags.

So yeah, borked tag system is borked..

I just... I don't know what to say other than "Please continue, sir."

... The subtext, the glorious glorious subtext...:ajsleepy:
Liked and fav'd, you magnificent bastard you. I can't wait for this to get so much worse. Can't. Wait.

Uh, huh... Well... I'm speechless.
I'll go get some ethanol, great mind-bleach that stuff.
Tracking this madness. :pinkiecrazy:

Excellent! Can't wait to see the rest. :twilightsmile:

I get everything... i wish i bucking didn't :twilightoops::derpyderp1:

And then we`ll find out that absolutely everything Twilight saw has perfectly rational, mundane, nonsexual explanation. ^_^

"Twilight will find no explanation. And neither will you."

Sounds like a challenge :pinkiesmile:

1987826
While :scootangel: + :applejackunsure: might be a weird pair (and it is merely implied here), it could be weirder... and more explicit.

Try this one for size:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/64967/the-cutie-mark-crusaders-learn-a-lesson
:applejackunsure: + :applecry: + :raritywink: + :unsuresweetie: + :scootangel: in the same room!
(I think this one sets the bar pretty high for awkward/weirdness... still funny as hell - at least for me - if you get over that.)

1987826>>1988494
I may elaborate more on this in another story somewhere down the road. It's just never done very often, and it's too cute not to!

The amount of WAT cannot be described.
Just...
Bucking what... :rainbowhuh:
Seriously, am I still playing Far Cry 3? To much insainity.
Next thing you know, Cthulhu will show up.
If he did, this story would get about 20% cooler. Good job. :twilightsmile:

This cannot get any better, it all goes down hill from here. Or up depending on your viewpoint.

Scoots and AJ... I should not have a boner. I should absolutely NOT have gotten a boner. But I did anyway. Now it's time for some fanart, heheheh...

wait um you mean that her brother and and scoootaloo um wait um
My head hurts :pinkiehappy::raritydespair:

My brain... you've ruined it. :pinkiecrazy:

That cover art is GOLD:ajsmug:

1987331
Yes. The explanation is that it's all a dream and Luna is pranking her, because she ahs been spending too much time with Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie and hasn't yet learned how to not go overboard.

1989752
For your information, I am an ogre, not a troll. :ajbemused:
Make sure you know your humanoids before you accuse someone of being something they're not

so, Shining got some strap action and Scoots either inflated or impregnated by Mac?

Very good, wonderful, my dick is blue and hard as a rock. I cried, laughed and cried again.

Now get back to writing TMV plox.

So Cadence used her magic to give herself a dick to fuck Shining with. Not sure how Scootaloo got the way she is unless it involves vore or unbirthing.

Tracking purely for the lulz here.

1996034 has a point, though. More TMV!

Soooo deliciously crazy, I have NO idea what's going on and I LOVE it! :raritystarry:

Kind of a teasing start, with some exposition to set it up and a few punch lines, definitely leaves me unsatisfied and desiring more. The comedy and characterization (what of it there was) was brilliant, you have me hooked dear author. I'll be eagerly looking forward to the next installment in this story of mind fuckery!

You have pleased me....you may continue.

She knocked herself out when she ran from the hotel room.

Oh god, please let that be it...

Time for my daily dose of insanity...n:pinkiecrazy:

Would you please get the next chapter out? I need my fix, man...

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Haha...! Get it? Because I said fix, and... Heheh... Ahh...

*sigh*

when I was reading the Cadence and Shining stuff I thought "This probably isn't what it sounds like."
Then tubby scootaloo came up and :rainbowderp::derpyderp2::derpyderp2::twilightoops:
I don't know what to think :pinkiegasp:

excellent read.

I love how funny it is, but you made it slightly sexist. A girl can be on top if she wants. My special somepony is sometimes on top.

2029007
It wasn't just that she was on top. It was what she was doing WHILE she was on top that freaked Twilight out. :twilightoops:

2030289 Wait... What?

I need more of this, right now, that was friggin' good.

Hmm... okay, I'm pretty sure that this is some sort of fake-out. It's got all the signs, the big one being how everypony dances around the subject by speaking in suspiciously vague terms. Credit where it's due, I currently have no idea as to what the nature of the fake-out is or could be, and this is (or rather, will be) the very first multi-chapter fake-out fic that I've ever seen (assuming it is indeed a fake-out). I'm definitely keeping my eye on this one.

I like fake-out fics. Once you get familiar with them, it becomes a fun game to first identify them and then try to guess what the nature of the fake-out will be before the reveal. ^_^

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