A young boy of fifteen is somehow transported to the world of Equestria, where colorful magic ponies reign supreme. Now, it's a race against time when he's dragged into a battle for Equestria's safety. will he prevail, or will he die trying? will he return to Earth? will he survive Ponyville in heat season? This epic adventure contains an alternate timeline that showcases Andrew Henry Gillen in all fifty-two episodes, talking wolves, and even a not-so-surprising collapse of the fourth wall!
Chapters (15)
Liking this story so far can't wait to see more
This sounds promising i will read later
Knew they would be watching
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this story is GENIUS!!
please make another chapter.
This is like the most awesome story ever!
Keep it up!
I like this story quite a bit! Keep it up!
I only have one problem with this and it's not with the story, rather the picture; all i can see is a black-haired justin beiber which I can't stand because of my utter dislike of him. Other than that, this story is quite enjoyable.
I would follow it, but having him turned into a pony immediently upon arrival killed my interest.
but keep going!
Why does it switch to third person at the end?
Still, this story is just awesome.
Rainbow Dash would probably read this, other than Daring Do's books.
Is this like a self insert? Because I'm happy to hear someone else is interested in ocarinas too.
everyone, i try to keep the POV changes to a minimum. unless it's to describe a crucial story event, like the POV change in the upcoming chapter 6, i won't do it anymore. sorry!
love it especially when u added an ocarina to the story
more! more!! more!!! lol plz update the story im hooked ur such a good author.
Well this chapter just completely destroyed the 4th wall
A young emo faggot is suddenly self-inserted into a poorly made story.
OH MERCIFUL LUNA, PLEASE, I WANT TO READ MORE. oh yeah and spike said "Me gusta."
1009310 dont be a bitch dude>>1006363this is a great story and i cant wait to tead more keep up the good work
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nice name
Whoa.
Something's bad gonna happen, something REALLY bad... I feel like Discord is not even the 1% of what i think about, and i have no idea of what i'm thinking about. Maybe it's something about repressed rage, that wants to be vented on something, and the magic of the unicorn is a good way to release this power...
Uhm, lemme think about it.
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I clicked solely for the picture, but I was disappointed (I don't like it when humans are turned into ponies).
Still giving it a like though, it seems well structured.
hey man just wondering what idea did i give u lol???
and that dream andrew had has got me grasping for more chapters to come out soon and the story im gona be working on im startin the outline for the first chapter tomorrow. Thanks again after reading your story its inspired me alot. Talk to ya soon until then Brony on!!!!
>>rainbowdash_25 the idea wasn't really an idea, but sort of a chain reaction. after you saying that you were working on a new story, i decided to read some for ideas on the next chapter. there was one that had me listening to Skillet's "Monster" and... well, it's called "Monster". i hope you can all grasp what goes on from there. new chapter hopefully posted today, everypony!
love it! Hope the 7th element has Death and a army of wolves and a keyblade with a case of a heartless/nobody and if your into bleach a hollow
>>SpikeDark i love bleach and i like ur thinking and >>Plasmadon okay i was just wonderin lol and im about ti post my first chapter after im done typing this so hope u like it. It is a lil different and just doesnt jump right into mlp but it'll get there.
I made an account just to follow this story.... I made the right choice and hope to read more of your work. I await your next chapter with angst.
Yo man this is some heavy stuff!
This ain't gonna end well...
awesome ending!!
but if he breaks free wont he break the blood pact. come on man you just dont do that crazy evil scypho path or not
i made a acount to specifically follow this story, although i would like to see a bit more development between applejack and andrew (dusk).
>>dogstar don't worry, i'm already working on it in my head. >>everypony else the new chapter might not be up tomorrow, sorry!
How does he play the ocarina with no fingers? MAGIC!
Wonderful work! And I need to ask: could you slip in a Wheel of Time reference somewhere? Just asking, it's fine if you say no for any reason.
"if i was a pegasus i would put a wing around her" isn't he a alicorn?
other than that very well done. carn't wait for the next chapter
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Vael, Celestia, and now THE DOCTOR!? He's pretty screwed ain't he?
1047863 i dont think he is a alicorn hes just a unicorn
1047863 i dont think he is a alicorn hes just a unicorn
Playing poker with a magical wolf, Death, and a demon bent on destroying everything? Sounds like every other Wednesday night to me.
add DOMINIC
3. yes, i get the refrence. 1, 2, 5.... 3 sir
Guys, i'd like to say just how sorry i am for keeping you guys waiting for a week. i think i must have writer's block or something. but no matter: romance, adventure, and an irrational fear of Vael will cure me of that!
Yes! next chapter is when the parasites come and pinkie gets rid of them
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The Grudge sounds oddly like The Rake.
I love the Wheel of Time references. And I memorized the Pandorica speech yesterday!!!! You just won an everything!
And the Angels ran because they knew who first gave that speech.
Edit: Just noticed I was in the author's note. Thank you very much!
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Buck... yeah.
PLASMADON, I can't wait for the next chapter... Also, I believe you could of dipped in a little more into the back story of Zecora's mother, but that is my personal opinion. Like i said... can't wait for the next set of tricks up your sleeve for the next chapter.
1048121 wouldn't he be screwed from just one? And you do NOT make an enemy of The Doctor.
1106718 don't forget what Pinkie could do to you if you take too long. •_•
LoL the ending
good chapter
whats screwed up i see what you did there because sweetebelle say whats fucked up probably wouldn't have gone well with rarity