When an accident reveals a disturbing truth, Scootaloo gets the news that she will never fly. Her newly found mentor and sister fill-in, Rainbow Dash, must confront a reality where both the hero and a dreamer are broken.
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Your writing is good and this story is really holding my interest. I can't wait for more!
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Thank you! Hopefully it won't be long, since I have a good idea where I'm going.
Almost lost it at the end of this second part. More to come soon.
Poor filly
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Yeah, I couldn't even include some of the stuff that inspired this (I wrote a little blurb as part of an anonymous collaboration, and decided to take my part and flesh it out in far greater detail). Would've been much sorrow for Fluttershy and Sweetie Belle...
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Wasn't sure which way was easier to read, but turns out I agree. done!
Scootaloo will be one very unhappy angry little foal at losing a wing.
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Added the next bit...you may be right :|
She just needs to join the night guard, and get brand new bat wings. Or maybe a gossamer-wing spell. Or she could invent airplanes.
Or, you know, she could become bitter and evil and sell her soul to the darkness and turn into a cloud of evil smoke. Sombra could almost fly.
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Airplanes, ha :p
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Don't forget to thumbs-up if you liked!
in due time, in due time
More soon...please?
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Tomorrow night, I'm thinking
Huzzah!!
Sorry cant reply with a phone that doesn't let you click the reply to comment button
Still
I am happy now!
Scootabuse at its best... Looking forward to reading the rest.
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I don't know if I'd call it abuse >_<
I guess it depends how I choose to wrap it up...and I'm not sure still
Started housesitting for some friends today. Some delay possible since I couldn't access my notes. Working now!
And there it is.
Wooooaaaaaah Luna is now a foalnapper
Didn't see that one comin'
Great chapter, as usual, can't wait for MOAR!
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Thanks! This one ended up a chapter of its own instead of the briefer treatment I'd thought at first
GOLD TEAM RULES
kidnapper luna!
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Don't judge her too soon!
1972796 lol i know. i was joking. i'm looking forward to it
Scootaloo must be so unhappy.
that...SUCKED. ok i hated how that ended "spirited away" ugh...that's just annoying. man, not only did she run away , she's not coming back!! it's not worth it anymore. my fav character and she doesn't come back at all "she may return" shit is just stupid. i understand dealing with bad feelings, i understand that, but ya could have gone another way. seriously. i was thinking something like adoption or something WHILE SHE'S STILL YOUNG!! now i'm pissed and upset
no offence to the author ,since she's a decent author and nice, but this chapter was just...WOW.
Poor scootaloo
It must be hard if you lost your wing...I can understand why she would do this
You dear author almost made me cry and I'm in school...that would have been awkward
Great but sad chapter!
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Chiilll.....no need to say all of that...this was the authors idea and it's how this story was supposed to go to her...think before you post things that could be hurtful to an author like this
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Well, it is tagged 'Sad'. I can understand being upset - we want our favorites to shine through and have happy endings, but they don't always happen. But Luna IS sort of adopting her, don't you think?
1974496 i said no offense and that i didn't like it. i wasn' even harsh. you haven't seen me harsh
1974564 i meant dash. nevermind. it's still not fun to me anymore
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*nods* it wasn't meant to be. Evoking emotion like that...well, it's what I was hoping for, though I hope for most they still want to see how things end up. There's sadness, there's bitterness, but like Luna said, there's still a little glimmer of hope there for them.
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Thanks, I'm pleased you enjoyed it
But I love that little filly Penny! Great personality you gave her! (Proud about having the flu
Loving these chapters!!
And yay!! Scoots!!
Wow this was just... Adorable
Damn the feels
These feels...They are happy feels.
I'm so happy Scootaloo was reunited with Rainbow Dash. It made the ending 20% Cooler!
I love the way you wrote this story! It played very true to my handicapped Scootaloo headcanon.
Overall, an outstanding job. I present to you 5/5 moustaches!
that was badass. nice work.
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5 Moustaches, it doesn't get any better!
Beautifully written and executed!
This is one of the best stories i have read in my life :)
I can honestly not say one bad thing about this wonderful masterpiece.
I enjoyed every second of it. And the only way to make that a better story, is to make it longer :)
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Thanks!
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and thank you! Actually, it turned out longer than I pictured at first, especially around the middle, when I ended up fleshing a few minor ideas into much bigger parts. As a newbie writer I'm still trying to strike a balance between too much (dead in the water & boring) and too little (rushing). It's strange how the story unfolds as you do it, because originally this was muuuuuuuuch sadder
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Too much? Too much? Please, the storty was PERFECT. The longer the better, in my opinion. And you are certainly not a newbie writer, since you managed to write this astonishing masterpiece. Thanks again for making this story.
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Now I have to figure out what to do next :p
is it weird that with dash's last thought of her wings looking big and strong my first thought was of the rock biter from never ending story
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I couldn't help but include it as a little nod 
No, you're spot on!
I don't know what to say.
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>>xara I WANT SOMEPONY TO HUG!!!!
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