Your soul shall be mine...
Yes, please! I can't wait to read this. Nothing says win like, 'I'mma gonna be rapin' ya Twilight'. Let's hope it lives up to my expectations.
As a side note, there aren't going to be any stallions involved, right? RIGHT!?
To quote another infamous clop-fic....
"The stallion has been.... provided for..."
>>758238758238 WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! FUTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Also, no Spike, too, right? Not trying to push any way or anything, but -hint hint-
Ch2 nao plz
Nah. He'll be involved, but he's not in Twilight's sights. She has a very particular reason for all this.
And I'm working on it
My body is ready.
You've got my attention.
My my this did catch my interest i wish to see where this is going, but as a reader try not to dwell into murdering the victims afterwords I know its just my opinion but it just puts a sour taste in the back of my mouth thinking about it. Otherwise good read.
So, in a nutshell, It's "Princess Molestia" With Twilight doing the molesting.
It needs more Rainbow Dash, and please don't make her lesbian like in don't have homophobia but I like to call myself RD soo make her by-sexual, because I will say please..........PLEASE Ow and love the story, I will follow a story for first time
lol, don't suppose Spike will be caught? It would make sense seeming as he always with her! :3
How close are you to chapter two?
And, who was the tawny earth pony?
I can't guess D:
yeah...i totally didn't see that coming after reading the discription
Candlestick knew there was nothing to worry about, that her home town was safe, even in the dead of night
Well.. Well... Well..... We meet again rape
If you can't guess I would be Pinkie Pie in this
Dam i wouldnt mind if twilight raped me XD
I am tracking out of sheer curiousity. I wanna see where this heads.
Tracking. Can't wait where this's gonna end up
I had to stop at the beginning to find out what color milk and orange juice made...
am I missing something? I saw nothing I herd from the comments.....
theres no clop i chapter 1! how can this be a shameless clop fic if theres no clop in chapter 1?!?! i'm looking forwards to more
I would say that I'm going to hell for this...
But let's face it, it's going to get much, much worse...
>>775141775141 Oh boy! More please! For a second, I was afraid you'd dance around the rape scenes, but I must say, I was not disappoint. Absolutely love this and, the best part is, no males! I just wish I could add more faves
I was such a horrible tease with that first chapter, wasn't I?
But now that people have asked for it, I intend to give it to you.
All of it!
Every eye-bleed-causeing aspect of it!
YOU WILL SUBMIT TO THE DEPRAVITY!
>>775246775246 Submit? I give my body whole-heartedly and very willingly. If my body could be any more ready, I'd have already been sexed up by the rapist Twi.
Oh, and while I'm thinking about it, there's a point in there where you say 'could of' blah blah blah. Should be could have. Only thing that jumped out at me during the read.
wait so who was the blue mare? ... wait a minute was it trixie?
if so twi's revenge
What is this decency you speak of?
Random blue unicorn #46
I feel I will go to hell for just reading this... let alone giving it a thumbs up.
I have to admit, I never thought I would openly track a clop-fic. I didn't pay full attention to the meaning of the description when I read the first chapter last night; I simply read it. I was shocked to see not mindless clop, but a well thought out, very well-written piece of literature. The characterization was superb; as spot-on as you can get when a pre-established develops a split personality that involves growing of male organs and raping other ponies. The story was interesting enough for me to keep an eye out for the second chapter.
I was not disappointed, either. While rape is in no way my cup of tea, you wrote this in a way that this was something a serious reader could enjoy without it being about the sex. You could have just turned her into a mindless sex machine, but you didn't. You bared her internal conflict to all who read, and made her horror and revulsion - at both herself and the sensations she was experiencing - plain as day. For the inclusion of this psychological aspect, you have my respect. I only hope that you will continue to play on the effects this state is having on her.
I'll keep reading as long as you keep it up and it doesn't just become another mindless clop-fic.
and the mind fucking begins.... even in the comments as well. Oh well, there goes the neighborhood. Now... what about the children? are they at least spared?
SPARKLE SPARKLE SPARKLE!
Now I can clearly see why we are all going to hell. It's gonna be a fun road! Now.... WE DEMAND MOAR!
This is such a horrible story.
So why do I like it?
>>775141775141 YOUR going to hell? fuck that, IM going to hell for reading it! (then again, well written )
Wait Wait Wait Twilight has a dick? Meh i still want her
I feel the madness overtaking me!
It is a good pain...
Wewt new chapter!
Oh god. I can sense the scene where Luna watch Ponyville at night, and see Twilight doing... And then.. Oh god..
"The blunt hear looked like some sort of battering ram,"
I think that should read as 'The blunt head looked like...'
really? I can see her violating Luna actually....that is if her magic power increases after each victim which it doesnt seem to do.....
oh god.... I'm going to Tartarus for this but....
Well i have learned somthing from this story that i will put into my work... no not rape but i did learn something from your work keep it up.
Okay, 3 things:
1. Why are you writing this?
2. Why am I reading this?
3. Why is this giving me a boner?
I think we're all going to hell, so I might as well track it and stay along for the ride
Also, rape Trixie. Although she'd probably want it