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...damn
That went by fast. I swear my was beating so loudly.
This right here is how you make a fantastic story!
Keep up the good work!
...on a side note (reads the surprise death scene)FUCK YEEEAHHHHH!!! RULES OF NATURE!!!
Don't kill Octavia That would just be to sad for me.
If you want a fucked up torture scene, just read cheerlees garden. All the way through. That would make you sick.
As far as torture scenes go...this one was kinda lame. You didn't have to go as far as in your AN. But more detail and maybe a small part showing exactly what Octavia went through. That scene is far to open to really feel it.
And one last note you don't really explain where that all are and just how Celestia shows up. I might have missed that but only because I was more focused on try to figure out what was going on. Plus having her kill him like that just seems like a cop out just saying. If you wish to counter any if these statements me me know.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GODDAMIT WHY YOU NEED TO KILL A BABY please dont kill octavia this still tooo tragic!!!
he deserved it just saying. And please, DONT KILL TAVI
*contents of my brain, in 'room' format*
*in the first room*
DESECRATE THE REMAINS OF THE BASTARD NEPHEW, AND GIVE ALL ENEMIES OF HUMAN/PONY RELATIONS A REASON TO FEAR US! OUR MIGHT IS IN OUR UNITY! NO FOE LEFT ALIVE! NO LOVE RESTRAINED! NO HUMAN LEFT BEHIND!
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH*epic war cry*
*in another room*
save tavi! . . . Save Tavi! . . . Save Tavi! . . . SAVE TAVI! . . . SAVE TAVI!
*in yet another room*
Sam, I'm so happy for you! you're a dad! congrats. sorry about your son, though. congrats anyways. you're a dad now.
*in the fourth room*
Is Sam gonna hook up with Queen Cicada too? or will he adopt her somehow? i just dont know.
*in the final room*
i wonder if i have any cookies left. . .
Blue Blood...
The Humans that died must be avenged. Either by payment to the families that lost them, or by blood. I hate when I read stories that make humans look like a worthless piece of shit. I like this story I really do, but give the humans something that will give them an edge over those who apposed them. Like something that cancels out magic or magic proof vest or guns. I don't know, but let the humans get their REVENGE!!!!!! And the respect they deserve.
That bitch is like a cockroach: just can't get rid of her
I... can't my my reaction into words.
But I can do so in gifs.
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As for my brain.
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3576399 ya here is what we got a enough fire power to destroy their god dam planet a hundred times over with just nuks now lers add bio warfare
5 things one humans get badass aka bring in the ultramarines
2. he who shall not be named must be deickrated
3. dragon and human team up
4. save Tavi
5.ponies now learn why you don't mess with the apex predator of planet earth
6. THERE BETTER BE A HAPPY ENDING
I CAN'T TAKE IT!!! Just give me a happy ending I'm dieing over here.
Die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die... die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die die...
(Sorry, my brain just had to)
Well... Blueblood has said something remotely right so yeah.
And I don't really feel anything about these kind of shitstorm-chapters... you have either numbed me or then I just keep thinking the ways someone saves the day and probably rips Blueblood's limbs off slowly one by one while crushing his tiny balls and dick between two industrial hammers, all this while his stomachs is filled with water which is causing his body to have extreme seizures while all that comes out is diarrhoea mixed with blood that is caused by forcefeeding him glass and small shards of metal, punching him in the stomach when he is full so his organs stop working, after all this he is left to slowly burn in his own shit and limbs while getting all kinds of litter thrown on him that smells worse than anything ever...
...I went a bit over the line, didn't I?
Called it.
Blueblood died, took you long enough.
Shut the fuck up already, Sombra.
Oh, and as a separate post, because I feel like I should do it, is this.
This story has soooo much bullshit raining from the sky while a shit-tsunami hits the coast that it's not even intimidating anymore. I'm just waiting for that actual "Oh shit!" moment, which is when an important character finally dies. I do not wish for this but otherwise I'll be just shooting heads while reading this story.
It's like a Bugatti Veyron hitting a steel wall on full speed, getting restored, and sent back to its death-ride... awesome and scary at the first time, but it gets a bit boring after couple of times, it's still awesome, but I don't react to it anymore.
Don't kill Octavia I seriously think a lot of people will just shit storm you if you kill her
As much Ias love Ocatavia. I think making her live or die will work either way. I be waiting for your next chapter.
3576568 Markiplier !
So I never said how much I'm worried about Octavia's fate like everyone else. I though I posted my comment here, but I guess not.
HA HA TAKE THAT BLUEBLOOD!
And what chapter was this in? Also, the bride he was talking about, was that Cadence?
And one final thing.
Hey Blueblood, can you hear that rumbling sound? Can you hear it getting closer? That's me in a Sherman.
RUN FUCKER RUN!
YYYEEEEEEEEESSS!!! BLUEBITCH IS DEAD!!! WOOOHOOOO!!!!
P.S. In an alternate death scene Sam finds the energy to kill Bluefucktard himself.
P.S.S. I REALY HATE bluebitch. Good on ya for killing' the bucking bastard.
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My reaction when I was about to get angry at Ariana
Please let Octavia live