A wizard with the bloodline of the angels gets torn out of his dimension by a demon. He's now stuck in an unfamiliar castle with a fallen angel by the name of Discord around his neck, surrounded by horses that want nothing more than to kill him. Selfless "Sarge" Guardian is one of those horses. How do the two react in their different adventures? Will our protagonists ever have a normal life? Why does the wizard have an unbearable urge to eat cotton candy? Will I ever shut up? Find out in A Storm is Coming!
Chapters (6)
cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/29093313.jpg
hmmmmm
interesting
I will now Proceed to deny the populace....FIRST
on an unrelated note, you will not believe how hard it is to find a good Cutie Mark Crusaders Theme Song Cover
1770821 Funny 'cause it's true.
...wha?
More!
me gusta
I like dis!
MOAR 
BADASSERY.
That would be all.
One this guy is the most op Oc I have ever had the misfortune to encounter, no offence meant but cut his power in 1/100 and it would be more of a joy to read. as the story goes on he can get stronger but spitting in the face of a goddes and getting away with it in the second chapter is just too much. other then that your story has promise.
1802255 That's kind of the point. He's there not only as the main character, but also as a character that reveals a person's (or pony's in this case) flaws. Celestia is, in my own opinion, a bit too arrogant for her own good. The logic is there as well; Celestia isn't omnipotent or infallible. This is proven when she was defeated by Chrysalis. And besides, All Zed has done so far is snap a chain, blow open a pair of doors, and burst into flames. The spitting in a "goddess's" face and getting away with it was more a combination of insolence in dumb luck. Luna intervened before Celestia had the chance to execute him.
I like dis. Dot.
Cooooool!
cool so far although i keep on thinking of this song when reading this
Well since he (1840646) didnt claim it, First.
Good chapter. I love how he just keeps chewing out the princesses and hitting on Luna.
For my benefit, and that of your readers, I ask a favor of you. When you write in another language, could you put the translation in parentheses next to it (like this)? Otherwise I either have to ignore it until the end of the chapter, leaving me rather confused (I get the general gist of it, but it's irksome), or I have to scroll to the bottom of the page, find out the translation, then try to find where I was, and by that time my short-term memory loss kicks in.
Epic...
You forgot to translate that last word...
mmmmmm hebrew (you jewish?)
In all honesty im a guy
MUHAHA NONE GET TO CLAIM FIRST SAVE ME
On a more serious note, thanks a lot Plasmadon
, I always have trouble spacing my paragraphs out and end up with walls of text if I'm not paying close attention.
1856992 No problem, friend. I actually had trouble with it in the beginning, as well.
1857019 With everything writted from Sarge's perspective coming
Is this the meeting of the two main characters??
EDIT: First!
And now to fufill my holy duty,
2.bp.blogspot.com/-DLKMIHH57P4/Ty8t24F1I6I/AAAAAAAAAU0/9-l1bn7GRsM/s1600/last_first_first_last.jpg
Sorry about the delay in getting this up, I came down sick, as well as having about 20 or so new games to play.....
Oh i also ended up nuking Canada...Twice....and I might have started a nuclear WWIII
I just don't know what went wrong
1991192 And that's how Equestria was made!
1991169
so does that make you last or....?
Hey I just noticed something, the chapters I wrote have the chapter number in the title, the chapters you wrote don't
1991356
24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_megpvrXC3m1rjsppjo1_500.gif
1991339
dude's awesome, even though spit in Tia's face was a bit overboard. also Dicksword powered pendant. so much win.
1802255
No he's not OP
They are just weak -_-
Why do people make The main character weak??
Human magic is WAY more powerfull than pony magic -_-
Oh really, u Sirius? :D
Update when?