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All of the comments that used to be here were accidentally yeeted during the (*Edit* First *Edit*) rewrite... so don't worry you can still post comments here! It's just empty... for now
Hope to see many comments!
I'm liking the story so far, definitely haven't seen another like it, but you got a couple of things wrong with what DKs are. They're dead. They don't tire out, they don't need to eat, drink, or sleep, though they still do as their subconscious mind many be trying to cling to the lives they lead before their rebirth. For a future reference as well, DKs have to take good care of themselves as lack of hygiene can cause their bodies to decompose. With a little bit of touch ups here and there you could keep the overall plot of what happened in this chapter while better fitting it into the established lore of WoW.
Hope I helped and can't wait for the next chapter.
6094660 I know this don't worry, however the reason as to why he does have to eat/drink/sleep etc will be explained later on in the story.
Bro one word more
7658319 whaddya mean?
7661291 i cant remember
No wonder people are lloking at him in disgust becuase of the armour he is warring
I cant wait till the next chapter because mhmhm is ths story good
7859070 To be honest, a warlocks clothing is no better.
its been 4 years since the last chapter, is this canceled?
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No, just haven't had time to stop and write anything worthwhile. Everything I make seems to be not good enough to me.
10109656
oh ok, I wasn't sure cuz you've been on recently but the story its self hadn't had an update in 4 years so thanks for responding.
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No problem
I'll try and see what I can do.
10109685
It's baaaaaaaaack
:D yay
It good start cant found lot stories have a dreadknight/or death knight keep up the good work!! And never let anyone tell you anything bad i I don't want see a good story be cancelled be bad comments!!!
I'm dabbling into making longer chapters around the 6-8k range. let me know if this is something you all prefer!
It's all good !!
Well your one to talk, Celestia!!!!!!! You DON'T know what a Death Knight, or what they are truly capable of! So, she or the guard shouldn't do anything stupid either.
What's her deal with out-worlders?!
He actually has a point. You have TERRIBLE Security and Guards, compared to War of Warcraft standards. And he has faced way worse beings than you, so he ain't scared to speak his mind.
I'm loving this story so far great work, plz keep it up.
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Thanks! The support means a lot!
Well shit looks like he is going to be the doom of them after all. If something just learned the secrets of necromancy and/or creating deathknights from him then any of the many deaths to follow will be half his fault. Although it could be a good test for when the true evils come as tends to be the case.
Just finished reading it's looking interesting so keep up the good work.
Lol twilightcicle
Twilight you dun goofed
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Silly purple horse
Twilight, you dumbass!
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its not the armor it looks fucking goodit is probebly the fact that all Death Knight suffer from a cursed/urge callde iturnal hunger theurge to inflict pain and suffering abone the living if thay dont kill somthing they can go insane leafing tham to go into a murder spree ceep in minde Death Knights are still mechines of war even if thay are free of the lich king that is most likely the reason of dislike agansed Death Knights becos of fear.
wait doesn't he not have a heartbeat or did I miss something?
oh I think craps about to hit the fan, wonder what celestia is gonna do...
good idea, the only real way to slay a hydra... by cutting out the heart... since the heads just regrow... lolz
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You probably read it already by now but a later chapter does elaborate on the heartbeat.
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ya tho it does seem strange for an undead to have one at all...
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You're right... it is strange
oh twilight why...
cant wait for next chapter!
hmmm its kind of his own fault but also not. The CMC scene was hilarious. Applejack overreacted but her friend was incased in ice which is usually a very bad thing. His own fault because he instigated the whole thing by underestimating Twilight. Equally Applejacks, Twilights, and Dalan's fault , although maybe a bit more on Applejacks side.
anyway im enjoying this story so nice job.
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Yeah, all around just bad communication
Too nice
OK, I have to ask, why does almost no writers on this site give consequences to massively violent actions?
Seriously, I'm beginning to think there is something wrong with us as a community. AppleJack kick him so hard that it's basically attempted murder, including breaking his arm, and yet, nothing happens. Of course, if this follows this site's formula, sometime soon AJ will approach the guy with a "Gee, Im ah sorry fur bucking ya, ken ya ever furgive me?" and he will hold a grudge. But absolutely nothing else will happen.
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Agreed, for attempted murder, at the very least, he should have knocked out her teeth.
The Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
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Well considering the chapter ended shortly after the incident, we can't just assume everyone is going to be forgiven for this?
I'm well aware how many authors will shock value in some kind of "Suspenseful" or ooc action and cover it up with a wave of the hand and forgiveness. All i ask is to please withhold your judgment on that until after the chapters have been released
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I realize my comment may have come off a bit commanding. I just want to put fears to rest that I know problems like this exist in the community.
I'm guilty of it myself in my older fics, been writing and reading here since 2012 after all. And i don't want to repeat my same mistakes.
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I didn't think so.
The Monk
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Okay, i just didn't want to sound defensive or anything. Every bit of criticism i get i take into account when writing.
I was originally going to keep the "resolution" to this problem in this chapter but it was already getting pretty long for me (6-7k word chapters are new for me, I usually kept them much shorter) and held off so I could make it it's own chapter entirely.
Can't wait for next chapter keep up the good work!
[Volume Warning]
Another great chapter
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Thanks! Sorry for the longer than expected wait.
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That's ok