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#1 · 136w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

Yes, please! I can't wait to read this. Nothing says win like, 'I'mma gonna be rapin' ya Twilight'. Let's hope it lives up to my expectations.

As a side note, there aren't going to be any stallions involved, right? RIGHT!?

#2 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>758133

To quote another infamous clop-fic....

"The stallion has been.... provided for..." :trollestia:

#3 · 136w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

>>758238 WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! FUTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!

Also, no Spike, too, right? Not trying to push any way or anything, but -hint hint-

#4 · 136w, 5d ago · 1 · 2 · Chapter 1 ·

Ch2 nao plz

#5 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>758269>>758333

Nah. He'll be involved, but he's not in Twilight's sights. She has a very particular reason for all this.

And I'm working on it :twilightsheepish:

#6 · 136w, 5d ago · 2 · · Chapter 1 ·

My body is ready.

Do it.

#7 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

You've got my attention.

#8 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

My my this did catch my interest i wish to see where this is going, but as a reader try not to dwell into murdering the victims afterwords I know its just my opinion but it just puts a sour taste in the back of my mouth thinking about it. Otherwise good read. :pinkiehappy:

#9 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

........................*clicks fav*

#10 · 136w, 5d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

So, in a nutshell, It's "Princess Molestia" With Twilight doing the molesting.

#11 · 136w, 5d ago · · 3 · Chapter 1 ·

It needs more Rainbow Dash, and please don't make her lesbian like in don't have homophobia but I like to call myself RD soo make her by-sexual, because I will say please..........PLEASE :applecry: :fluttercry:     Ow and love the story, I will follow a story for first time

Also

#13 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

lol, don't suppose Spike will be caught? It would make sense seeming as he always with her! :3

#14 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

How close are you to chapter two?

And, who was the tawny earth pony?

I can't guess D:

#15 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

>>758238

yeah...i totally didn't see that coming after reading the discription:trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

#16 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Candlestick knew there was nothing to worry about, that her home town was safe, even in the dead of night

#17 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

*Updated Comment*

Well.. Well... Well..... We meet again rape :pinkiehappy:

If you can't guess I would be Pinkie Pie in this :pinkiecrazy:

#18 · 136w, 4d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

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*Click*

Dam i wouldnt mind if twilight raped me XD:scootangel:

#19 · 136w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

I am tracking out of sheer curiousity. I wanna see where this heads.

#20 · 136w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

Tracking. Can't wait where this's gonna end up :pinkiecrazy:

#21 · 136w, 3d ago · 3 · · Chapter 1 ·

I had to stop at the beginning to find out what color milk and orange juice made...

#22 · 136w, 3d ago · · · Chapter 1 ·

am I missing something? I saw nothing I herd from the comments.....

#23 · 136w, 3d ago · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

theres no clop i chapter 1! how can this be a shameless clop fic if theres no clop in chapter 1?!?!  i'm looking forwards to more

#24 · 136w, 2d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

I would say that I'm going to hell for this...

But let's face it, it's going to get much, much worse... :twilightangry2:

#25 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>775141 Oh boy! More please! For a second, I was afraid you'd dance around the rape scenes, but I must say, I was not disappoint. Absolutely love this and, the best part is, no males! I just wish I could add more faves

#26 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>775232

I was such a horrible tease with that first chapter, wasn't I?

But now that people have asked for it, I intend to give it to you.

All of it!

Every eye-bleed-causeing aspect of it! :twilightangry2:

YOU WILL SUBMIT TO THE DEPRAVITY! :flutterrage:

#27 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>775246 Submit? I give my body whole-heartedly and very willingly. If my body could be any more ready, I'd have already been sexed up by the rapist Twi.

Oh, and while I'm thinking about it, there's a point in there where you say 'could of' blah blah blah. Should be could have. Only thing that jumped out at me during the read.

#29 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

wait so who was the blue mare?:trixieshiftright: ... wait a minute was it trixie?

if so twi's revenge:pinkiecrazy:

#31 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

What is this decency you speak of?

#32 · 136w, 2d ago · 2 · · Chapter 2 ·

>>775340

Random blue unicorn #46

#34 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

I feel I will go to hell for just reading this... let alone giving it a thumbs up. :pinkiecrazy:

#35 · 136w, 2d ago · 3 · · Chapter 2 ·

I have to admit, I never thought I would openly track a clop-fic. I didn't pay full attention to the meaning of the description when I read the first chapter last night; I simply read it. I was shocked to see not mindless clop, but a well thought out, very well-written piece of literature. The characterization was superb; as spot-on as you can get when a pre-established develops a split personality that involves growing of male organs and raping other ponies. The story was interesting enough for me to keep an eye out for the second chapter.

I was not disappointed, either. While rape is in no way my cup of tea, you wrote this in a way that this was something a serious reader could enjoy without it being about the sex. You could have just turned her into a mindless sex machine, but you didn't. You bared her internal conflict to all who read, and made her horror and revulsion - at both herself and the sensations she was experiencing - plain as day. For the inclusion of this psychological aspect, you have my respect. I only hope that you will continue to play on the effects this state is having on her.:twilightsmile:

I'll keep reading as long as you keep it up and it doesn't just become another mindless clop-fic.:raritywink:

Cheers!

#36 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

and the mind fucking begins.... even in the comments as well. Oh well, there goes the neighborhood. Now... what about the children? are they at least spared?

#38 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Now I can clearly see why we are all going to hell. It's gonna be a fun road! :pinkiecrazy: Now.... WE DEMAND MOAR!

#39 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

This is such a horrible story.

So why do I like it?

#40 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

>>775141 YOUR going to hell? fuck that, IM going to hell for reading it:twilightoops:! (then again, well written :twilightblush:)

#41 · 136w, 2d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Wait Wait Wait Twilight has a dick? Meh i still want her:scootangel:

#42 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

I feel the madness overtaking me! :pinkiecrazy:

It is a good pain... :twilightsmile:

#43 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Wewt new chapter!

#44 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Oh god. I can sense the scene where Luna watch Ponyville at night, and see Twilight doing... And then.. Oh god..

Please continue.

#45 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

"The blunt hear looked like some sort of battering ram,"

I think that should read as 'The blunt head looked like...'

Good chapter.

#47 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

>>781712

really? I can see her violating Luna actually....that is if her magic power increases after each victim which it doesnt seem to do.....

#48 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

oh god.... I'm going to Tartarus for this but....

TRACKING!!

#49 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 2 ·

Well i have learned somthing from this story that i will put into my work... no not rape but i did learn something from your work keep it up.  :scootangel:

#50 · 136w, 1d ago · · · Chapter 3 ·

Okay, 3 things:

1. Why are you writing this?

2. Why am I reading this?

3. Why is this giving me a boner?

I think we're all going to hell, so I might as well track it and stay along for the ride :coolphoto:

Also, rape Trixie.  Although she'd probably want it :trixieshiftleft:

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