The Rebel Leader in Equestria

by butterfield pancake

The CMC Spot Dion

[For those who don't know this is what Dion looks like] [Also I'm not too good at working Southern Accents so just Assume the Apple Family is talking with their Accents]

After a Couple of Hours Dion began to stir, he realized something was wrong, the bomb that he had implanted inside him definitely did blow him up to bits, however he still was very much alive.

Dion began to wonder if the Doctor had a hand in all this. Dion began to think back to when one of his old friends was blown to bits by an explosion, Doctor Beliski was somewhat weird, heck he could even bring a dead person back to life by just using one of the person's tissue samples.

However Dion suddenly realized that this couldn't be the case at all, for starters in the world he was from there was hardly and land at all, and for a fact there no apple orchards either, after all the whole world was mostly covered with water. Dion began to walk and see his surroundings. However Dion did not realize he was on top one of the Apple Trees, and he fell out of the tree and fell to the ground. The sound of Dion falling out of the tree made a huge thud sound.

After Dion hit the ground he began to groan in pain and yelled out "OWWWW"

Meanwhile the three Cutie Mark Crusaders, were inside their Clubhouse trying to decide on a new plan to get their Cutie Marks. That's when the young Pegasus Filly Scootaloo heard a loud thud coming from one of the nearby apple trees. Scootaloo tapped Sweetie Belle and AppleBloom's shoulders, in order to get their attention. Scootaloo "Girls did you hear that, loud thud near one of the Apple trees?" Sweetie Belle nodded her head "Yes I did Scootaloo, I'm gonna assume it was either Rainbow Dash, or perhaps Derpy Crashing." AppleBloom "Nah, I don't think, it was either of them for starters, after I heard the thud, I heard the voice of a stallion saying OWWW"

Scootaloo heard Footsteps coming closer to the treehouse. Dion began to speak out loud "Okay I'm now 100% sure, I'm nowhere near the city of Viper." Sweetie Belle "I've never heard of a City called Viper before." Applebloom "Umm I don't think, that guy is a pony at all." Scootaloo is confused and she asks "Why, do you say that AppleBloom?" AppleBloom 'Well for one thing I can see him, he looks more like a hairless monkey wearing the type of Armour the royal guard of Canterlot wear, except that its like all blue and the fact that thing has a small amount of brown fur on the top of its head."

Scootaloo "Let, me take a look AppleBloom." After Scootaloo takes a look, she noticed Dion and AppleBloom description of Dion is spot on."

Dion notices that he slightly injured himself after falling out of the Apple tree he was also losing a small amount of blood, not realizing the three fillies are watching him from their clubhouse, Dion says out loud "I'd better heal myself before it get's infected." Dion begins to concentrate a small amount of his energy to use his healing spell, after charging the spell he released it and yells out "Cure3!!!". The CMC are amazed that the strange creature's wound fully healed, as they now realize that this whatever it is can use magic.

Meanwhile In the Ponyville Library

Twilight Sparkle is working on a new spell that allows her to sense when somepony is using a high leveled form of magic, and her spell tells her somepony has just used a healing spell. Twilight is a little concerned since the location is at Sweet Apple Acres, and according to her knowledge the last known pony who could use any form of healing spell had died 5 centuries ago.

Comments

[Seraph973]

Needs a human tag.

[butterfield pancake]

1935295 The Mods rejected since I put a Human tag [LOL] [They would only accept it without a human tag for some stupid reason

[butterfield pancake]

And Please People if you dislike the Story Please Tell me Why

[Roan]

Uhm...
Your diction is flat and your grammar is worse.

[butterfield pancake]

1935582 I see, besides the Grammer how's the Plot?

[Roan]

Not good, not when it's unreadable. The premise is plainly bad, I'm sorry to say.

[zsewqthewolf]

make more ch plz becasue as mech as i want to read this story i have to wairt for 1 or 2 more.

[butterfield pancake]

1989237 So far I'm having a little block [I ahve to decide how to have Dion get into Ponyville without making a huge problem

[zsewqthewolf]

1993231 how about this, he walk in with his armor and weapon everyone in ponyville keep looking at hem but go into a weapon shop and buy some new gaer, than save the day buy killing a moster that was attack the town.

[butterfield pancake]

1993247 Possibly, I do have a few ideas though [He could use the morph spell

[zsewqthewolf]

1993264 ok, but ya if i was the ponies i'll be wide eyed at a warror

[butterfield pancake]

1993276 Ya know I like your idea better [I'll think about it]

[Rikkity]

A final fantasy legend III xover?! READING IT!

[Rikkity]

Meh, kinda over the top for him to shout CURE3 imo.

Meh, I highly doubt this will be update anytime soon :(

[butterfield pancake]

3387921 Well I hit a snag, I got writers Block

[Rikkity]

3390263

Well I'm doing my own crossover, and yes I have hit writers block myself. Have Dion react the way you'd think he'd react to magical talking ponies.

[Rikkity]

3390263

How about this? The CMC are obviously curious about this new creature, but Dion isn't sure about where he is. When they actually encounter each other, that's when you start having reactions. Afterwards, give Dion's reaction to them talking, like he is surprised by how they can talk.

Dion was one of my favorite party members,and I wish he'd stay a bit longer, but Borgin was way freaking OP. Also, if you'd like, have his friends make an appearance because Xagor did something or something happened on their way to his palace. Idk, make it interesting as you possibly can. Doesn't have to be perfect, just wing it and see where it goes. Take it one step at a time.

Also, have Dion ask questions as to where he is after the reactions are done.

[butterfield pancake]

3510019 That could work thanks

[Rikkity]

3511967

You are welcome. Also try to make the chapter a little longer if you can.

This isn't half bad. Then again it takes a while for people to catch on to this kind of stuff.

Which makes me happy that someone is at least doing this kind of crossover.

[SparkapocalypseVanguard]

I liked but maybe you should ask a Proof-Reader for help