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Damn...
Oooh, that escalated VERY fast.
damn indeed. Holy freaking damn.
YES!!!!!!! SOMEONE GOT SHOT!!!!!!!!!!
Rapid escalation alert!!!
When is Sam gunna get an big iron. He's always on the sharp end of the stick, you'd think he would be caring something by now.
HOLY SHIT can sam go at least 10 chapters without getting mortally wounded, LIKE WHAT THE FUCK
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2154962 Correction, shit only just started to get real!
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What he said. Almost exactly.
HOLY SHIT. WTF JUST HAPPEN.
uh oh
That son of a bitch DJ better die
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum shit just got real!
2162192 Not really, more or less they are friends... with the occaisional benefits.
well shit man..... shit. I LIKE IT :D
Within a span of a few seconds of punching a DJ, someone got shot... Why does feel like something big involving lot's of police and bullets is about to happen........ Nah, I'm sure he's fine.
2175806 I can tell you right now there was a time laps between the punch and the shot (Tavi and Sam were almost home and they started off in a night club), also can tell you that there will be no major gun fight (at least as far as I have written). Finally, if you think Sam is fine... nah, Sam is totally fine, totally not going to try and earn that dark tag next chapter. Totally.
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I know, right? This story is just the complete opposite of Dark isn't it?
2175992 Drug use, shootings, stabbings, psychological control using said drugs, nightmares. Those are all elements of a children's story right? Yeah, should totally send this story to Disney. (for the joke, read the original 'Peter Pan'. 'The Little Mermaid', 'The Hunchback of Notredame'.)
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This is gonna be the biggest hit since Bambi 2. (I've read every single original version man. Sooooo much better than Disney's.)
Wow Fishie Mcnizzle just whet grand theft auto.
Can't wait for the next chapter, my friend. I really want to know what happened to Sam and what the second shot did. DAMNED CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
2176048 also don't forget the fact that Disney supported the consent ration camps during WW two
Ok I'll just put it simply Walt Disney supported stupid fag mustache aka hitler
Wow, it's the music Playstation Allstars used as their main theme song.
Also, I was immediately suspicious about that DJ due to his attitude towards Sam. Basically, how did he get into Equestria? Something big really is going to happen much later isn't it? And I'm only half way there.
This story.
The rapid escalation, the bare bones dialogue and descriptions, the far too quick pacing, the fact that the main character has Gary Stu levels of the 'accepted by everyone important' power and the grammar and spelling mistakes. They bring this story down in so many, many ways.
Not to mention that all of that makes for no real emotional connection to any of the characters, and because of that there's no real tension with the events of this chapter.
This story is just bad in so many ways, and its redeeming qualities are few and far between.
I swear if he shot Tavi I'm going to find you and cut off your left hand and make it into a glove writer..... That's just cruel!