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Toxica is best demon. I kind of want to cuddle her... only... the scent of her will liquify my brain. I wonder if the Mane
63.85 (on account of AJ's missing leg) + Crystal + Babs will end up befriending her? That'd be cool.Also...
Inb4 Grey Pony is Obsidian's Spirit connected to her by his cloak, either that or Fluttershy's obsessive projection of him.
Also also... Slendermane and Fluttershy staring contest GO!
Also also also, Slendy is the daddy to all the demons. :3
So I have just managed to complete all the chapters so far.
Of each story...
And I have to say... Your craft of the 'Blackness of Ink' is unmatched so far. (Be that as it may, I haven't read Cupcakes yet... But I have many Creepypastas.)
Frankly I think that comparing this story and it's portrayal of darkness and insanity to the Creepypastas on the internet would be insulting to you and it, but here goes.
I rate the creepiness of a Creepypasta, by it's effective use of limited amounts of blood and gore, and it's ability to stain the reader with unadulterated horror, not just disgust the reader with vivid images of masses of body parts or corpses and gushing bloody wounds, that's not creepy, just disgusting.
While I'll admit that your story-verse is fairly bloodstained, and littered with corpses and the dead, it still has
a very goodexcellent representations of insanity and darkness at its finest, and that is what makes a great horror story. Not only does it pin Nightmare Moon as having a (somewhat) righteous intent, it also depicts the darkness she brings as a way to light for ponies she possess, that is, if she even possesses them. I strongly believe that, even to this point in the story, the 'insane' ponies are not really 'insane', but just think of things very differently then to other ponies. Who knows? Maybe this 'Darkness' is the light that everypony has been searching to achieve forever.Enlightenment through Darkness.
And that's way, your story is golden... a blood-stained, corpse-filled, insanity enriched gold to the point where it's Obsidian ()... but gold nonetheless.
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Now, not saying that I'm squeamish or anything but, please standby while I empty the contents of my stomach into the bin beside my desk. Thank you. *Blehak* *Kah-ack*
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Slendermane was created by Nightmare Moon like all other demons.
He, too, is a child of the demon queen, just like all others.
To be a father would mean he created other demons, but only Nightmare Moon can do that.
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I am flattered. Thank you very much.
I reached an absolute low-point on my stories and i have very few readers anymore.
At least compared to the many i had in the original MI.
So, rly, thanks for that.
3033284 U no wot ah meen...
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Enbrace the incest clopfiction...
Or not...
To correct my earlier statement:
Slendy is best big brother*. :3
3033284 Hut-tut-tut...
Don't lose faith in yourself, it's the worst thing a writer can do.
It's like an artist drawing a master-piece on a livestream, even if he has 0 people watching, does he give up? No, he keeps on drawing.
You should to, you crazy bastard.
Hey Nero, I finally decided to join FiMFiction. ^_^
Anyway, I know your very concerned about the number of readers is low at the moment but your work here is brilliant. Don't quit now that you have come so far. Readers like me, will be following this series to the end.
Nopony loves Luna more than I though.
I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter. I can't imagine what that nuclear sneezing filly is going to do next.
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Appreciate the effort. And thanks. As long as I have anyone left, I will keep writing.
Interesting to see you read the comments.
Anyway, Toxica is not rly sneezing, but i get it.
What do you think about this demon if i may ask?
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I been reading quite a few comments since during your latest chapter, after I finished reading MI1, for MI2. Sometimes I like to see what others are saying about your work.
For Toxica:
Something quite unique I would say, as I recall she was in Tartarus playing with what's left of ponies there during Twilight's capture and elimination of the changelings (I like changelings :( ). I'm not really carried with the Slendermane pony, but the way Toxica behaves it is quite interesting. There is a hint of fun in it, but mainly scary in her behavior. I'm not too interested in her yet but her full potential, I would imagine, is yet to be revealed.
That gas cloud she creates sort of reminds me of the Spiderman game on PS1 that turns humans into Symbiotes. The gas covers the streets and half below the buildings, except the rooftops. I just get the feeling the idea could had come from that. Not a bad game though.
It was a little joke that nuclear thing by the way.
My favourite OC so far had definitely got to be Despair though. Her cruelty, manipulation and... what she did to Twilight and Spike is very powerful and sad... It is possible some readers stopped because she was thought to be dead,
I hope I'm not talking to much...
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Reading the feedback and comments on my work is like candy to me.
That's my reward and i really enjoy every word, even if it is bad critique as long as it is fair.
Everytime i finish a new chapter, i keep coming back here every few hours to check if there is a new comment or some feedback. I really, really enjoy to see what others think, to see the shocked reactions, how much their minds are blown and how much the emotions i create influence them.
Dang! Toxica is a lot more powerful than I imagined, and downright creepy too!
Now I see what Lady Truesight meant in her warning to Babs.
The more that grey figure appears, the more I'm starting to believe it represents Obsidian Shards. Still just a theory though.
Taking out most the Manehatten Police and a lot of Royal Soldiers was quite a blow! I hope Manehatten can recover from this.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I'm the same. I always love to read my readers reactions too... well I guess we all do.
I got to ask, are there going to be anymore character eliminations? Also, how far is Despair going to be going in the series? Of course, no spoilers but hints would be awesome. I'm just curious.
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Yes. More characters are going to die, even familiar ones.
Now that Despair has been recreated, a lot better than before, she has a solid and very important task in Nightmare Moon's plans. She will do everything she can to fulfill her purpose. That is about all I can say without giving away major spoilers.