best ponies- Vinyl scrathc Rainbow dash Lyra Heartstrings i write clops, romance, oc insertion, anything with juicy results.
Now that rainbow dash has taken scootaloo under her wing, she tries to find out a little more about her new apprentice. however what she finds out is much more deeper then she thought, and she may be the only one to save scootaloo from her troubled life.
AN- im working on my grammar, as i have a bed keyboard. hopefully i either work with it, or get a new one
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THE GRAMMAR! IT BUUUURNS!
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Fix that grammar and it'll be a good read.
A pre-reader. You need one
Got potential, but you need to fix that chapter's grammar. If you need an editor I'd be happy to be of assistance.
1768166 ok, grammar is fixed. hopefully you can stand it this time. and sorry, first fic. need to improve on typing..
1768166 ok, grammar is fixed. hopefully you can stand it this time. and sorry, first fic. need to improve on typing..1768314 i know, im a shitty typer
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It's still messed up.
1769689 ugh... i need a new keyboard
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1771625 lolwut
short, a tad fast paced but i like it
1774730 thanks. first fic, so it's not gonna be perfect anyway.
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Bed keyboard.
Bed.
Keyboard.
Nice
Alt. Titles: Some Kind Of Fanfic or MONSTER MASH! SHE TEACHES ME! BESEECHES ME!
A little confused
Slightly intrigued
Kinda scared
But dying for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Good work!
1776919what this person said
keep it up
I love this story!
; but when's the next chapter?
Well that was ......... different
I'll follow but this thing needs work
How the next chapter coming along? This is one of the first stories I started following since joking this website and I don't believe it's updated once...
Will there be more?
Its a good story even with some grammar issues