Instead of skulls, prayers and poems about Nightmare Moon and the demons were smeared on the walls with blood.
Is it normally allowed to use two “and” in the same sentence? I always try to avoid that. It sort of sounds a little off that sentence though... I could be wrong, after Moon: I would replace "and" with ". There were". But I could be misunderstanding it though.
Well this is interesting, I been spamming Graviga (Gravity) in Kingdom Hearts Final Mix recently. Looks like Twilight knows just how to get the work done quick, just like me.
Then, she launched the spell back at the aggressor with such speed, it flew right through the cultist and even killed the one behind her.
Now she’s just showing off…
She shredded them all to the point that it was hardly even possible to make out that they used to be ponies anymore.
Wow! She’s gone Starkiller on their *beep*, awesome... Force Repulse, one of my favourite moves.
I knew Derpy had been captured…
But then, an unexpected opponent came rushing out.
I saw her coming…well, not 100% though.
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Hmmm I can see two routes here... Despair can finish of Applejack and Rarity or, protect the Black Widow.
myfacewhen.net/uploads/56-dayum.jpg Note to self: NEVER tick off Twilight Sparkle! Yay, Derpy has been rescued! Better watch you back Black Widow, here comes Twilight!
Will that shady character reveal itself before MI2 is finished? I think everypony knows that it is Obsidian trying to help, due to the main characters remembering him. I can't shake the feeling that somepony could be manipulating them to see him though. (I think I recall Twilight saw him for a brief moment.) It could even be a skinwalker in some of the scenes...
Also, hope I didn't go overboard with commenting the previous chapter other day.
3247568 Twilight didn't see the gray figure. No one besides Fluttershy can do that. But Twilight is capable of feeling a 'strange disturbance in the flow of magic'. Anyway, this secret will not be revealed in MI2.
3248033 Of all the things I need to keep in mind to make a flawless story, this is one thing I didn't focus much on. Early in the story, I hinted that Fluttershy's cottage had been gifted to the local wildlife so they would not have to move out of their home just because Fluttershy can't take care of them anymore. I guess it is safest to assume that all pets are (at least temporarily) living there.
3251488 so how long do I have to wait to find out what the gray figure is hope its not 2 years or so when mi3 is mid way finish or if it ever comes out,i will still support you all the way no matter what happens in the future used a phone to comment this no expressions :(
Finally After struggling to register on the site I finally made it! Ive been a fan of Maledictum Insania for a long time! I've read all the stories up to here! Just been unable to register! Keep up the good work!
3295391 Now that I got a job, I find myself having a lot less time to write. Sorry to keep you waiting, but the storyline of the gray figure will be continued in MI3. But I will try to put that mystery to a decent length to not overdo it, as several of my readers are already figuring out its identity.
3295426 I really appreciate your efforts. At times, I have the feeling that no one recognizes my work. So when I hear something like this, I am very grateful for the support. To you, and all of my fans: Thank you. Sincerely.
This is turning into quite the epic action blood bath... Me likey.
Is it normally allowed to use two “and” in the same sentence? I always try to avoid that. It sort of sounds a little off that sentence though... I could be wrong, after Moon: I would replace "and" with ". There were". But I could be misunderstanding it though.
Well this is interesting, I been spamming Graviga (Gravity) in Kingdom Hearts Final Mix recently. Looks like Twilight knows just how to get the work done quick, just like me.
Now she’s just showing off…
Wow! She’s gone Starkiller on their *beep*, awesome... Force Repulse, one of my favourite moves.
I knew Derpy had been captured…
I saw her coming…well, not 100% though.
-
Hmmm I can see two routes here... Despair can finish of Applejack and Rarity or, protect the Black Widow.
Very well done chapter. The wait was worth it.
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I dont think the sentence is wrong.
Well, glad I could turn this thing into something worth the wait.
myfacewhen.net/uploads/56-dayum.jpg
Note to self: NEVER tick off Twilight Sparkle!
Yay, Derpy has been rescued!
Better watch you back Black Widow, here comes Twilight!
Will that shady character reveal itself before MI2 is finished? I think everypony knows that it is Obsidian trying to help, due to the main characters remembering him. I can't shake the feeling that somepony could be manipulating them to see him though. (I think I recall Twilight saw him for a brief moment.) It could even be a skinwalker in some of the scenes...
Also, hope I didn't go overboard with commenting the previous chapter other day.
Um, just realized something... What happened to the pets? Or is that something we have to imagine?
3247568
Twilight didn't see the gray figure.
No one besides Fluttershy can do that.
But Twilight is capable of feeling a 'strange disturbance in the flow of magic'.
Anyway, this secret will not be revealed in MI2.
3248033
Of all the things I need to keep in mind to make a flawless story, this is one thing I didn't focus much on.
Early in the story, I hinted that Fluttershy's cottage had been gifted to the local wildlife so they would not have to move out of their home just because Fluttershy can't take care of them anymore.
I guess it is safest to assume that all pets are (at least temporarily) living there.
3251488 so how long do I have to wait to find out what the gray figure is hope its not 2 years or so when mi3 is mid way finish or if it ever comes out,i will still support you all the way no matter what happens in the future used a phone to comment this no expressions :(
Finally After struggling to register on the site I finally made it!
Ive been a fan of Maledictum Insania for a long time! I've read all the stories up to here! Just been unable to register! Keep up the good work!
3295391
Now that I got a job, I find myself having a lot less time to write.
Sorry to keep you waiting, but the storyline of the gray figure will be continued in MI3.
But I will try to put that mystery to a decent length to not overdo it, as several of my readers are already figuring out its identity.
3295426
I really appreciate your efforts.
At times, I have the feeling that no one recognizes my work.
So when I hear something like this, I am very grateful for the support.
To you, and all of my fans: Thank you. Sincerely.
Got side tracked reading some other stories. Got caught up still loving your stories keep em coming.